TS: Kindling Hope (Part 2 updated- Page 10) - Page 10

Originally posted by: mystique123

Res

Its so emotional that I find it hard even to type Sur. Will comment once my tears dry off. Such an amazing piece⭐️

Originally posted by: loftynoni

Sur

woww

I am in tears.

I never expected this story to turn out this way.

Sad but true story of life

A happy ending indeed

But I can not explain how deeply I am touched by this one

The tragedy which might have hit people at that time or which occurs is indescribable

How you can write so beautifully

They gave life to a child

something which many can't

They were even blessed with a daughter of their own

happy about that too

And the ending the way both of them compared their daughter to each other could actually imagine happening

awesome job Sur

I am sorry but I am failing to express my thoughts

but you my friend are just wowww

truly woww

Love

suhani

Originally posted by: Ross11

Sur,

It was an amazing update, first time ever I read some TS on Samaina and I loved it. Now I think I should give a try to your other works but I don't read pieces connected to the show tracks as when the track is over and we know how it is wrapped up, I don't feel connected with the story. So, have you written something like this in past toh do tell me.

Back to this story, you have aptly described earthquack and how it has changed human lives. I have almost made peace with Samaina happily ever after with their son Nitant but then their biological baby was a twist, kept me wondering was it essential? If it was toh I would have loved reading their first reaction on this happy news and their journey in short from pregnancy to delivery. You are fab writer and you very well described their emotional state, I could feel their condition throughout the story.Hats off!

Originally posted by: dreamyp

It was damn beautiful yr.. rula diya muje.. sachhii..Loved it alottt...

Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Emotional tha bahut par happy ending bahut acha laga ..Sach ab pura focus EU par karna next week chahiye hame please .Aur fir dussehera Diwali ki chuttiyan celebration...but usse phele ek update kardena

Originally posted by: Rahul126545

No words to say...bahut acha tha emotional tha bahut but happy ending samaina ki cute so daughter Aur adopted son bhi complete family bhi...ab pura focus EU par karna Diwali dussehera celebration se pehle ek update Kar hi Dena next week please

Originally posted by: chaaru26

Such a wonderful piece...

I read both parts in one go and serioulsy had tears in my eyes while reading the last part.. They say that every dark cloud has a silver lining. You proved this in your OS. Be it Sameer's unconditional love and support or the tragic situation in the last part which gave them a new start in their life. It is such a sensitive issue that you handled very beautifully.. You accurately captured each emotion. It was just perfect. I dont know any more words to praise this TS...

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

I checked the thread everyday to see if you had posted the next part, and finally my patience turned out to be fruitful and worth it.. 😆

Ohh! 😆 I'm glad to hear that dear that you were waiting for an update to this one! 😊

What an amazing update ! 👏 We all are fortunate enough to be safe now, with our loved ones, but not all have that kind of luck. May god bless the souls of the people who lost their lives in the natural Hazard then or anywhere else. May god also bless their families to bear the loss. 😭

True! It was indeed one of the saddest times our country faced! 😕 The stories of devastation that I heard as a child, still ring in my ears whenever I hear the word earthquake. I used my memory to recreate the scene here!

Coming back to the story, do you drink some kind of magical portion to be able to write so well and beautifully??? 😆 The way you describe the situation, a person's emotions or his nature just touches the heart of the reader . Every thing feels so real as if you can see it happening in front of you.. I am glad naina went to another clinic to know the truth. And I absolutely loved her response to it. Though she was shattered but she looked at the positive side of the situation and rather than misunderstanding sameer, understood him.😃. She was thankful to god to bless her with sameer. . The conversation between the couple was pure love. ❤️

OMG! That's a huge compliment dear! 😳😳🤗Thank you so much! And yes- this is one perfect couple we have here- they understand the unsaid between them! 😊

I never expected you to bring the earthquake twist here.. It was really unexpected .. But the way you described it, touched my heart. It's true that something which destroyed people's lives, also connected people like a family which helps each other in tough times. You touched another sensitive topic of plight of families and wives of army men. We all should do our bit to help them.

Yes dear! It's true that we should do our bit to help the people who lay down their lives for our country, without thinking about their own families- just so that we can live in peace n happiness with our loved ones.

You ended the story brilliantly well. Samaina's kids were so cute😳.. Adoption is a serious topic and the masses should consider it in a better way. Finally god blessed the 2 with their daughter. What a perfect family they now have.. But I was a bit downhearted💔🥺 reading demises of samaina 's families - pandit, chachaji,etc.(and shockingly felt bad for Taiji and pralay too)😭

And the end was cute, relatable and double meaning.. 😉

I'm so glad you enjoyed the end of the story! Yep- Samaina's kids are cute! I wanted to show adoption here- a blessing from God- both to the child and the parents here. And then sometimes, when we stop worrying about things, they materialize- like their baby Prishi! 😳

But yes- life doesn't come with a guarantee. Lives were given, but lives were taken as well.

Haha- and yes, you understood the double meaning I implied there! 😆😉

Well written. Keep it up. 👏⭐️👍🏼

Thanks a lot Inayat!

Lots of love

Inayat