plz read {fan-fiction]part-3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guyz im back with part 3 of ye meri life hai.i got som strong responces from u guyz. b4 i start i would like 2 say somthin 2 my budds.most of u all want ashmit and pooja 2gethr,and i do understan how u feel abt thier relationship,and i also hope for thm 2 be 2gethr,but in order 4 me 2 entertain u guyz with lots of masala i hav 2 put ronit and pooja 2gethr 😊 ,

GUJRAL PARIVAAR AT THE HOSPITAL
evrybody is shocked at poojas decition.inder talks 2 pooja abt this responsibility.he tells her tht this isot a joke i kw u are my bahu but u cant giv poornimas child yr lov.u hav yr own family own husband and 1 day u will hav own kidz wht r u goin 2 do thn?,
pooja sayz papa. meinne didi keliye kuch bhi kersaktihu.cahe wo sabse bera balidan ho.whn this child growz up he will nevr find out tht hez mothr passed away whn he waz born he will be known as my son and ,pooja stops for a second she thinks abt ronit and ashmit

inder says why dod u stop who do u want the fathr of the child 2 be ashmit or ronit???
? 😭 pooja with tears in her eyes.

MAYA ,BUBBLES, AND VICKY TALK
MAYA IS REALLY WORRIED SHE SAYZ IF THT POOJA accepts the baby we will nevr be able 2 through her out of the house
wht are we goin 2 do vicky bhaiya.

vicky sayz don worry behna pooja did say tht she will be the childs mothr,but she has 2 chooose 1 person 2 be the childs father,and she will ahv 2 options ashmit or ronit.
don worry maya i think she will take her statement back.

gusse mein admi kya kya kehdeta hai iska metleb yeh to nahi ke woh ye sab karega.

bibbles sayz well wht if she really means it ?thn wht are we goin 2 do
vicky sayz{hey guyz i kw u will be really mad at me for this but kya kare pardon me plzzzzzzzz}he sayz tht we will hav 2 create a misunderstanding between pooja and ashmit.we will ahv 2 proove 2 ashmit tht pooja still lovs ronit and whts him back.

maya and bubbles get shocked and say are u crazy wht if asmit divorces pooja? thn she will probably marry ronit bcuz of the child

vicky givs a big and huge luogh.he sayz u barely kw pooja evn if ashmit decides 2 divorce her.she will nevr marry any1 becuz shez not tht type of ladki.she will nevr marry ronit mark my words 😡. maya is relefed.


gujrals take poornimas body home

maya acts like she is reaLLY SAD 4 POORNIMA.maya is tryn 2 convince ronit 2 talk.ronit is in a big shock and is not responding 2 anyhting.the whole family is worried abt ronit.

poojas mom and dad

pooja tells her parents 2 arrive at gujral house as soon as possible.poojas mom waz really tense abt pooja.she knew somthin is wrong bcuz in the morining she had dropped somthin in the floor and tht indicates tht somthin bad will take place.

[COLOR=ORANGE]poojas parents see poornimas dead bodyR]
whn thy reach gujral house poojas mom and dads see evry1 wearing white and thy look all worried and depressed.

whn poojas dad askes pooja tht wht happened here?why did she call thm here?
pooja points at poornimas body. soon as thy look thy get shocked and stunned poojas DAD GETS A MAJOR HEART ATTACK AND POORNIMAS MOM stares at the body.evrybody gets scared whn rasik gets an heart attack.



the end 😊 hope u guyz liked my part-3 as soon as i get som responces i will post more parts and with alot of accitement.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey great continuation. im happy u started this its really interesting. i hope the real show heads towards this direction.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great stori soo far i luvv it 😃 Hope ronit marries pooja 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Gr8 plzzzzzzzzz continue and try not 2 get poo and ronit 2 gether plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
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not liking Poornima dying, why is everyone hating on Poornima , I dont get it, Pooja is soo annoying, who cares about her getting with Rohnit, I dont mean to be mean but I feel like Poornima gets hatted on alot and she is just doing what she feels is neccessary to keep her place in Gujral house, I agree that she is a bit of a follower of Maya, but Maya brainwashed her to believe things that arent true, please just be respectful to other s that may like poornima as a character. Thanks
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ayush_ke pari well i nevr said anything mean abt poornima
and i do agree wiht u we shouldnt say anything abt any character since thr are othr ppl who like thm.so be nice guyz 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey change dat..i dun want ronnit to marry pooja..the story is very gud though..keep it up..
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i love it! its awesome. and thenks for keeping pooja and ronit together. u rock!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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the story is interesting.but i dnt want poornima to die.........anyway,keep the good work going!!!

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