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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Poonamtakyar

Please update...waiting..

Yes will update soon. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Amazing update
When will you post next one
Eagerly waiting😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ashifan1998

Amazing update

When will you post next one
Eagerly waiting😊


Will update soon. Thanks for liking it.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

First of all, Sorry for late update.😊

Update Mexico Wedding

DANDIYA site in marriage.😊

Two couples were to start Dandiya program

Rohan asks Preeti where are all others.

Preeti: Whom u talking about.

Rohan: Where is my half gharwali? 😆(Hogi apne Gorilla ke paas)😆

Soon Baa comes there and asks for Naina.

Naina: Mai yahan hu Baa.

Baa tells Naina looking beautiful.

Rohan: Yeh Lo BA mai yaha prince charming hun aur aapko toh sirf beti hi dikhai deti hai. (Chand hi nazar ayega sabko) 😳

Rohan: Sali sahiba kitanoko ghayal karogi. Hame bhi dekhlo. (uski nazar kahi aur hai)

BAA says she is with all gang to unite Samaina. She calls Sam prince.

Rohan: Ab kya karogi Saliji Baa bhi hamare saat hai. Hum saath-saath hai.

Naina: "Baa Kya Aap bhi kise prince kahe rah ho Us bander ko, woh to pura American Hippo hai (kripya shabdon par dhyan de)

Baa: Angel wo itna makkhan ki tarah hai, aur tu use hippo kah rahi hai. (Bilkul Amul Butter)

Shivani tells Sam gone to take parents

Naina: Na aaye tohi accha hai, warna phir chipakne ki baat karega, us Hippo ki na maine Bhurji na banai to dekhna. (Yeh Hippo kahi tumhe apni Hippi na bana le)

Baa to Naina's parents.

"Meri angel mera proud hai aur mera dil hai. Pura bharosa hai wo sahi faisala karegi .bas time do (aapki sapne jarur pooree karegi)

Sameer saw Naina in dandiya dress😳😆

Sam: "Omg Hey hot sexy my love. Look how beautiful outfit I pick for you. (Wah kya choice hai)😆😆

Naina: O No chipku Hippo Ne entry kar Li. (Kahi ek din aap bhi enke jaise na ban jaye)😆

Sameer: Rohan bro why you are giving hard time to me. Look my love looking so hot. You all have your GF so you don't need to control but how about me. (Apni Bhawnao par kabu rakhiye)

Naina: Sochna bhi mat mere panch pandav (brothers) dekhe hai na sachmuch Hippo bana denge. (avasaya balike)

😆

Sameer didn't understood, shivani explained.

Sam says everyone has GF here and all uncontrolled.

😆

Naina: By the way Mr.Chipku Hippo they all got their licences officially by families so chipkan-chipakai is ok, but me & you never. (Yeh to bhavishya batayega)

Sameer: Me and both family is ready but love I know how to make you fall. I have double PHD in that. (Aap toh chupe rustom hai)

Ronak: Bro when you took that Phd. Me and mom dad always thought you never will find any girl as you always run away when you see any girl. (Yeh aapki galatfahmi hai)

😆

Sameer: She has magnet & I am attracted she makes me like that. (Chumbukiye Akarshan kahiye)

😆

Preeti asks everyone lets go for Dandiya.

Naina goes to take some snack as hungry.

Sameer: Lets go, I will give you company, me hungary too. (Wo to hamesha ka hai)

😆

Naina: No thanks, Chipku Hippo.

Sam: 😆 I want my food. (kripya control kare)

Naina just run away from there & Sam follow.

When she was eating Pani-Puri he come over there.

Sameer: Hey love you are looking breath taking, please at least understand my feelings. (Pehle aap Enhe to samjahle)

Naina: What you think Sam, I don't understand to fall in love is not like one-day match, it's for all lifetime. We both even don't know each other very well, offcourse our family know you & Sai you are best friend, but how about us. We don't know each other, we just met and you fall for me & spend some little time togetther. It's for our whole life commitment. if in future you or me may have differences & your and my thinking don't match. So many things comes. I know besides love marraige thier is arrange and then love happend. I need time sure you will be DR. and may find someone and fall in love for her. I am not only one. I don't want to force you in my dreams which is in INDIA. I don't yet where time will take me. Your parents also have some hope and dreams don't break their heart. We both have our own dreams why you want to change that dreams just for me. (Uff yeh haale Dil sunaya)

😳

Sam: So miss Naina, whom I call my love. I never except so much from life. I am going to be DR, and after that do my work with honest and take care of my parents, only that dream I saw. I know in future my parents will force me for marriage & that i will fulfill their wish. Like from everyone you heard, never date or follow any girl becoz I never want do that & only I focus on my studies.😳

When i saw you first time in Preeti Di's engagement. I fall for you & don't know how I learn to love someone truly & unconditionally. I know so many girls came and will come but my heart and my eye only knows how to love only with you. I am not forcing you to fall for me, but sure you are stopping urself to fall in love just Becoz of your dream which you want settle down in INDIA. Don't stop yourself just for dream.

😳

I am not saying you accept my love but you can fall for any other one whom your heart say yes & you think he will make you happy for whole life. But please don't stop me and push me away from loving you. I really love you by my heart and soul. My love is not just attraction which get attracted by your beauty. You are beautiful, but I did't love you by yur face beauty but I fall more and more after I start to know you by other and what I saw and that is your inner beauty which is just pure. I will love you till my last breath. You can take how much time you want, I am with you whatever decision you take. (Aisi Deewange dekhi nahi kahin)😳

Naina: "Oh God ab kya karu, Ye to sachmuch he Hippo se diwana ban gaya. Ek aur Sameer aur Dusari aur veer. Veer ke saat India ka dream pura ho sakta hai aur Sameer ka pyar bhi pani ki tarah saaf hai. Sach mai kisiko hurt nahi karna chahti. Please BAPPA help me, show me right path. (Ishwar aapko sahi rahan dikye)

Sam: Don't think too much becoz after thinking for long time decision will always end with wrong path. Flow with time LOVE. (pyar ki kashti mein baith jao)

Naina: No Love, my name is Naina. (ha sameer ka pyar)

Sam: Naina for world, angel for family, but LOVE is just for me, one heart ,one love that only mine, not gona share with anyone. (Tum mere ho)

Naina: O ya then see day-night both dreams becoz dream won't cost/no need to pay tax. (Yeh sapne sach honge)😳

Sam: My both dream will come true and you will be in my arms. (Sahi ja rahe ho)

😆

Naina: No I am done, God kaise samjau. Ye to pakka wala chipku nikala. (chimbuk bolo)

😆

Ruchi & Veer Came😆

Ruchi: (saying to Samaina) Kya yaar kahan thi tu, akeli hi kha liya, chal dance nahi karna kya. Hey handsome looking sexy. Haha, I knew where there is bee you find her honey there. (Bhawron ke gunjan iske liye)

Veer: Madam kya boli chali ja rahi ho. Hum bhi hai abhi. (Tumko kon dekh raha)

😆

Ruchi: Ya bhul gayi, ek phool do mali, aur dono bhi pyar mai khali. (Aur tumse jo pyar kare uski lachari)😆

Naina: O heroin tu hi bhar de, tere paas to pyar ke kuye hai. (Inke kuyon mein zeher hai)

😆

Veer teases Sam you still have hopes

Sam: Of course true love you know never die. You do yours I will do mine.

Veer: Sun tu sirf dekhta hi rah jayega, ab dance jo karna heya use mere saat.

(Sapna dekho tum)

Veer held Naina's hand and left.

Ruchi: Don't worry handsome, you try for me. (Yeh phir line marne lagi)

Ruchi ask Sam to lets go to dance area.

Naina's rose ring got some problem she her small diamond ring & Sam mom fix that on her nose. Sam's mom says to Naina you are looking beautiful &kiss her on her forehead. Naina didn't say anything, only THANK U and left.

Naina comes back to dance area and group there.

Ruchi: Preeti di lagta hai Mr. Romeo ke saat-saat uski mom bhi kiss karne mai barabar ki competitor hai. (yes genes matter)

Naina: O ya, tu jana uss Sameer ke pass, aur bhi hai Veer-Om ja sabse lele. (Yeh to kabhi bhi taiyar rehti)

Ruchi: Yaar humare naseeb mai kiss kahan. (Jo tumko karega wo badnaseeb hoga bechara)

Preeti: Ruchi tu kuch boli hi mat, warna murder ho jayega. Angel dekh teeno mummy ke saat-saat meri sasuma aur Shivani ki sasuma (Sam mom) bhi joint ho gayi dance mein.

Naina: Han Di, mujhe to lagta tha Dr. hokar dance nahi karti hogi. (Lekin unka beta bhi karega tumhare isharon par)

Rohan: Sali ji, wo to tumari sasuma bhi to hogi. (Je sahi baat boli)

Naina: Jiju sach batati hun, didi ko apne ghar se jane nahi dungi, jana akele barat lekar. (ulta kahi tum bhi na chal do saath mein)

Rohan: Accha which Ghar Newyork wala ya Boston wala. (Nahi piya ka ghar)

Naina: Di Jiju se shadi mat karo & try to hit Rohan & and seems to fall. (sambhal ke jara)

Sam: Watch love u may fall down. (bilkul jarur sirf aap par)

Ruchi: Wish Sameer you fall for me, so you take care same way. (Isko akal nahi aayi abhi bhi)

Sam: Ruchi looks like you need to see EAR DR. You can't hear properly. I said BIG NO...(Enko manochikitshak ki bhi jarurat hai)

Rohan: Sali-Ji Gain some weight, ek haat me pakad le itni si kamar hai, lehanga bhi rahna nahi chahata. uss bhichare ashiq ka socho, wo kya kya sambhalega, kamar ya lehenga. (Shayad enko)

All laughing

Ronak: Sameer be control, ok you are dreaming, you are fixing her lehanga right. (bahut kuch)

Sameer: No I am dreaming more than that. (kya-kya socha)

Naina: O Mr. Chipku Hippo, You want me. I make your scramble egg. (kuch bhi banalo, tumhara hai)

Sameer: You can do all you want, I am all ur's. (Soch ke bolo)

Naina just get angry & left followed by Ruchi

It's time for all three girls' performance where Preeti make sit Rohan on chair in middle & Shivani did Ronak. (Shivani is Preeti's nanad & Ronak is Sam bro both are getting married & Rohan weds Preeti)

Veer is also there in dance, Sameer Jealous.

Sam: Hey Ruchi why is Veer there, he not getting married. (Uff Yeh Jalan)

Ruchi: Mr. Jealous don't know Hindi & how to dance on Indian music, so just relax & watch, Veer is dancing with them

All dancing on song Sasural Genda Phool-Delhi 6

All enjoying & Mr. Hippo giving jealous look.

Shivani dancing & when it comes to Devar, she bring Sameer & try to dance with him.

Same way on Nanad, Preeti did with Shivani.

Sameer & Rohan mom: Meri pyari bahu, abhi sadi nahi hui aur saas ki burai suru (& both catch ears) Sasural Genda Phool haan. Beta modern saas hai koi baba aajam ke jamane ki nahi. Ab toh bahu ke din hai, saas ke nahi, isiliye Gende ki jagah, Gulab phool, sasural gulab phool. Shiatani ki nani ho tum dono.

Preeti & Shivani: Nahi mummy ye to humne Naina ke kahne pe kiya, ye uska plan tha. (lo bechari ko phasa diya)

Naina: Aww Di you both are so mean (Chal Naina khisak le warna ye chipku Hippo ki Mom aur Preeti di ki saas waat laga degi)

Naina try run away but Ronak & Rohan catch her. (phas gayi bechari)

Rohan: Sali sahiba kahan chali mulakat toh kar ljiye sasuma se. (yeh sahi kahan)

Sam mom & Rohan mom: Toh sari shaitani yahanse kyu.

Naina: Wo Auntyji, yeh to bahut accha song hai, fun you know. (ab kya koi bahana nahi mil raha)

All laugh.

Sameer Mom: Beta hamne kab kahan ye dance acha nahi tha. Yeh to bahut accha tha, par mere liye meri bahubeti hai aur uska sasural kam aur mayka jada hoga. Tum to bahut cute ho, I love you, bas mere Sameer Ki ban ja. (Yeh lijiye yeh bhi Samaina shipper nikle)

Naina: Aunty wo. (bechari kya bolegi)

Rohan: Don't worry mom, hamare Sameer ki hi rani banegi. (Hanji bilkul sahi)

Naina punches Rohan Jiju in joke.

Sameer was just watching & admiring Naina like how cute she is and even more happy seeing his mom loving his would-be-wife like he does.

Ruchi: Preeti Di Puri family Hi fida hai kis-kise bachegi, yeh unromantic your sister. (ab nahi bach sakti)

Naina: Tu chal, mai batati hun, romance ki acchi tuition deti hun. (uski aapko jarurat hai)

Ruchi: Meri to PhD ho rakhi hai tu kya tuition degi. (Kish topic par kuch vishesh area hoga-romance mein bhi)

Naina: Tu chal jab dekho tab uss chipku Hippo ki tarafdari, tu chal. (Esko chalta hi kar do)

The wedding day next will be Punjabi & gujarati style.

It was pay of time to Naina as she danced with Veer.

Sameer wants to meet Naina as they reach near their rooms in night.

Ruchi and Naina stay in same room.

Sam is Sam

Sam: Ruchi you go, I will take care. (He wants ruchi to leave them alone for sometime)

Ruchi denies to help. But he reluctant.

Ruchi: Aaj to pakka pitai hogi, wo sherni bankar nakhun na mar de. (Pyar wale nakhun maregi)

Ruchi goes to tell Preeti about Sameer mischief. Preeti & Rohan laugh & say to be cool and not worry.

Here in the room Naina was taking out her bangles & her back is on door side, so she didn't see who is coming.

Naina: Oh romance ki devi, aaj to tu bed per nahi soyegi, teri punishment. (Lo khud hi bula rahi aashiq ko)

Sameer: (he coughs) It's me love. (deewana)😆😉

Naina: (Shocked). Mr. Hippo how come you are here.

Sam: Well some pending work need to finish.

Naina: Go chipku which work.

Sameer: Kiss.😆

Naina: O hello, we just talked couple hour ago & U still think about this & from me. No way, maybe Ruchi will love this, GO.

Sam: If you are here then why I need Ruchi.

Sam brought some gift and wants Naina to wear.

Naina: Then I am not gonna take this & not gonna wear the outfit.

Naina: Tum kis mitti ke bane ho. Hey bhagwan koi Aishwariya bhej do is Chipku ke liye, toh ye mera picha chhod de.

Sam: I love you.

Naina: Pagal hai aur kuch nahi.

Sam: Pagal, no didn't understand what U said, so for me its I LOVE U.

He brought diamond necklace match with her outfit wants her wear in wedding.

Sam asks do u like it.

Naina: No.

Sam: So you are saying no & start to walk near her other side (Naina walks back ward)

Naina: Don't come near me Chipku. (aaj muskil hai bachna)

Sam comes near her and tickled somewhat her tummy (he knows she is so ticklish)

Naina says to stop & says I will shout.

Sameer comes more closer & kiss her on cheek this time both side.😉

Naina: How dare you kiss me. (aashiq jo hai)😆

Sam: You want me to show you again. (bilkul jarur)😆

Naina: No Hippo go I will kill you.😆

Sam: Not gonna die before getting love from U. I love U like this till last breath & after I die my soul will do same.

Naina: Night dream, day dream free. (sapne sach bhi hote hai)😆

Sameer kiss again cheek and left.😳

Sameer was happy and murmuring song lying in bed.

Give Me Everything tonight, I want you tonight.😆

Naina was like 😭😕😲 expression came on her face. O God please soon let him realize who is his true love not me God. Naina was in deep thought how she can allow him to kiss. Bappa show what is right till today you are with me, hope you show me right path.

Our Hindi song for situation of Samaina here.😳

Sameer singing: "Apne hoton par sajana chahta hun, Aa tujhe mein gungugana chahta hun

Naina: "Tumhe apna saathi banane se pehle, meri jaan mujhe to bahut sochna hai

"Meri manzalin alag, teri manzil pyar, sochti hu kis tarah aau teri es duniya mein, kis tarah sapne tujhe dikahun

************************************ Hope you all like it************************************************


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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
It was really an superb update Toshi Dii.. And the thoughts in the brackets was the best and comical /hilarious One.. The best part was Sameer tickling her and then kissing her on both of her cheeks and also loved how Sameer was feeling jealous when Naina and Veer were dancing together..Patha nahi Yeh chipku veer Naina se kab door bhaag jayega..And Congratulations Toshi dii for Another Name"Chipkku Hippo"...Naina is best for naming someone..She should be taken to naming ceremony and assist her for naming the child... Do update next one As soon As possible And do pm me..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Hi,
Thanks for the update.
U updated after so long.
But this time I felt as if it's not written by you. There were alot of grammatical error.
All in all , it didn't feel like your style of writing.

But I loved that line hippo ki hippi. It was amazingly hilarious.

Hope u dont mind my comment.

Thanks,



Edited by Richa0305 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
As usual hilarious update di! Oh god another new name!! Wandering what will be the new name. Naina is allowing him to kiss her. That means she is also in love with him but didn't realizing. Superb update! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Richa0305

Hi,
Thanks for the update.
U updated after so long.
But this time I felt as if it's not written by you. There were alot of grammatical error.
All in all , it didn't feel like your style of writing.

But I loved that line hippo ki shilpi. It was amazingly hilarious.

Hope u dont mind my comment.

Thanks,



Thanks. Will take care to be more perfect next time. Hope you like it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Hilarious update.
'Hippo' another name by Naina.
Slowly Naina is falling for Sameer. She is allowing to kiss her.
I like the dance sequence.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: toshibelekar

Thanks. Will take care to be more perfect next time. Hope you like it. 😊


Thanku for taking my comment in a positive way.
Definitely , I love the updates. Your FF is one of a kind. I love the one liners u add after each dialogue.
Looking forward for the upcoming updates.
Edited by Richa0305 - 6 years ago

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