Night before the Dawn chapter 17 on page 53 - Page 23

I loved and loved your update. Inner turmoil you gave shown beautifully. Yes it was way too small update but no problems please compensate with longer update next time and that too within this week. Once again I love your writing

Hi

Nice update dear

Self talk wad good one

Now eagerly waiting to see what he will do now.

Ty

Suma 💕

Shorter but interesting update. Waiting for next update egerly and impatiently

Amazing update dear

Hi dear... Central idea is nice... Have shown every part very beautiful I don't doubt ur writing skills.. Especially fight of sameer with his conscience is very nice... Many times we all come at that point when we believe something else but we have to choose practical n it remains as guilt in our heart poor chap is through same situation... N u depicted it nicely so u have connected people with sameer n story but naina... Is still a mystery her part is not much known so let's c how u unfold rest of story... Especially TRUTH.... Wen it comes out to naina how will she react.... Anyways always waiting for ur updates n hope that this will be also superb like devils bride... Wishing you all day best

Hi dear

Thank you for the nice update. Sorry could not comment on the last update but I did read it and liked it. World cup semi final loss and then our show going off air has been disheartening. Samaina ffs are some respite so do continue writing (thanks a ton for that).

This story is definitely unique. It is a sensitive issue with different point of view of each and every character involved in the story and hence writing will not be easy in this story. And the twists that you put keeps us on hooks and makes it more intriguing.

Sameer's self talk is good..that is what most of us do...but sometimes it confuses you all the more and sometimes gives you the right answer too. Like now his heart knows he likes Naina.. .but mind is not ready to go through another guilt ride breaking sunaina' s heart (seems like she has already sensed it).

So now Sameer is secretly stalking her on social site (interesting...didnt see it coming) and the return of sanjay tebriwal (couldn't imagine him with Naina😆.. no please...accha hua breakup ho gaya).

Also I feel that somehow Naina has some idea about this incidence...a girl can always sense a strangers touch from a know person's touch (pura sach nahi par kuch toh andaza hoga na). Waiting for them to meet in Mumbai.

Regarding your last question what we feel will happen in the story further...I think they will meet up in Mumbai...sameer will still find it difficult to reveal the truth, meanwhile naina will start liking him and when he will decide to confess they might bump into the doctor who treated her...aur fir dhamaka hoga (abhi toh itna hi soch payee hu.. .writer nahi hai bhai aap ki tarah...all the chapals are welcome 🤣)

Waiting for the next update.

Take care.

The reason of their breakup can't be sameer. Reason is something else. The story is getting more interesting day by day! Maybe he'll meet nainaI mean he is so much guilty he can't live peacefully without meeting her. Munna will beat him😆

The concept of this story is very unique and unpredictable! Can't guess what's going to happen next and naina is a mystery. Her character is suspicious and I'm eagerly waiting to know about her.

Originally posted by: Sriyan

Hi dear... Central idea is nice... Have shown every part very beautiful I don't doubt ur writing skills.. Especially fight of sameer with his conscience is very nice... Many times we all come at that point when we believe something else but we have to choose practical n it remains as guilt in our heart poor chap is through same situation... N u depicted it nicely so u have connected people with sameer n story but naina... Is still a mystery her part is not much known so let's c how u unfold rest of story... Especially TRUTH.... Wen it comes out to naina how will she react.... Anyways always waiting for ur updates n hope that this will be also superb like devils bride... Wishing you all day best

Thank you dear for trusting my writing skills. I'm happy you feel connected to my character that's a writer's work. And let's see how Naina turns out. It will unfold with time. It's a mystery and I love keeping secrets. Till now you might have figured it out. And it will be as awesome as Devil's Bride. I promise to try my best. Thank you for the comment.

Originally posted by: Autumn90

Hi dear

Thank you for the nice update. Sorry could not comment on the last update but I did read it and liked it. World cup semi final loss and then our show going off air has been disheartening. Samaina ffs are some respite so do continue writing (thanks a ton for that).

This story is definitely unique. It is a sensitive issue with different point of view of each and every character involved in the story and hence writing will not be easy in this story. And the twists that you put keeps us on hooks and makes it more intriguing.

Sameer's self talk is good..that is what most of us do...but sometimes it confuses you all the more and sometimes gives you the right answer too. Like now his heart knows he likes Naina.. .but mind is not ready to go through another guilt ride breaking sunaina' s heart (seems like she has already sensed it).

So now Sameer is secretly stalking her on social site (interesting...didnt see it coming) and the return of sanjay tebriwal (couldn't imagine him with Naina😆.. no please...accha hua breakup ho gaya).

Also I feel that somehow Naina has some idea about this incidence...a girl can always sense a strangers touch from a know person's touch (pura sach nahi par kuch toh andaza hoga na). Waiting for them to meet in Mumbai.

Regarding your last question what we feel will happen in the story further...I think they will meet up in Mumbai...sameer will still find it difficult to reveal the truth, meanwhile naina will start liking him and when he will decide to confess they might bump into the doctor who treated her...aur fir dhamaka hoga (abhi toh itna hi soch payee hu.. .writer nahi hai bhai aap ki tarah...all the chapals are welcome 🤣)

Waiting for the next update.

Take care.

I tried pairing Sharad and Naina together but damn it didn't work out. I hated that rotten face. It looked so nerdy so I had no choice but to go with Sanjay again. And you are trying to guess the story good good keep guessing! You might crack the code. Time will tell everything and thank you for the comment. It lifted my mood.

Originally posted by: Rph09

The reason of their breakup can't be sameer. Reason is something else. The story is getting more interesting day by day! Maybe he'll meet nainaI mean he is so much guilty he can't live peacefully without meeting her. Munna will beat him😆

The concept of this story is very unique and unpredictable! Can't guess what's going to happen next and naina is a mystery. Her character is suspicious and I'm eagerly waiting to know about her.

Munna will surely beat him up! He is like a nagging mother, trying to prove his point to his child anyhow. I laugh whenever I imagine his reactions. It's so funny. And story will get more interesting with time just keep reading. I'm so happy you found it unique. That's my motive. Anyways thank you for being a regular and for the love you show on my story through the comments. You are great. I'm lucky to have you😘😘😘