TS: Kindling Hope (Part 2 updated- Page 10)

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anjalijain0804

@anjalijain0804

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

I loved it!!! It was perfect nd ur words are awsowaw I can feel there emotions... Plz update next part soon

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Inayat

@Princesswarrior

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

This is one of the best pieces I have read so far..⭐️... Absolutely lovely, fabulous 👏and a bit touching 😭piece of writing. The story wasn't a fairy tale but something which many couples (unfortunately) face in this real world. I could easily connect and understand thier situation.👏 Their conversation was sweet yet simple, something what you expect from a normal ' real world ' couple. You did a great job here👏. Keep it up .👍🏼 You described their emotions really well... Bravo.👏 Eagerly waiting for the next part.😉😆 Update soon...

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Sur, this is so beautifully written! Why the questions in your mind?? The emotions, dialogue and behaviour of characters is just spot on.

Life is like this... just when we think we have found our paradise, life tosses a challenge our way with the potential to shatter our idea of paradise.

Most women grow up with the idea that they do not fulfill their life's purpose till they become mothers. It is so closely tied in with our sense of identity. Probably is similar for men too.. maybe a few degrees less.

Sameer wanting to protect her form being disillusioned with herself is so endearing and also the true mark of deep love. Naina is a smart cookie and might probably realise that the issue lies with her once the treatment starts but just knowing how much he wants to protect her from all the pain will make all the difference.

Kudos for taking on such a sensitive but important topic! 🤗

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bmk28

@bmk28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Sur, thanks for the PM!! I loved reading it totally. It's very different yet quite realistic. I have observed that you try and get realism built into your story which makes it very unique and connected. Happy to know that you have next part already lined up as I can't wait to read it.

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meinfrau14

@meinfrau14

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

You have beautifuly written about the pain and anxiety many couples go through while planning for a baby . This is a very sensitive topic and thank you for writing about it in such a profound and moving manner !

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Why are you apprehensive when the story and the writing is so beautiful that it made my eyes water...I am glad that you chose this topic...I can sense how painful it would be to be denied motherhood, it's so heartbreaking! 😭

So, Sam lied but I am scared till when can he keep the secret hidden? You can say, I am intrigued to read more...😃 It would be a hard task too when Naina can understand the meaning behind Sam's each body language and the reports hasn't marked it's presence yet.

They will come through this too- life is not a bed of roses always!

One strongest point is Sameer is extremely supportive, he lied too just to avoid the shattered Naina. Their love sometimes makes me too emotional. ❤️

I loved the fact that you allowed Sameer to grieve about the situation, he needed that lone time or else he could never comfort Naina. That subtle touch of the fact stole my heart!

And also the mention of how it pained Naina to see her brother, sister and friend having kids when she tried and had none. That state would be so painful. 😭

If you say you haven't written nicely the next time, I won't talk to you! 🤔😆

Waiting for the next and I am sorry for not so nice review, I am struggling between everything and not getting enough time, I know though you will understand! ⭐️

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Shri

@Shri_12

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+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Kudos to you for writing the story. Already read twice. I love it when fictional characters deal with real life issues in a practical way. You did the exact thing. Fertility issues are common in today's world and the way Samaina are going through it is realistic.

In real life there may or may not be a happy ending bit I wish Samaina have a happy ending.

Update soon.

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Yudkbh30

@Yudkbh30

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

I seriously cried on reading this

😭 so so so Beautiful

MY SAMAINA

Love it

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vidrev

@vidrev

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Wow what a post. Really good. It's really a different thought. I expected that ssmeer will take all the blame on him. He is such a gem. They are adorable couple who never leave the other in trouble.

Very nice write-up dear. Your writings are really fabulous. They are kids for each other. They don't need another kid. Love their bonding.

Thanks for the pm dear. Keep up your good work.

Enjoyed reading to the core. 👏

❤️

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Ross11

@Ross11

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+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Beautiful piece of work Sur. Emotional roller coaster.

Though I was not into this fanfic world earlier but now when I decided to write more, wanted to know what is there in the market. 😆

I loved the part where after knowing fact Sam takes shower and you have perfectly portrayed his condition and his earlier imaginations. It's purely a gender thing😉...Kudos for making it real and believable.

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