Originally posted by: Albelipari
Oh my !! 😯 I'm speechless .. What was this I'm spellbound .. It was beyond my imagination take a bow girl 👏 honestly don't know what to say .. It's just the beginning of the story and I'm helplessly hooked with it .. This was simply magic and you are a magician .. I seriously mean it when I say this is the best I've come across I can vouch that this journey is going to blew up our mind and I'm so ready for the ride
Kop Kop Laalchi Reader, I am glad you enjoyed this update and my writing so much. But I am no magician just a mere storyteller who finds an incomprehensible depth and beauty in Samaina's relationship and journey. Its readers like you who inspire to pen down the storm in my mind.
The way you've shaped the characters of samaina is commendable 🙆 sameer resembles a person who has lost all hopes for his life and he himself is responsible for his miseries and on the other side naina has compromised with her life and come into terms that her love was not forever my heart goes out for both of them
Kop kop dear, for me stories are character oriented. I like getting into their headspace and facing the complications and flaws they have. Sameer is in a shell where he allows nothing to penetrate whereas Naina has strengthened herself through her heartbreak.
I'm having mixed feelings seeing sameer's condition .. I want to lash out on him and at the same time console and pity on him this is the beauty of your writing making the reader feel a variety of emotions for your characters .. I'm very proud of naina she I'd giving back to sameer making him aware of his deeds .. She has really emerged into a self confident and self sufficient women and off course as as sameer said beautiful and sexy
I am glad you are having complicated feelings about Sameer's character. This dilemma of yours resembles Sameer's mind which is torn between running away and running towards Naina. I ahve followed Naina's maturity from the show to here. During the breakup track and the recent tracks she has shown a sensitivity, maturity, and not to mention strength which was commendable.
With sameer my heart also broke reading naina's letter the only solace sameer snatched away from him .. What I loved was despite of breaking all ties with naina still his core character is intact .. He doesn't enjoy company and habits of his new " friend" group rather they are just an excuse to pass his time .. Naina's memories are so deeply intact within himself that no girls interest him
Yes I felt it would be more realistic than have Sameer become a complete playboy. Evevn in the breakup track everytime he was with Sunaina, he was only remembering Naina. He was with her to make Naina jealous. I fully retain my faith that if Naina had left he wouldnt have been able to touch or even look at another woman. The man was going to take up sanyaas for gods sake.
What a meeting of our lovely leads after 6 years full of action drama romance and passion .. " aap " from naina was no less than a slap to sameer and " sameerji " was no less I can't tell how much I enjoyed this conversation full of sass and sameer's comebacks made it even more passionate
Naina's formality with Sameer is a defence mechanism for her but also is an absolute torture for Sameer. It sets up a distance between them that bothers him to no avail. Just wait and watch how this aap changes.
Love story of two lost lovers is going to be so passionate .. I'm saying this once again this story is going to do wonders and special thanx for such a long update
I really hope it lives upto the hyped expectations you have of it. It is a difficult plot to manage but I hope you will keep the love coming.
Always waiting for your updates
Love
Laalchi reader
Kop Kop Laalchi Reader for your detailed review and feedback on my story. Keep pouring your love like you have on my work. Next update coming today.
Bundles of love,
Sims
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