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Aman adjusted his collar and hair in front of the mirror. He had never felt so conscious about his appearance ever before, until a certain Miss - now his wife - told him that he had cute brown eyes and was handsome.

He wore a blue tshirt, her favourite colour.

He should look the best of all today, so that her eyes rest only upon him. Afterall, his wife was returning to Junaid Manzil after a whole 2 days!

"Aman!", Dadi called him from downstairs.

He quickly raced down the stairs with his hands brushing past the railing.

"Ji Dadi?"

"Beta woh Roshni ka phone aaya tha, woh Dargaa jaa rahi hai, tu usi wahi se lele"

He smiled at this news.

In no time, he was on his way to the Dargaa. He couldn't help but smile while remembering their first meeting there.

He parked his car, this time outside the complex (šŸ˜†) and walked inside. The atmosphere looked festive with a lot of people dressed extravagantly and special drapes and lighting laced all over the walls.

He scanned the ground to find her. His eyes landed on one form far away, behind a silky curtain, distributing sweets amongst children. It had to be Roshni, with the amount of commotion surrounding her. Her shadow was enough for him to recognize her in a million of people.

Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage

Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey...

He managed his way past the whole lot of people. Just when he had thought he was almost there, a unanimous chant started echoing from everywhere and people rushed to assemble in the main hall. He was pushed aside, much to his dismay. He too, decided to go with the flow and reached the main hallway.

Everyone sat in reverence. The prayer started.

He couldn't help but think about the looming danger in their lives at this point of time. He could only ask for the safety of his family's and Roshni's life. Yes, they had to do it together, moreover she had to face this for him, and he felt so guilty about it. He would do everything in his capacity to save her. He closed his eyes and touched his forehead to the ground. He promised himself that he will protect her, till he is alive and breathing. He wouldn't think twice before laying down his life for her, no matter what. She deserved to live and be happy for the caring, generous woman that she was. The mere thought of harm befalling on her due to him seemed unbearable.

His own problems seemed so unimportant at this point.

Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye

Sang tere, pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun...

He remembered all the instances where she had risked her life for him and his family. It was his responsibility now to make sure that nothing happens to her. Just one day more and then she'll be away - and safe, from him and the Jinn.

His eyes started searching for her yet again.

He saw her hands folded in front of her face in the distance. His ring was shining on her finger so adorably.

Everyone got up and greeted each other. He saw her hands part ways to reveal her face. He could feel her soft gaze on him as their eyes met.

Raanjhana... naino ke teer chal gaye

Saajna... saanson se dil sil gaye

Palkon mein chupa loon, seenay mein samaa loon

Tere ang ang rang mera bole

Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye

Sang tere, pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Sajdaa, tera Sajdaa

Karoon main tera Sajdaa...


Their eyes met, inspite of a hundred hurdles between them. He got up slowly started walking towards her.

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Note: So as suggested by Madz, I had this concept of Sajdaa on Roshni Aman. I dunno how many will like it at this point of time, nevertheless, for my satisfaction, I'm posting this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful One-Shot...😊

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Forgetting everything for five minutes, I enjoyed the read. Beautifully written. ā¤ļø

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Mahi, am really glad you wrote this.

Loved the OS, beautifully written and thought so well. Way you thought about all details for VM, way to go. Lyrics went in sync with the description, and memories and their last gaze, awesome!

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Originally posted by: Madhura..

Mahi, am really glad you wrote this.

Loved the OS, beautifully written and thought so well. Way you thought about all details for VM, way to go. Lyrics went in sync with the description, and memories and their last gaze, awesome!

I wanted to mix Yoon Shabnami too in between. Didn't add cause absence of visuals would make it confusing and presently it was unwanted in the story. The scene went like :

It was Eid celebration at the Dargaa

Dekho Chaand aaya, Chaand nazar aaya

Aman would stare at Roshni

Aaya aaya aaya, Dekho Chaand nazar woh aaya

Aaya aaya aaya, haan aaya sharmayaa

The dressing up scene where she comes out of the dupatta

Tu bhi aaja, sawariyaa

The song is so so beautiful Madz. I wish I can make this, it'll give a whole new vibe, rather than just stating things.

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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

I wanted to mix Yoon Shabnami too in between. Didn't add cause absence of visuals would make it confusing and presently it was unwanted in the story. The scene went like :

It was Eid celebration at the Dargaa

Dekho Chaand aaya, Chaand nazar aaya

Aman would stare at Roshni

Aaya aaya aaya, Dekho Chaand nazar woh aaya

Aaya aaya aaya, haan aaya sharmayaa

The dressing up scene where she comes out of the dupatta

Tu bhi aaja, sawariyaa

The song is so so beautiful Madz. I wish I can make this, it'll give a whole new vibe, rather than just stating things.

Yes, it would.

But thank you so much for narrating, sounds beautiful. Wish the show gave us such meaningful tracks. But we can always have stories or creations for how we would like to see.

I want to really appreciate you for so much thought process though for VM, thinking about it many times I don't even put so much thoughts and still make VMs.

But you know certain songs and times, it just clicks.

I would actually suggest you Mahi to go ahead with this VM if you get a chance, it would be a short one too.

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Originally posted by: SapSur

Beautiful One-Shot...😊

Thank you so much!😳

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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Forgetting everything for five minutes, I enjoyed the read. Beautifully written. ā¤ļø

Thanks a lot Harshu. This means everything to mešŸ¤—

Love you.

Muahhhh

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Originally posted by: Madhura..

Mahi, am really glad you wrote this.

Loved the OS, beautifully written and thought so well. Way you thought about all details for VM, way to go. Lyrics went in sync with the description, and memories and their last gaze, awesome!

Thank you so much Madz! Well I'd like to thank you first cause it was your idea. I would've never thought of turning a VM idea into an OS šŸ˜†

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it!

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Originally posted by: Madhura..

Yes, it would.

But thank you so much for narrating, sounds beautiful. Wish the show gave us such meaningful tracks. But we can always have stories or creations for how we would like to see.

I want to really appreciate you for so much thought process though for VM, thinking about it many times I don't even put so much thoughts and still make VMs.

But you know certain songs and times, it just clicks.

I would actually suggest you Mahi to go ahead with this VM if you get a chance, it would be a short one too.

I've never made a VM so I can only design scenes in my mind, hence all this effort of organizing and thinking about scenes. šŸ˜†

Exactly. When I heard Yoon shabnami, Roshni Aman instantly struck me and I felt I should do something this.

Let me see if I can.😳

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