SHORT STORY I: Crown Prince and his Commoner Princess:Part 19 Page 148 - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Loved it to the core
the way you have described emotions that is so perfect
Naina went into thinking mode because of Sameer
and Mr maheshwari is worried why he is restless
obviously because of the girl you have never met
just have an opinion about
Does the next chapter start with their meeting for the first please
I am really excited
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
What should I say or not say
you are writing it so beautifully
and the way you are not running with the story
its tremendous
The pace of the story I am in awe with that
Naina heard Sameer and now she is worried that why is she called bhenji
answer given by chachu was so perfect
tauji is nice here
taiji at usual is at her taunt best thing
I think Naina did the right thing by hiding about her salary
sameer is worried due to his mom or the words he said for naina. unintentionally
waiting to know
continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Super update.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Very nice!

Happy to see that Naina is starting to become more practical and putting her needs first for a change. But, it's sad the transformation is triggered.. she thinking of herself as a failure as woman. Unfortunately it's only too true... as women a lot of us have our self worth tied to our looks.

MunDit know him too well! Must be not eating as he is upset.. they guessed rightly. But why was he really upset? Was it only about his mom's visit or that girl he couldn't find later in the college? Waiting to find out!

I really liked that you have changed Tauji's character here. It brought a different fresh feel to the story.

Looking forward to the next one!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
Poor Naina... Me too felt her pain... Now waiting for Samaina mulakat.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Nice update. Liked nainas positive attitude. But sad about her inadequacy feeling. Hoping she will be in sarees in office and their first meeting will happen there. Do update soon.
Edited by MinervaMcG - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Loved it eagerly waiting for the next update update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Nice update. Naina getting strength👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Naina's sadness pierced my heart.. No matter how strong or indifferent we try to be, at a point it hurts when people don't find us beautiful or attractive
Just waiting for her crown prince to take away all the sadness from her life
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
HI
thanks for the PM . loved your update
looking forward for how your story turns ..expecting it to be good as your other stories.

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