Samaina FF - The Reluctant Groom and His Accidental Bride Ch 14 pg 139

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 6 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Prizi
amazing update

Thank you dear. Glad you are enjoying the story 😊

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#212

Originally posted by: Azraa01
I cant wait for the Samaina conversation
And I am hoping that they will meet in college and hopefully Sameer will be able to accept Naina whole-heartedly

Thanks Azraa 😊 Will update the next part with the conversation soon!

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#213

Originally posted by: ani25
Awesome update! Loved the flow of the story and that you are taking time to show everyone's pov and their reactions. You have kept it all so simple and no OTT drama from anyone. I can't wait to read next update with Samaina Convo. :)

Thanks dear 😊

No OTT drama is a prerequisite for YUDKBH! we really appreciate the simplicity and can-really-happen USP of this show. I already took some creative liberty with Guruji and Accidental Marriage start 😆 Usse jyada humare fanfom ko digest nahi hoga!

So pleased you are enjoying the flow and details presented.

Will update soon.

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#214

Originally posted by: mehraan
Ok MAY...Had read the stry 2 dys bac n was thinking of commenting soon...Finallyyy got the time😳..Sorry about tat..!!...i hve lost the habit of reading the fanfics but some of my frends suggested that i should gve urs a try!!!n im mighty impressed...
Wat a beautiful concept n wat a start...👏 I can very much visualize the entire scenario of the whole shaadi saga ...the characters behaving accordingly n the setup of an arrange marraige turning to love...I usually luv reading such concepts where there is nil attraction... n how 2 strangers bond together slowly n getting drawn in the journey of love ...the adjustmnts n situations !! I cnt wait for tjeir romance to start...n Sam neds to brace himself, the love which he couldnt fanthom to digest be his mom or the gals he dated...hes goin to be knocked down soon...Can v hve an update soon??!!...Tis is the problm wit me😆...Once i start..., i cnt stop n always waiting anxiously...
One more thing will v hve 16+18+ ahead🤣...Pls dnt shoot me ...The stry wud remain incomplete...trust me!!😆...

Hi Meher,

So pleased that you decided to give this story a try based on recommendations from your friends! Big thanks to all these friends 😳

Yeah, I wanted to explore something a little different. We have such amazing FFs both already completed and in-progress on the forum that I was feeling a little apprehensive. So far I have mostly tried my hand at OSs, so this is a totally different experience. Anyways, very excited to see the response so far.

Hmmm... 16+ 18+... yaar I have to confess that is really not my area of comfort.. writing wise! But, I will take some tutorials from other writers if required and try to include some before the story is over 😆

Thanks again and hope you enjoy the future updates too.

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Posted: 6 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Anjali33
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So Sameer and Naina are married now.. Their reactions as well as their family's reactions were so well described May 👏

They were numb for sometime, but when feeling sunk in, they reacted so differently!! Sameer denial was kinda natural, all the happenings would've been so bizzare for him😕 He left the house as a young lad with his Nanu and came back as someone's husband!!

Naina was little calmer, but of course she too has her own doubts, apprehensions, that unbelievable feeling.. Moreover, no-one in her family thought of coming to her, talking and providing her some mental relief

So happy you enjoyed the family reactions! 😊

Mujhe tumhara yeh wala line padhke bahoot hassi aayi - He left the house as a young lad with his Nanu and came back as someone's husband!! 😆 Such mein yaar... pura shock mein hi hoga. Bechara...

Naina has to stay calm... I don't think her family will ever indulge any sort of strong reaction from her. She is probably used to people deciding for her and letting her know as an afterthought or as FYI.

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Posted: 6 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Anjali33
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Agarwals ko ditto show jaisa rakha h tumne May!! Wahi ever instructing Taiji, sentimental Chachiji, apni dhun mein magn Rakesh sir, filmy Preeti😆

Koi chahta h bidaai jaldi ho koi chahta h der se ho.. Sameer to chahta h ho hi nhi I want it to be soon yaar

Chachu is so impressed with Sameer.. Just that he doesn't realise he's the 'reluctant groom' who hasn't accepted his bride yet

That little hope of Naina, that Sameer would call her.. Aww that has my heart❤️

And finally, he did call her😃 But then I'm curious to know what bomb he'll drop

Thanks for the 2 separate comments to cover 2 updates Anji 🤗

I think we have a good sort of mix of characters to work with in the Agarwal family. there always someone we can use to convey a certain emotion or present a POV 😆 And if they start acting out of character... do char updates unke redemption ke liye hi lag jaayenge!

Again this had me in splits - Koi chahta h bidaai jaldi ho koi chahta h der se ho.. Sameer to chahta h ho hi nhi You have an awesome sense of humour!

I think Naina is like most girls of her generation who were conditioned to believe that marriage after a certain age was just around the corner and not a distant reality. Plus humare hero ko dekhke kuch kuch hona toh banta hi hai 😉

Hope you keep enjoying the future updates too!

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Posted: 6 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: myprimechicago
Loved your update dear...
I am expecting Sameer will kill the tiny expectation built up in Naina's heart after this phone convo...
But one way its good that both start their college interactions with zero expectation and start learning and falling for each other 😊😊

Thank you dear! So good to know you enjoyed the last update 😊

Lets see how close your expectations turn out... will try to update soon!

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#218

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Very well written update. Congratulations . You have a great talent for weaving a beautiful story. It's a fantastic plot ofcourse.
Such positive and responsible Chachiji. Sour Tai ji. Practical and affectionate Chacha ji. Thank God Rakesh choose to shut up. Poor bewildered Naina.

Conversation with Sameer might not be a easy one. After all he's the accidental groom. And Naina still hasn't come in terms with this accidental marriage.

But I think common college and phone conversations will break the ice and by the end of academic year all will be sorted.

Happy writing .

Cheers

Thanks Priya 😊

Glad to see you like the update and the plot so far! Accidental marriage will be hard for anyone to come to terms too 😆 And that to a stranger!

Hope you enjoy the future updates and the story as it unfolds.

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Posted: 6 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: mystique123
May...this update is a beauty⭐️
I loved how you showed the differences in the characters of 2 set of couples, both of them who kind of share same relationship with Naina. On hand, there is Anand and Bela, who are parental goals whose conversation was mainly around Naina's happiness and Shagun for Sameer.. They are adorbs and their love for Naina is ❤️ Other hand, the eldest members of the family, Taiji and Tauji concerned about reducing their burden.Irony runs in the family as well...sigh!!!!

What touched my heart was that little conversation Bela had with Naina. When Naina was in a mess, unable to comprehend what was happening and scared about her future, Bela with her motherly love just wiped it off.Mother's Love is that fuel that makes you do the impossible⭐️

Nanaji's resolve to give importance to education was a great gesture and even in the midst of all the confusion, it was endearing to see chachaji also putting forth the importance of Naina's education. Though unintentional, another blessing came in from Sameer when he outright rejected any dowry. When one door closes, another opens and this holds absolutely true for Naina❤️

The uneasiness, unwillingness and nonacceptance in Sameer is kind of making me restless too. Often we hear people are scared of commitment and in case of Sameer it happened at the most unexpected time.And the phone call has just elevated my anxiety 😳

Eager to know how Sameer and Naina will embark on the journey called LIFE !!!!

Lots of Love 🤗

Thanks Sweetie!! 😊

Once again... it's so awesome when readers pick up things that the writers subtly and sometime not so subtly try to emphasize on. I really wanted to highlight the discrepancy between those 2 Agarwal couples and their way of thinking.

Chachaji and Nanaji are two truly sane adults... with the right priorities for the most part..

Ha ha ha.. Sameer ne without thinking bhi dowry ke mamle mein sahi stand liya.. Bechare ko dulhan bhi nahi chahiye.. aur log dahej dene nikle hai! 😆

Commitment like marriage is obviously scary... time toh lagega dono ko.. to understand the implications and make a decision

Love to you too Isha!