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So this is gonna be my first ever write up after i posted one short scenario...
Well to be honest I never thought that i am going to write something but their are lot many writers who inspired and motivated me directly and indirectly .. And now here i am posting my first ever full fledged write up.. I also want to give a bow to all the writers here who post very amaziiinggg stories which are craved by laalchi readers like me... But today writing my first ever post i realized that how difficult it is for all of you to write the beautiful story and present it to us...
This update is dedicated to every writer of this forum because it is you guys who inspired me to write ...
Enough of my badbad
Following is the piece about
MR.KUDKUDKUMAAR & HIS NAINA DEVI
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THE PHOTOGRAPH
It was a calm friday night but inside krishna kaustubhi two souls were in hurry.. sameer was being impatient and shouting at his wife from the living room to come down while the said person was busy upstairs in her room searching something ...
"Naina Naina where you baba we're getting late for the movie yaar... I dont want to miss the entry of Anil Kapoor ... come
fast the show is of 9:15 ...I told you but still you're not ready",sameer shouted with all his strength sitting on the L-shaped sofa munching the chakliis he got from his sasu maa
Esa kya taiyaar ho rahi hai...kahi fir se vo O BAII ki dii hui sadi hui saree na pehen le... devi kahi ki... he thought
"Coming sameer ", naina answered "its only 7 pm mr. kudkudkumaar we will reach there on time dont worry..."
"Offoo ab mera vo suit kaha rkha hai ...ye sameer ka bus chlta nahi h warna mere saare suits ko chupa de.",she mumbeld searching her pink suit in her almirah which she wore during the boating ride at Ooty...But then blushed the next moment when she saw the pink nighty satin ki lace waali (as her sameer calls it) remembering the last night encounter with her dear pati dev...because last night naina devi wore that pink nighty for the first time and the two lovers got one of the best night of their existence...
Let me search his almirah wahi chupaye honge isne mere vo naye naye sundar sundar mehnge suits...naina decided
She searched his almirah frantically disturbing his t shirts shirts jeans and jackets... But she couldnt find any of her suits so she decided to wear something else for the evening...
"Arey yaar yaha b nahi rkhe hai... gaye kaha ???????" ,naina again questioned herself. Sighing she was going to close the almirah but got hit by the drawer when she tried to get up...
"Oww!!!!!!!", naina exclaimed and closed the drawer but stopped looking at a photograph.
"arey ye to sameer hai par saath me ye kaun hai? , naina said looking at the photograph which shows two boys of around 15 years young grinning mischeviously and their hands around each other... a perfect picture depicting two naughty children naina thought...
"Naina tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui ???? ",sameer questioned entering the room ."kya dhoond rahi ho meri almirah me ????" he asked again and the moment his eyes saw the photograph and smiled...
"Kabeer..."
"Kabeer ... kaun kabir???". naina asked looking at the pleasent expression on her better half...
"Arey ye mera nainitaal ka dost hai kabeer ", sameer answered taking the picture from naina's hand and sat on the bed still looking at the picture recalling his memories...
"Lekin tumne to kabhi btaya nahi iske baare me...",naina replied back wondering who this kabeer was that his hubby is smiling so much.
"To aaj bta deta hu usme kya hu... aao idhr baitho ," sameer told tapping the space beside him...and naina went and sat beside him.
"Kabeer aur meri dosti class 4th me pehli baar hui thi jb mai nainitaal k school St.Xaviers me tha... pta hai jis din meri pehli raat thi naa us boarding school me tb hostel garden me baitha hua tha mai...bohot gussa aa rha tha rona bhi aaraha tha aur mummy ko miss bhi bohot kr raha tha... baar baar khud se pooch raha tha ki mumma kab wapis aayengi? kab wapis aayengi?? mujhe yaha se le jaayengi!!!! but koi jawab nahi mila."
Sameer told having freshly formed tears in his eyes ... and immediately naina hugged him from side resting her head on his shoulder clutching his right hand... as if saying sameer its all the past now i am here with you and will always be ...
Smiling sameer continued."fir thaq kar jb mai wapis apne room me jaane laga tb mujhe seedhi k paas rone ki aawaz aayi maine idhr udhar dekha but koi nahi dikha... mai aage badne hi wala tha ki mujhe fir se awaaz aayi , mumma wapis aajao naaa please aajao mai koi shararat nahi karunga wapis aajao... maine seedhiyo k neeche dekha to ek motu sa ladka vaha baitha khoob ro raha tha..."
A small flashback to little sameer and kabeer's first meeting
"hey tum kaun ho aur kyu ro rahe ho ? "sameer asked the unknown child
"Mai ... maiii naa kabeer hu... vo meri mummaa ... mumm... mummaa mujhe yaha chhod k... chhod k chali ... chali gayii ...",kabeer replied while crying.
Yaar chhod k to meri mumma b gayi h but mai to itna nahi ro raha he thought. "Tu kyu ese akele kyu baitha h chal ab rona band kr motu teri naak aur laal ho jaayegiii ",sameer said chuckling...
"oye! motu kisko bola mai kabeer hu aur tum kaun ho ???", kabeer defended wiping his face with the back of this hands
"Okay .hi mai sameer hu ... mai b aaj yaha aaya hu...",sameer informed.
"Ohh to tum konc class me ho sameer ? mai to 4th A me hu aur hostel me dorm number 8 ",kabeer said
"Mai bhi ... sameer replied enthusiastically, mai bhi 4th A me hu aur dorm number 8 me rahungaa..."
"Yes!!!!" kabeer exclaimed lets be friends kabeer said forwarding his hand
"Friends!! lekin meri ek shart h motu..." sameer too reciprocated the handshake.
"Aye tune fir mujhe motu bola , bol kya shart hai??" kabeer said pouting.
"Tu abse royega nahi warna teri naak fir laal ho jaayegi.." sameer said laughing and running...
"Teri to... and kabeer went after him trying to chase his newly formed friend...
Flashback ends...
"Tumhe pta h naina ham dono us din k baad se poore time saath me rehte the mastii karte the teachers students ko pareshaaan krne me bohot maza aata tha hame... aur ek dusre ki galtiyon ko bhi dusro k saamne chupate the... ek baar to hamne P.T. teacher ko boys washroom me bnd bhi kar diya tha taaki hum games period me games khel sake na ki vo 1,2 1,2 kare... bichaare sir 2 din tk washroom me band rahe kyuki next day sunday tha...,"sameer laughed recalling the incident...
"Haww!!!!! sameer tum pagal the kya ?" naina asked in fake serious tone ,"esa kaun krta hai ????",she continued while hitting him playfully and laughing along...
"Mai aur mera motu kabeer... are bohot khadoos tha vo taklu lekin ham b kuch kam nahi the bohot tang kiya h unhe hm dono ne... sirf unhe hi nahi poora school k logo ko tang kiya h tumhare is handsome pati ne...," sameer said moving his fingers over his silky hairs...
"Haa haa mr. kudkudkumaar vo to mai jaanti hu ki sbko pareshaan kiya hi hoga tumne ...lekin ye kabeer abhi kaha hai?? kya karte hai ????? kabhi ghr bulao unhe mujhe bhi milna hai... "naina showered him with lots of questions...
"Kaha hai kya krta hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pta kyuki 10th k baad isne school chhod diya tha aur ye ham dono ki aakhri shararat se pehle ki photo hai uske baad to hm dono mile hi nahi... bye bhi bolkr nahi gaya ye motu mujhse...",sameer replied emotionally.
"Aakhri shararat ?," naina asked ,"vo kya thi?"
"Haa ... vo naa...",sameer recalled but immediately exclaimed,"oye dekh lo 8:30 baj gaya hai... aur tum abhi tk taiyaar nahi hui... baaton me fasa liya mujhe... jaldi taiyaar ho jaao warna mai tumhe chhod k chala jaaunga ",he said getting up and going towards the door
"Ha haa theek h ho rahi hu taiyaar...",naina replied "ek minute tum mujhe chhod k akele movie dekhne chale jaaoge mr maheshwari?????",naina questioned folding her hands in front of him giving him deadly glare...
"Haa chala jaaunga ",sameer replied casually looking at his wfe.
"Sameer kya kaha tumne ????", naina asked again "anil kapoor jyada zaroori h mujhse ?????? "
"Aur nahi to kya ", he mumbled.
"Sameer... what did you say???? ",naina asked in a high tone.
Offooo naina devi fir se naa aajye nai nai kuch krna pdega warna fir se couch pr sona pdega last friday ki tarah sameer thought
"Arey nahi nahi nainaa... "he went towards her and kept his hands on her waist drawing slow circles clearly knowing the effect of this action of his..." tumse zaroori mere liye kuch nahi... ",he whispered in her ears which made naina shivered...
"Ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jaao mrs.maheshwari i am waiting to spend a lovely evening with you... ",sameer winked and left closing the door after giving a quick peck on her forehead leaving his wife blushing ...
Haash!!!!! bach gaya warna aaj to movie jaa hi nahi paata... sameer thought and went to check the arrangements for the evening for the 8th time.
"Pagal hai poora..."naina said to her self "par sirf mera pagal hai" chukling and thanked her krishna jii for giving her the most precious thing of her life ...and decided to wear the black polka dot knee length dress which she purchased on the secret shopping session she had with swati and preeti last tuesday.
It was 8:50 now and sameer maheshwari was more than irritated would be an understatment he was constantly looking at ticking of the clock.
"Ye bhenji kaha reh gayi... ab aur kitna time legi ?...", he thought and moved towards the stairs to drag his wife out of the room.
"Nainaaa!!!!!!", he shouted taking the first step but lost his balance from the sight in front of him and some how tried to gain his lost balance again.
Ise behenji bol bhi kaise skta hu mai he thought to himself still standing on the first stair drinking the alluring sight in front of him...
The black polka dot short dress perfectly defined her each and every curve showing her milky legs , her soft hands and those black wedges when did naina started wearing those wedges sameer wondered and the slight makeup and her hair falling till her waist the pink gloss on her lips, the pearl set and that pearl braclet everything was inviting him shouting him to come and make endless love till infinity
Naina got scared when she saw sameer stumbling but then chuckled when she saw him shocked...
Mission successful mrs.naina sameer maheshwari, naina patted her back in her thoughts...
"Sameer mai kaic lag rahi hu ????", she asked while coming downstairs towards him expecting lots of tareef from sameer.
But sameer maheshwari was not in his senses anymore...his heated gaze was fixed on his dear wife drinking the sight in front of him.
"Sameer ..." naina called
But no response from our bholuraam
"Sameer... "naina tried again...
Again no words came out of his mouth...
Blushing she clutched his shoulder and shaked him
"Sameer..."
"huh.. haa ... haa bolo mai sun raha hu...",sameer somehow said brushing away his asanskari thoughts.
"Chalein ? der ho rahi h ...",naina asked smiling
"Haa chalo...", sameer took her hands and proceeded towards the door...
After locking the door when they proceeded sameer grabbed his wife from her waist getting a shocked expression huskily whispered ..."maar hi daalogi mrs. maheshwari...",keeping back the lone strand of her hair which was disturbing him from having a perfect view of his wife.
"Vahi to iraada h is naina devi ka..." naina winked .
Sameer laughed and they both went towards their car to start their movie date.
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