SHORT STORY II : Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 21 Page15 - Page 25

Hi you just bombarded a bomb of emotions 😣😥☹️🙁🙁🙁 itney up down nhi jhrla Jaya yrr ek Baar Kuch honjata hai na to pta nhi usko pain KO overcome krney Mai Kitna time lgta but you wrote each and every thing so beautifully and presented it by taking your time it was the best think I liked about your story aur pta nhi yrr naina Ka kya haal Hoga 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 please SB jldi thik krdo next do Tin update Mai SB kitney Khush Khush the kya Hoga yrrr but this is all about life is hope so ye blackzone se jldi niklney aur aur nyi hope full of happiness k Saath Aaye aur Sameer bilkul na chorey in logo KO. UPDATE WAS AWSOME. LOVE YOUR THOUGHTS AND HOW YOU EXPRESS EMOTIONS IN YOUR UPTATE. LOVE YOUR UPDATE snehapandey12 😃😄😆😉😊😋

Hi Ashwathy,

Very emotional update dear. Don't have word's.. Feeling emotional and sad for sameer and naina's loss. Hope to see a strong sameer and also how both overcome there emotional taruma and pain. Though it is not to be forgotten but still would love to see their bond and fighting against their enemies.

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Luv Aarti.😊

Hi Ashwathy

Very emotional update dear

Hope there love become more strong n deep after this incident .Amazingly written

Waiting for next update

Srilatha

Hii dear 😊

What an emotional update.....

What we lost is not going to come back but what we have with us will help us to come out from the bad days of our life. They both have their love towards each other,it will take time but they will come back more stronger....

Smeer is not going leave Varun nd other ppl who helped him hurting Naina once he come to know about it😡

Waiting for next update....

Love

Sejal

Oh god Ashwathy,

What a tragic update... never thought the lion story will come alive in their life 😕

The kind of pain faces after loosing her unborn child is unimaginable...

I guess this wound will scar their life for ever...

Very emotional update. What must be they feeling losing the child , don't have exact words to express. And those men, how come they know that they are going to hospital. Will be eagerly waiting for next update dear. Pata hi nahi chala that next part is uploaded until I opened last page to see if it is uploaded.

Awesome update. Looking forward to what end Sameer scripts

So painful and emotional update....

I am still in the shock

I hope that next update will give some happy moments....

Waiting for next.... Plz iss bar thoda juldi dena

Hope you are feeling better..

very emotional update.. Losing a child can be so hard..

Please update soon.

HEy it was so emotional..i m speechless.. U write awesome.. I hv read all the parts together till now... The way u write is just incredibly awesome.. Eagerly waitng to read the next.. God bless u dear.. Keepng smilng alwys..