A SHORT STORY :-MR.KUDKUDKUMAAR & HIS NAINA DEVI

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AnjaanMishra

@AnjaanMishra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Congrats ,

Aapne toh pahli ball pe six maar diya ,

Kya OS likha hai bahot khoob ,

Ye Sameer kabse anil Kapoor ka fan hogya , movie Mai heroine pkka

Madhuri Dixit hogi 😆

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

My dearie Labhya sbse phle bhut badi pappi for turning a goldie

Congratulations my baby

I saw this talent of yours in the scenario you had presented but ab full fledged form main bhi dekh lia

this was something different and new

I thoroughly loved it

Naina will always stand by his side whether he is happy or sad

And I am really happy for him that he has someone now to share anything and everything.

Labhya l am in awe

And you are planning to continue na

I really want Sameer Naina and Kabir to meet once.

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Suparna13

@Suparna13

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Congo Labhya for turning goldie!!! Aur ye to dhamaka tha. And obvio you should continue this, ye bhi koyi puchne wali baat hai. Aur is update mai omg!! you killed it. I eager to know more about kabeer. Waiting waiting!!

With love,Suparna

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Sneha

@Snehapandey12

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Very good attempt 👏. Arryy . ... Mja AA gya yarr please continue its gonna be rockking one 😊😊apreciated your work go ahead and rock with the help of your updates .

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lavani1

@lavani1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Hey labhya...

Great writing.. I just loved it. And plz continue it Yaar. Waiting for your next update

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Richa0305

@Richa0305

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Sweet and simple.

Loved it

👏

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Abhijeet Nanda

@becool97

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

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Wow labhya.😲Mere pass shabd nahi hai varnan karne ke liye. It was simple,cute and sweet.Kaun kehta hai kii tum likh nahi paati,Tum to chuppe rustom nikle yaar. Der se ane ke liye maafi aur wajah tum jaante hi ho😆

I loved naina in this. Yeh waali naina apna pati ko kabooo mein rakhna jaanti hai. Tadpa tadpa ke maze le rahi hai. Aur is behnji par har barr sameer latoo ho jaata hai😊

Sameer ka emotion phoot-phoot ke baahar aa raha tha. main ladka hoon isiliye samjhta hoon😉

Loved kabeer's story and shaitaan sameer. waiting to know ki use kya hua

Keep writing😊 dear

Edited by becool97 - 6 years ago