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Hello everyone🤗
Today is the very first anniversary of our beloved show "Yeh Pyar Na Hoga Kam"🥳.And its a matter of great joy for all of us.So on this very special occasion I thought of giving a small gift to my lovely family.
I am, therefore, making an attempt to write an OS on AbHer for the first time😳. My hands were shaking while writing it as our great OS/FF writers have created such master-pieces that this little effort of mine seems to be very insignificant in front of them. Still I hope you guys like it for when it comes to AbHer we can like anything😳.Your honest comments are welcome😃.
Well I am making certain changes in the story.The backdrope is that AbHer are residing in VP house.Dadi brought them home after marriage so that she could make conspiracies against Leher(I am removing Bua-Alok-Surili from the story). Dadi used her evil tricks on Leher but she atlast won TN's heart(CVs totally spoiled his character but I am assuming him the old TN who was somewhat strict but nice at heart).Although
Dadi didn't accept Leher wholeheartedly yet she had to stop her evil plans against her because of TN.The Mathurs also forgave AbHer & they both are leading a happy life now.
Scene 1
So the scene is that Leher is going to her mayka for some days. She is getting ready in her room.Suddenly she sees Abeer's reflection in the mirror. He is looking at her & seems to be upset. She knew why he was sad.
Leher: "kya hua Abeer?"
Abeer: "Tum sach mein ja rahi ho?" (he sounds sad)
Leher: "Nahi hum toh yun hi mazak kar rahe the"
Abeer: "SACH!!!" (he becomes happy for a moment)
Leher: "Abeer.....tum bhi na....itne dino se tumhe pata hai ki hum apne ghar jane wale hain toh phir aaj theek jate waqt hi yeh sawal kyun puchh rahe ho?"
Abeer: (whining like a child) "Mat jao na humein chod ke"
Leher: (she couldn't resist smiling at this & moves towards him) "Kya bachchon ki tarah behave kar rahe ho.....bas kuch hi dino ke liye toh ja rahe hain hum."
Abeer: "Kitne dino ke liye?"
Leher: "aa...yahi koi 15-20 dino ke liye"
Abeer: (shocked) "15-20 dino ke liye???.....tumhara dimag toh theek hai.....hum toh mar jayenge itne dino mein"
Leher: "Abeer.....tumhe pata hai shadi ke baad ladkiyan apne mayke ek-ek mahine ke liye jaati hain...hum toh phir bhi sirf 15-20 dino ke liye ja rahe hain"
Abeer: "Haan toh aisa wahi ladkiyan kartin hain jo apne patiyon se bilkul pyar nahi kartin aur unke pati bhi nahi karte isiliye toh chod dete hain ek mahine ke liye mayke mein"
Leher: "Aisa sirf tumhe lagta hai Abeer.....tum samajh kyun nahi rahe....itne dino ke baad toh sab theek hua hai aur shadi ke baad hum pahli baar apne ghar ja rahe hain....maa papa kitni basabri se humara intzaar kar rahe honge....aur phir tumhare sath to humein zindigi bhar rehna hai to kya kuch din hum apne maa-papa ke saath nahi rah sakte?..."
Abeer: "Ab tum humein emotionally blackmail kar rahi ho....hum samajhte hain Leher ki tumhari kitni ichchha hogi apne maa-papa ke saath rehne ki....par hum kya karein....shadi ke baad kabhi tumse door nahi rahe....yeh pehli baar hai ke tum humse door ja rahi ho"
Leher: "Are..toh kaun sa London ja rahe hain hum....bagal mein hi toh ja rahe hain na"
Abeer: "Haan...bagal mein hi toh ja rahe hain na (imitating her).....keh toh aise rahi ho jaise hum sara din tumhare ghar ke bahar khade rahenge ke kab madam balcony mein aayein aur kab hum unka deedaar kerein"
Leher: "Haan...tum chaho to aisa kar sakte ho" (she says naughtily)
Abeer: "Mazak mat karo Leher....are kum se kum pehle to chhat pe hi mil lete the par ab to woh bhi nahi kar sakte....kambakhat deewar jo khadi ho gayi hai dono chhaton ke beech mein"(angrily)........ek second (in a thoughtful mood)....deewar toh hatayi bhi ja sakti hai na"
Leher: "Kya matlab?"
Abeer: "Matlab saaf hai Leher....hum samjhate hain...dekho woh deewar kyun khadi ki gayi thi...isiliye na ki dono pariwaron ke beech dushmani thi par ab toh sab theek ho gaya hai na toh phir iss deewar ki kya zarurat?...hum aaj hi do premiyon ko juda karne wali iss deewar ka naamo-nishan mita dete hain"
Leher: "Abeer tum pagal ho gaye ho kya....aaj hi hum mayke ja rahe hain aur tum ho ki....sab samajh jayenge ki tum deewar kyun hatwa rahe ho"
Abeer: "Haan toh samajh jane do na"
Leher: "Abeer pagal mat bano....Maa,Bauji,Dadi sab kya sochenge humare baare mein..."
Abeer: "Yahi ke unka lalla kitna chahta hai unki bahu ko (he winks)"😉
Leher: "Abeer har waqt mazak achha nahi lagta"
Abeer: "Hum mazak nahi kar rahe Leher...tum itna kyun sochti ho...are sab ko pata hai ke shadi se pehle hum dono chhat pe chhup-chhup ke mila karte the...aur ab to humari shadi ho gayi hai...jab hum dono ki sasural pados mein hi hai toh isska fayda uthane ka poora haqk hai humein"
Leher: "Abeer....tum aisa kuch nahi karoge"
Abeer: "Hum bilkul aisa hi karenge....kya ho jata hai tumhe kabhi-kabhi(in an irritating voice)...ek toh tum humse door ja rahi ho aur jab hum iss judai ko thoda kam karna chahte hain toh tumhe usmein bhi problem hai...tum bilkul bhi pyar nahi karti humein(he pretends to be upset)"
Seeing him upset Leher moves forward & encircles her arms around him.😳
Leher: "Naraz ho gaye humse?....achha baba theek hai tumhe jo karna hai kar lena"
Abeer: "Sach!!! (he has a huge smile on his face)"
Leher: "Haan sach....magar jo bhi karna hai humare jane ke baad hi karna"
Abeer: "Tum uski chinta mat karo...hum tumhare jane ke baad hi karenge"
They both hug.He kisses her on the cheeks & she gets shy.😳
Leher: "Achha suno apna khayal rakhna...khana time pe khana aur..."(he cuts her short)
Abeer: "Tumhe ye sab kehne ki zarurat nahi hai Leher...hum milemge na roz raat ko chhat pe...tabhi puchh lena ke humne khanna time pe khaya ki nahi"
Leher: "(blushing) tum bhi na"
Then they both leave for Mathur house.
Scene 2
Abeer returns from Mathur house. TN & Sudha were having tea. He walks to them.
TN: "Are lalla...chod aye bahu ko?"
Abeer: "Ji bauji"
Sudha: "Chai piyoge lalla.."
Abeer: "Nahi amma...hum peekar aye hain"
TN seems to be in a good mood & Abeer didn't want to miss this chance.
Abeer: (Hesitantly) "aa...bauji....hum apse kuch baat karna chah rahe the"
TN: "Bolo"
Abeer: "Bauji...aa...woh darasal...hum soch rahe the ke upar chhat pe jo deewar kahdi ki gayi thi dono gharon ke beech mein...kyun na hum use girwa dein"
TN turns his eyes towards Sudha & smiles slowly.Sudha does the same. He, then, pretends to be serious.
TN: "Kya baat hai lalla...aaj achanak tumhe uss deewar ko girane ki kyun sujhi?"
Abeer: "Nahi bauji..hum to kaafi dino se soch rahe the ke ab jab dono gharon ke beech dushmani hi nahi rahi to deewar ki kya zarurat...par humein fursat hi nahi mil rahi thi"
TN: "Haan...hum toh bhul gaye the ke tumhe aaj hi fursat mili hai" (he speaks slowly)
Abeer: "Ja...ji...kuch kaha apne???"
TN: "Nahi nahi kuch nahi"
Abeer: "toh phir (looking at Sudha)....hum aaj hi baanke se keh ke girwa dein deewar?"
TN: "Theek hai lalla...ab jab tum ne soch hi liya hai to karwa hi do ye kaam"
Abeer: "Theek hai bauji...hum chalte hain phir" (he becomes super duper happy & goes from there addressing Baanke)
TN: "Panditayan....hum sab jante hain ke yeh tumhara lalla kyun deewar hatwane ki baat kar raha tha"
Sudha: "Jaane dijiye na...ye hi toh umar hai bachchon ki yeh sab karne ki"
TN: "Woh toh hum jante hain par ek baat apne lalla ko samjha dena....sardiyan shuru ho gayin hain....raat ko chhat pe thand hoti hai....bahu se keh dena ke kuch garam kapde pehan ke aaye chhat pe"
Sudha: (Smiling) "Theek hai hum keh denge"
Later on Baanke calls some labourers & the wall is removed. Abeer calls up Leher & asks her to come to the roof in the night when he gives her a missed call.She agrees.
Scene 3(Chhat Pe Mulaqat): coming soon😳
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