SHORT STORY I: Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 19 Page 148 - Page 8

Hey Ashu!

Beautiful story and very nice update! Waiting for the next part..!

Originally posted by: myprimechicago

Beautiful update...

You have a simple subtle way of expressing the story which I love...

Can we get more frequent updates... I AM TOO GREEDY😃

Thank you so much !! I am happy that you enjoyed reading it.

Originally posted by: sumathiaishu

. Lovely update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Can you pm me please dear

Ty

Suma

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Nice update...loved it

Thank you so much !!

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

Loved it to the core

the way you have described emotions that is so perfect

Naina went into thinking mode because of Sameer

and Mr maheshwari is worried why he is restless

obviously because of the girl you have never met

just have an opinion about

Does the next chapter start with their meeting for the first please

I am really excited

Thank you so much !! I am happy you liked it.

Originally posted by: munchkinland

What should I say or not say

you are writing it so beautifully

and the way you are not running with the story

its tremendous

The pace of the story I am in awe with that

Naina heard Sameer and now she is worried that why is she called bhenji

answer given by chachu was so perfect

tauji is nice here

taiji at usual is at her taunt best thing

I think Naina did the right thing by hiding about her salary

sameer is worried due to his mom or the words he said for naina. unintentionally

waiting to know

continue soon

Thank you so much !! Regarding Naina's decision, is based on something that I have noticed. Most of the time when women become professionals , they feel very empowered. It just happens automatically. There might be exceptions but in most cases they become a lot more strong to voice their opinion and start taking decisions. I guess its because of financial independence.

Originally posted by: Ashusanj

Super update.

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Thank you so much !! I am glad that you like it.

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Very nice!

Happy to see that Naina is starting to become more practical and putting her needs first for a change. But, it's sad the transformation is triggered.. she thinking of herself as a failure as woman. Unfortunately it's only too true... as women a lot of us have our self worth tied to our looks.

MunDit know him too well! Must be not eating as he is upset.. they guessed rightly. But why was he really upset? Was it only about his mom's visit or that girl he couldn't find later in the college? Waiting to find out!

I really liked that you have changed Tauji's character here. It brought a different fresh feel to the story.

Looking forward to the next one!

I am glad you that Tauji is being portrayed as a good person. Thank you so much !!

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Poor Naina... Me too felt her pain... Now waiting for Samaina mulakat.

Thank you so much !! I am also waiting ...and wondering when they should meet.. 😉