SamAina FS: Let It Go - Last Part on Page 67

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

SanayaK

@SanayaK

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#181

Superb...

Loved the waist hold and consequent berth hug.

Sameer is so caring...and Naina...she can definitely read his mind.

Loved how you have portrayed her eagerness to spend closer moments with the love of her life.

I'm sure she will heal him of all his bad memories of this beautiful place.

Rohan...I love this guy...how he never fails to show his love and respect for his Bhai.

That small interaction of preehan...ahhh can't wait to read more of them.

Mou I had sent you a pm, please reply to it if you have time.

I'm really missing my most favorite FF A&F here.

Everytime I see your pm I keep my fingers crossed.

Hope you will be able to sort out all issues.

You are the best writer here.

Lots of love and hugs to you.🤗

Quote

MOH29

@MOH29

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#182

Beautifully narrated just sank in the imagination thanks for update

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

munchkinland

@munchkinland

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#183

I am loving the story so far

the way you incorporated the farq hain dialogue

wow

the way naina understood sameer's pain related to mount abu trip

how beautiful

and you also covered up the delhi phase

sameer is afraid of naina's reaction

but I am sure she will understand him like always

naina plans to spend her entire time with sameer

and she is really excited for that

can not wait for them to explore Nainital together

she has reached a comfort level with him physically as well and is ready to hug him as well

and the way you portrayed their intimate moments just by their sitting positions leaning on each other

it was so capturing

sameer was not expecting anyone to come over

but rohan came

and even gave him that family wala feeling

he even called Naina bhabhi

precious

Aur ladke ne abhi se bhai ki complain bhabhi se krni bhi shuru kr di

And bhabhi supported her devar as well

perfect

Preehan will happen here too

can not wait

continue soon

Quote

Pk02

@Pk02

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#184

Loved it... As usual beautifully written... Waiting for next part...

Quote

Pooja1973

@Pooja1973

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#185

As usual awesome...felt like its playing before the eyes...u describe so well...u are an amazing writer..waiting for more...😊

Quote

Shraddha

@Shr1607

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#186

It was truly wonderful n amazing

Quote

bmk28

@bmk28

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#187

Wow.. You stumped me, Mou.. I was visualizing your story while reading it.. Your detailing is so perfect 👍🏼

I had gone to Delhi during my Engg and that train journey I recalled in split second.. The way you described hustle and bustle of train station is awesome..

Progression of Samaina relationship and Naina's understanding of Sameer are two highlights from this update.. I am sure Sameer will have her heartbreaking time in the city where he has spent his lonely days. How Naina will be support to him is something that I am looking forward to read.

Thank you for giving an update so quickly along with OS during the weekend 😊