ArMu OS : Mukhi ji ki Mukhiyani! (UPDATED) - Page 4

Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Lovely OS Amreen 😊. Loved that nothing was compromised in terms of characters or the dialogs.You definitely worked hard to write this OS.I appreciate this 👏 That part were Aru tries to say sorry made me recall the ArMu scene when Mukhi was in her office to tell her he is ready to keep her as matchmaker again & Aru's boss told her good you asked forgivness.Aru said to Mukhi "Maine kab maafi maangi?" Mukhi said "Tu kaise maafi maang sakti hai abhi bargad ke ped pe aam nahi lag sakta ne" 😆 OS us written with such clarity that it is not hard to literally imagine the characters with their exact expression according to situation.Loved ArMu scenes !!! bedroom scene,fall & catch scene & lunch scene.Loved the last line two about Aru making place in Mukhi's heart.

Thank you dear 😳
It makes me immensely happy that you noticed the dialogues I wrote. I wanted the dialogues to have a comic touch just like the show.
Thanks again ❤️

Originally posted by: C0raline

Hey,

I LOVED your review too. I get the errors part too. When we write and there is no beta reader (someone who is fairly good with the language), reading it more than once does not help. We tend to develop blind spots for errors.

Love

Hey Coraline,

Thanks for replying on my behalf. I liked how you put forth your views regarding typos and errors 😃

Originally posted by: mannu100

what a magnificent piece of art!![/DIV]

loved every bit of it.!!

expectation has even rosed more...

brilliant. want more like this!!👏

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: Debashri123

Very well written...full points on the intricate detailing...loved it!! Don't stress out to meet deadlines...take your time...but come up with something as nice or even better. Good job Ishqbaaz..well done!!👏👏

Thanks a lot hon ❤️

Originally posted by: oneside-obsess

Very beautifully written .. I can literally imagine them speaking these dialogues .. i loved it.. Plz write more :) wonderful os . :))

Thanks yaara 😳

Aww Amreen this is so beautiful !! Keep posting :) so many talented people we have in this Forum !!! Just lovely :)

Originally posted by: Debashri123

Very well written...full points on the intricate detailing...loved it!! Don't stress out to meet deadlines...take your time...but come up with something as nice or even better. Good job Ishqbaaz..well done!!👏👏

Yes! Not to worry on deadlines. Good content is more important than the time on which it is delivered.

About deadlines a quote by one of my favourite writer, Douglas Adams.

"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by."

Beautifully written! I can imagine characters with your writing ''

this is great piece of writing...i loved the use of gujrati language.

Originally posted by: Sree.b

Aww Amreen this is so beautiful !! Keep posting :) so many talented people we have in this Forum !!! Just lovely :)

Thanks 😊