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@wendy25

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Posted: 6 years ago

#101

Loved the chapter!

Really intriguing... Can't wait to see how things between Mr.heartthrob and miss girl next door hotty plays out!

Sameer deserves to e given hard time by Naina ;)

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PK21

@Pallavi_PK

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Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Story line was nice..I read the entire updatrs in one go...

Cant wait for next one...

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Rahul126545

@Rahul126545

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Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Nice part finally collage journey start hogayi superb update...To sameer ab sudhar gya gai...par lagta Hai naina ko dekh zyada time tak sanskari nhi rahega...awsome update...can't wait for the next update

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Rph09

@Rph09

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Posted: 6 years ago

#104

Aheemm!! I'm blushing! College started so now we'll get samaina romance. Thank god sameer is no more playboy. But after seeing naina he was uncontrollable! How will he control his desires in this 1 year!!! Still blushing yaar! Awesome update. I don't mind some (or a lot) asanskari romance. Naina is so naive. How'll be her reaction if he grab her and kiss her senseless😳 Plz plz give us next update ASAP!!

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myprimechicago

@myprimechicago

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#105

Sameer getting physical with so many girls was difficult to digest and I fact right now I don't find him suitable for pure innocent Naina

But the way you are narrating I am sure there will be a redemption phase for Sameer and excited for next update

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9999P

@9999P

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Posted: 6 years ago

#106

I loved the way you described naina oh god i can totally imagine her she must be looking so lovely Sammer tho kya main bhi lattoo ho gayi

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Yudkbh30

@Yudkbh30

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Posted: 6 years ago

#107

So Amazing update

Sameer toh gyo..

Plz update soon

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#108

A friend on forum recommended this story to me and so glad to have read it! Special thanks to that friend😊

I like how you have chosen a slightly different way to narrate the story and changed the settings of the characters. Read all parts in one go today. Sameer and Naina's interactions were small and impactful, nothing OTT. Poor Naina, you portrayed her turmoil, heartbreak, and fight back so well.

TBH I was disappointed in Part 4. I did not agree with Sameer's playboy ways since loneliness cannot be an excuse for losing control on self and behaving out of character, that is what separates the good from bad, the strong from weak. Had part 5 not be been posted today I might have given up from reading further. but you did a good job at redeeming Sameer's character atleast partially. Loved how friends, Naina or Nanu directly did not have to pull him out of his mess; he himself realized and rectified after hearing of Nanu's trust in him. That was the saving grace and spoke of Sameer's character.

Sameer is clearly besotted by Naina. Special mention to you giving Naina a make over instead of putting her through Behenji routine in college, it is nice to read a different take!

However, at this point what will be Naina's take after seeing him with other girls in the past is what I look forward to. Love is necessary but not enough alone to keep a relationship alive, trust and respect is needed as well. Sameer has shown concern and understanding for little Naina; now it will be interesting to see how to tackles this Naina or rather she deals with him😉

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gugul

@gugul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#109

New concept...nice stroy and beautiful narrative...I am liking it a lot now. And the last chapter has turned out very interesting. So Sameer wants to talk to the small pigtails girl Naina but now she has changed into a beautiful girl ! And Sameer is attracted towards her. But she is his best friend's sister! So he will be in a dilemma now. It will be interesting to see the interactions between Sameer and Naina in college.

Waiting for the next update! Keep writing!