Night before the Dawn chapter 17 on page 53 - Page 22

Yours is a unique story in many ways. The story line itself is completely different. Most of the stories show with girl’s point of view or the narrator’s. But here it is shown from the boy’s point of view which is rare. The situation in which Sameer is finding himself is not common. You are showing his inner turmoil very beautifully.

Hope Sameer goes to Mumbai, meets Naina and clarifies everything.

Awesome update dear

Hey Aashna

Eagerly waiting for ur next update

Plz update next part ASAP

The story has been shifted.

Short update... koi nahi!

I am liking the self talk of Sameer.... it wil help him to decide wrong and right. But he was jealous tooo to see naina with sanjay. But they both broke up.... is there something regarding this? Suspense aur bhi badh raha hai... now let's see what will sameer do? That guilt... dekhte hai kaise mitta hai😃

Hopefully Sameer meets naina soon... in mumbai!

Will be waiting eagerly for the next update🤗.

With love,Suparna

Sameer's self talk is really good. Eagerly waiting that they will meet soon. Will love to read further.

Disha

Aashna really good n short update yaar . Story is progressing very well with interesting turns, keep up the good work .waiting for next update. Lots of love

Srilatha

Awesome update. Loved this self talk of sameer. Let's see how it is proceeding. Hope for the best. Ohh jealous Sameer hmm.

Short but crysp update...

Finally sameer realized the gravity of his act. Too eager to see how he tries to meet Naina and fix things. Also what happened to Naina's life after she reached mumbai

Nice update. Loved Sameer's self talk. Waiting to see what he is going to do now.