Rise of Ayanah - A Ficlet - Page 4

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Don't reply this way anymore. Can't quote. 🤢

I had planned this a little different. This turned out a little different but somehow, this leaves a lot of scope to write more to this. Something like #AliceInTheWonderland. Here - #RoshniInTheJinnLand. 😆

Cold is annoying. Take care. 🤗

Originally posted by: VSCFan

Oh my god , this is terrific! I experienced all the emotions in your write up! Stress, Laughter, sadness, pain, love, sacrifice!

You are amazing. keep witting. I am so glad i joined this forum.

Thank you very much, for such kind words. I am really glad to hear that you had a nice read. 🤗

Originally posted by: VSCFan

Ok..one more time this is terrific but please please write another one where Aman is saved! I can't bear the thought of Aman being taken by Jinn forever!

Sooner or later, your wish will be granted. 😆❤️

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Exactly! Harshu ne sabko latka diya!

Not fair :(

Dramatic much, eh? 😆

this was TERRIFIC !!

would love to read more and more.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

I see. Thank you, Ananya!

🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

this was TERRIFIC !!

would love to read more and more.

Thank you, Ritzy! 😳

And here we meet again, Harshu!! 🤗🤗. You know that I have always been a fan of your works. Your ability to transform mere words into myriad of emotions is commendable and my primary reason of admiration. With RoshAn growing on you, I would be delighted to read more of your works. Keep in touch!

P.S. - How's your health? I hope all's good. Take care.

Love,

Nivi

From the posts here, am assuming your name is Harshada. Correct me, if I am wrong.

You have penned the story, beautifully. You have a way with words, wherein you write such that you can visualize the scenes. That being said, you have taken many traits from the show and the story had a fimy touch to it, ofc since it's a fairytale. What I loved here, is Jinn capturing Aman and giving a tough fight for he has a lot of power and Roshni decides to fight back, of course.

-Madz

Originally posted by: Nivedita_SS

And here we meet again, Harshu!! 🤗🤗. You know that I have always been a fan of your works. Your ability to transform mere words into myriad of emotions is commendable and my primary reason of admiration. With RoshAn growing on you, I would be delighted to read more of your works. Keep in touch!

P.S. - How's your health? I hope all's good. Take care.

Love,

Nivi

Gosh, so long, Nivi. So long. How have you been? 🤗 Health is okayish, I would say. Not too good. Not too bad. Still struggling to make it from one day to the other but I guess, I have got used to it now.

Eh and here comes Nivi with all her forever favorite kind and sweet words. Thanks a ton for all of them.

Lots of love. ❤️