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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
wow its realli good 👏
continuee 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#12
Part-5......the man who scares pooja is none other than
ashmit.ashmit searches 4 pooja & he fails in that &
goes.pooja was shivering & was wet. she hides hersef in
ronit's empty class.ronit cumes & catches her from the
back.thinking that its ashmit,she screams.ronit was
shocked:pooja,what happened?why r u screaming? pooja
was relieved seeing ronit.she weeps:ronit..she falls
into his arms.just 4 a moment both of them 4get
themselves. they become concious & they feel guilty.both
of them feel difficult 2 look at each other.finally
ronit gets fed up of this situation & talks 2 her:why r
u looking so dull pooja?usually u r so cheerful.1st
time u r seen dull.what makes u upset? P:i saw a
terrible figure.he came 2 our college in search of me.he
won't do anything here,bcoz he pretends 2 be decent b4
others.but i dared 2 see him. R:who is he?
P:ashmit. R:who is he? anjali:my only
brotherinlaw. she tells him the story.poornima is her
luvly sister.they r like friends. poornima falls in luv
with ashmit,a middle class guy.they were gr8 luvers,who
can't liv without each other.they get married.ashmit
becomes pooja's dearest jeeju.due 2 debt pooja loses
her house ,she & her mom goes 2 stay with poornima.her
motherinlaw was terrible who always gossips about
poornima.poornima gives b'th 2 a child.slowly slowly ashmit
loses his interest in poornima listening 2 his mom's
words.he started luving pooja. pooja cries :now he is
after me ronit.my poor didi...she nos that.i don't want
2 see her cry.so i go 2 my friend's house during
holidays.but ashmit used 2 cum there & make
problems..annie used 2 help me .but now she hates me.i
don't no where 2 stay.i'm scared 2 go 2 my house. i thot
of staying in a hostel.but ppl start gossiping. ronit-pooja go out.pooja was shocked 2 see ashmitthere
b4 them. A:who is this guy? P:my friend.
A:simply a friend?or...P:thats none of ur
business. A:ur voice is cuming up.may be the support
given by this guy. R:yes,i support her 4 standing
against devils. ashmit becomes angry:what did u say? he
beats ronit.ronit beats him back.in that mood slok
tries 2 beat pooja.but ronit cumes:don't touch herif
so,i'll not think twice 2 finish u. A:now i'm
going,but pooja can't escape from me. he goes. pooja's
eyes got filled up with tears. R:don't worry,he
won't desturb u again. P:bcoz of me,u had 2 take
pain from him.he beat u heavily. R:its ok..its not
a pain.it was a pleasure 2 be adventorous like a hero 4
u. pooja smiles. R:pooja,can i save u? P
:how? R:i can't do anything now.bcoz i don't hav
anything.when i get a job....if i call u ,will u cum
with me? pooja was shocked:due 2 sympathy,plz don't
take such big decision. R:its not bcoz of
sympathy.when u r there with me...i've relief...a kind
of feeling which can't be explained.u r my
strenght...pooja...i'm serious...really i luv u
...pooja sMILes.she catches ronit's hands.they dream
performing 2 the song hum....hum tum.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
I love it plz u have to keep writing.... 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
PART-6......pooja-ronit go 2 her house when ashmit &
his mom had gone sumwhere.pooja's mom sudha & poornima
like ronit 4 his sweet behaviour. R:i luv pooja
very much,our's is not an ordinary campus romance. they
were shocked.pooja was tensed about their reaction. sudha & poornima smile. R:i'll find a job soon after
the college.then will u allow me 2 marry her? sudha's
eyes got filled up,she smiles.ronit-ppoja were
relieved. both of them go out.Poornima :i think ronit is
sincere.he won't be like ashmit.he'll look after her well.
P:when u get job only u'll marry me no...how long
shud i wait? ronit smiles. P:why can't u try 4
IAS? ronit laughs:4 that money is needed.where is
money? pooja felt sad. she starts saving money 4
ronit's IAS exam.she does'nt tell this 2 him.she keeps
it as a suspense. Poornima:pooja,plz be careful.u
shud'nt feel later that u wasted money 4 nothing.do u
want 2 spend this much money 4 ronit? pooja loses her
control:yes,i want 2 spend 4 him.didi,u used 2 support
our luv.but what happened now? Poornima:still i'm not
against ur luv.but sumthing makes me tensed. P:i no
ronit well.every1 won;t be like ur hubby. poornima
becomes sad. pooja feels sorry:didi,i did'nt tell like
this 2 hurt.i just expressed what i felt.sorry didi...
poornima:u did'nt tell anything wrong...she hugs pooja.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#15
part-7.....the college life get over.pooja tells ronit
2 go ahead with IAS exam.
R:but money is a problem.
P:u don't worry about
that.i've saved money 4 that. ronit was shocked:pooja,u
did this much 4 me?
pooja,no...i can't...P:why?u
hav complex 2 take it
from me.R:pooja,i don't want
2 trouble u in the
name of luv.i no ur effort 2
earn money.i shud not
exploit u if i luv u.
P:...if u really luv me,u
shud accept it. ronit's eyes
rose up. he accepts it
& go 2 write the exam.pooja
waits 4 him 2 return.she
wears a yellow sari & looks at
the mirror.she feels that
ronit cumes from the back &
carries her around.she
becomes shy. she goes out &
sits near a small river.she
hears ronit's voice.she was
surprised 2 see
him:ronit,when did u cum?
R:2day
morning.immediately i came
here.poornima didi said that u
r here.1st time i'm seeing u
in a proper sari.u look gr8
in this sari. pooja
smiles:oh,this river is a hinder.i
want 2 cum near 2 u.but i
don't no how 2 cross it.i
dunno swimming. he:its ok.he
walks & swims & cumes 2
pooja.unexpectedly he takes
her in his arms & walks
around.pooja was
thrilled:ronit,actually i dreamt of
u.u carried me like this.
he:really? she stands down.
P:how was ur exam? R:no
hope. she becomes
dull:why?udid'nt study?
he:ya,but others were more
brilliant. P:i'm sure that
god will hear my
prayer.u'll win. ronit
smiles:pooja,nobody has dun this
much 4 me like u. he hugs her.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#16
part-8...while pooja was sitting in her house,she hears
ronit calling from outside:poojaaaaaaa...pooja was
surpised 2 see him there.
R:the result came.i
won..pooja was so happy that
she 4got everything &
hugged him.this was seen by
ashmit's mom. she thinks:let
ashmit cum back after his
trip.i'l tell him
everything.these stupid girls'
plans will be spoiled.
she laughs. pooja goes out in
search of job.but she
fails.she was tired & cumes
back in the evening. she was
dull:my efforts did'nt
work.did'nt get any job.
pooja's mom:pooja,there is a
sweet news 4 u.it'll make u 4get
this worry. pooja was anxious
2 no. poornima smiles.
P:i don't hav the patience 2
wait anymore.plz tell
me..r u all teasing me?
mom:never! poornima:here sum
ppl came.ronit's parents & his
dadi. pooja was
surprised. poornima:they asked
whether we'll giv u 2
them. they want u & ronit 2
get married. pooja becomes
shy. she runs away...dreams
about ronit...song in which
they perform:tum pass
aaye......ashmit's mom tells him
whatever happened here
concerning R-P.he
becomes angry & he beats
poornima.mom cud'nt save her.
poornima:i no why u r angry.u
won't get pooja,thats
why.. ashmit:yes,i want
pooja.i don't leave her 4 that
stupid ronit. poornima:ronit
is not stupid.he is so nice
that he luves pooja very
much.he'll save her from this
hell. pooja comes hearing
this.her eyes got filled up
with tears.ashmit beats
poornima again. pooja cud'nt
tolerate it. she shouts at
A:if u beat my sister
again,honestly i'll die.
ashmit stops beating her:ok,but
don't dream about ur wedding
with ronit.its not going 2
happen. he goes out.
pooja-ppo*nima-sudha start
crying.they hug each pooja
cud'nt tolerate this & she
shouts at her:i no that u
torture my mom & sister.if u
repeat it,u'll see my true
color.i'll break u into
pieces.i'm not like didi 2
tolerate everything. she
pretends that she's going 2
beat her.that lady got scared.
music287 thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#17
Great Story. keep it up. 😛
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#18
part-9...Pooja goes 2 ronit's house 4 the party which
is conducted 2 celebrate ronit's success.she was treated
well by ronit & his family.but when other guests cum
they all go 2 them. then cumes ronit's childhood
friend;the rich mandy.she talks 2him very freely.pooja
did'nt lke the freedom she was thing 2 him.pooja feels
lonely.she begins 2 go.but unexpectedly ronit hold her
hand.she feels very happy. but she goes & stands at the
verandah.ronit cumes:pooja,why r u standing here?cum &
enjoy the party. P:no ronit,i don't hav any mood.
R:i no pooja,u feel isolated here.but don't feel
like that as long as i'm alive. his words were touching
2 her. she:ronit,will u luv me 4ever? he:ofcourse.
she:but seeing my sister's life i doubt about it.b4
marriage didi& jeeju were so close that they were even
willing 2 die 4 each other.but now he wants only her 2
die. R:all the men r not like ashmit. she:i no ..i
trust u,i no that u'll never be another ashmit.
R:pooja,if i die also i'll continue luving u.
she:plz don't talk about death.bcoz i want u 2 be alive
4 me.u r my breath. ronit smiles. P:i'm so happy
2hear ur sincere words..if we were alnoe i wud've kissed
u. R:thats ok,no 1 will see,giv me a kiss. pooja
becomes shy & smiles:no way....she runs away from
him.his eyes follows her & smiles. ronit's family hav
sum debt left.his dad Inder Gujaral tells:there is only 1 way 2
escape. R:whats that? I:u hav 2 marry mandy,only
her money can save us. ronit was shocked.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
what??????????ronit marry mandy???????nahiiiiiiii.....................

jasmine...u cnt do this!!change the track. 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
PART-10...Ronit loses his control:papa,how cud u ignore
pooja?u 4got what he has dun 2 us?she is the reason why
i'm here now. dad:i no that,but our
circumstance..R:i don't want 2 hear anything.
dadi:ronit is rite.he shud'nt cheat pooja. ronit
reveals his luv 4 pooja 2 mandy.mandy was very sad:its
ok ronit.i understand.i'm fond of u,bcoz of ur true luv
4 pooja.but plz see me as ur gud friend. R:i always
saw u like that.still i'm. mandy smiles:thank u ronit.so
a gud friend shud help the friend when he is in
need.rite?so i'll giv u sum money.ur debt will be over.
ronit was shocked. M:don't be shocked ronit.4 this
money only ur dad forced u 2 marry me.but i'm telling u
that u don'r hav 2 marry me 4 this.its just a friend'd
help. he:thanks 4 ur big heart mandy.but i can't recieve
it. M:thats ur complex ronit.if u don't pay
money,u'll lose everything..then ho can u bring anjali 2
ur life?she'll suffer along with u.u want 2 see it?
R:no..i won't allow her 2 suffer. M:then u
recieve this money. ronit accepts her money. pooja's
mom sudha cumes 2 see ronit:ashmit is becoming really
cruel.he won't allow 2 conduct this wedding.ashmit will
not be there 4 2 days.b4 he cumes back plz take pooja
away. sudha cries. R:tell anjali 2 get ready.i'll
cum 2mrrow 2 take her home. sudha becomes happy. ashmit's
mom finds it out & informs him.pooja was getting
ready.she hears the sound of a vehcle:ronit has cum.but
unfortunately it was not ronit,but ashmit.

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