My brother's best friend - ff (New thread updated) - Page 18

Originally posted by: munchkinland

acha to avoid game khel rhe hain dono

lekin kab tak

I loved the way you always referred naina as choti pigtails vali naina for sameer

it was so cute

Already following her

madam sandwich khayegi toh yeh bhi

and he desires to kiss her

abhi se

ladke pe lagaam lagaani padegi

and why do I have a feeling yeh prem ko naina se prem ho jayega

sameer saved her yet again

I love him okay

he is our hero

haye isse toh mujhe bhut pyaar hain

isly mere gaal abhi laal hain

please continue soon

and yes all the best for your exams

Originally posted by: wendy25

Loved Samaina's Indirect interaction and ofcourse their reactions around eachother..

Can't wait to read next part!

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Great progression! Self conversations of Sameer and Naina were my favorite part.
Sameer cant get over his attraction but doesn't forget that Naina is out of bounds and his own playboy ways in the past. His character is slowly growing on me. Him ordering sandwich was just too cute for words. Also his angry young man avtaar was welcome when Naina needed it the most. Now that he has marked his territory around Naina she is going to get a lot of jealous attention from the same sex I bet!

Naina, the girl in love since forever! Loved how you kept her character consistent...sweet, determined, and brave. Looks like she has thrown the key to her feelings but heart is searching for it anyways. Naina can't deny her attraction however remembering the past she is cautious to say the least. I am looking forward when she figures out Sameer is a changed man; then the real predicament will start.

Ragging incident remined me of the college days. No amount of courage can get you out of obeying your seniors and Naina's predicament was perfectly shown, inspite of that she stood her ground. 😆 The eye contact scene was perfect, golden rule never make eye contact is what you are told! Prem looks like an interesting character. Sameer looks like Salman and Prem is his most common screen name, coincidence or deliberate move by you. 😉

Sameer's fame and seniority was such a savior. Him saving Naina reminded of the teenage Sam saving little Naina. I was surprised he didn't punch Vicky. That handhold was perfect, nothing OTT just a natural reflex though bet it is going to open a lot of gates for the concerning parties 😊

All the best for your exams!!