TS : RISING IN LOVE (Part 5 - 16+ ,concluding on page 8 updated) - Page 2

Originally posted by: ssree

well written WRTW.

loved the last para of sameers thoughts thats the same thought i think many of us still have in mind

do write often

Thank you !! Am glad that you liked it.

Originally posted by: Anjali33

After all the breakup, friendship, Sharad Sunaina thing happened.. Sameer's apprehensions are natural.. Nobody can get back to normal as easily as they did in the show

Please update soon Ashu Di

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it. Yes , there has to be a transition. Its not easy to move on just like that , after a fight.

Originally posted by: vidrev

Fab one. But I was not in the mood to read last para yaar. Plz no more sorrows dear. Again CVS may get inspired from our forum dear. Only happy moments plz. Plz do continue soon.

Happy moments will come..I promise.. 😊

Originally posted by: BushraN

All the tracks which were not perceived well enough by the CVs were covered by you in a rather beautiful manner.. You just gave a perfect explanation to every doubt I had...

Would love to read further, please continue...

Thank you so much , I am glad you liked it.!!

Ashu I am happy to see you back with a story! Looking forward to how the story unfolds. I was very disappointed how the makers closed the break up track after all the build up. What we needed is conversations and confession by Sameer/Naina on how much they actually hurt each other especially Naina's initial step.
You have always done an amazing job at describing emotional turmoil of characters (My Stolen Heart still remians one of my top favs). This part gave a nice sneak peak to the initial build up. Waiting for he next updates 😊

Originally posted by: JaySee

Wonderful story. Can feel the inner turmoil of Sameer. But the last para is quite sad. Don't want to have any more separation or Misunderstandings for them. Whatever the problem is, I want them face it together.

That inner turmoil is what was missed in the show. And their thoughts about each other during the time of separation. Its not easy to get back just as they showed. I agree there had to be some conversation between them. Thanks for reading , and am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: praneeth1

hi WRTW . i read u r posts i liked ur positive balanced views on episodes. i liked it .u described whole story till Naina GS very well

sri

Thank you so much !! I hope you would like this one too.. 😊

PART 2

Does that mean I dont like her anymore?? ...I DONT KNOW ...really?? No thats not true . I LOVE HER. I LOVE HER MORE THAN MY LIFE and I DONT WANT TO LOOSE HER AGAIN. That was my problem. I am not sure of her love for me. I am only sure of my feelings for her. I am insecure. She could again leave me for her anyone in her family. What if they come up with a guy who is much better than me. Who has a job , a name and a bank balance of his own. What do I have , nothing other than the family business which my Nanu left for me, but do I have the experience even to handle that precious gift from my Nanu? I knew the answer and that realisation drained the blood out of me. I wondered when I couldnt even handle my Nanu's precious gift , how am I going to handle my love life?? As I walked towards the main entry of the college , my vision was getting blurred , my steps were wavering and I knew it was all going to collapse, there was only darkness in front of me.

Later , when I managed to open my eyes, I was lying on a bed surrounded by familiar faces . My family and my friends were all there but my eyes was searching for that one face from the crowd. My girl was missing. I slowly strained my eyes to the door and there she stood outside the door, looking at me with painful eyes. She smile at me and then slowly walked away from the door. I wondered why she didnt stay back? Was she not worried for me ? In these months of separation has her affection for me decreased? Again the same wavering feeling hit me, I was loosing my consciousness. I need her with me , I need hher...my Naina..It took one week and three counselling sessions for me to be able to get back home from the hospitals. Doctors said I was too stressed and very depressed. My Mama - Mami understood the reason behind this and decided that I should change college.

"Sameer , you will see her again and you will get depressed. We don't think this girl cares for you."
"Mama ji, no one is the reason for my health. Its just me and now I am fine."
"Sameer beta , then promise me that you will not talk to that girl. We heard from your friends that she is not of our cast and then she comes from a middle class household rt? Any day Sunaina is a better girl for you."

I knew Mama Mami was money minded but I also knew that they will do any thing for me. Till date I had never named the girl in my life. They had assumed it was Sunaina. But after one week at the hospital they knew , that it was someone else who I was in love with. Now was the time, they had the right to know.

"Mami ji , I dont like Sunaina as you think. She just my classmate. The girl I love is Naina Agarwal and no one can take her place no matter what but at the moment do I want to think about my love life. So if you guys love me then please dont ask anything about Naina, when I am ready I will let you know."

I saw Mami ji signaling Mama ji not to have any discussion on the topic. I understood her plan. She thought probably with time I would forget Naina. She didn't know the depth our love.

"Fine!! I wont ask about it. You take rest now. I have told your Principal that you will be on leave this week as well."
"Thank you Mama ji. Mama ji , there is something else I want to tell you ..."
"Yes Sameer , why do you want to hesitate ? You know you can talk to me rt??"
"I will come with you to office. I want to help you in Business. I think its time that I got serious in life and it will keep me away from unnecessary thoughts."

The last line did work. They didnt want me to get back to Naina, especially Mami. She hated Naina and her middle class background and the other thing was Sunaina's father gave a lot of Business to us . And I was sure her father had the same thought in his mind as that of Mama- Mami. Get the two of us married. What they didnt know is I am not for sale. I had to plan my life in such a way that no one would take anything that belongs to me, this included Business and Naina. This time its going to
be my brain vs the world and I am going to win it .

"In that case why dont you come with to Delhi . You can also meet your mom."
"Oh Great!! Thank you Mama ji. So when are we going and how long will we be there?"
"Day after tomorrow and we will be there for 4 days."
"Fine , I will start packing then.."
I thanked god for this break. I needed time to relax and plan. Think about our future and how to go about it. I knew we had very less time as Naina's family might search for another guy for her to get married. I only had 1 year and 8 months in my hand. I had to think fast. I missed her a lot . Its been more than a week since I saw or even talked to her. After her visit to hospital , she hadnt bothered to disturb me. All she would do was to send flowers from her small garden through Munna. Munna , never told me this. I understood it. I acted ignorant. If she wanted to play hide and seek, I was ready. This time she will come my way. I did try walking behind her but the end result was not favorable for both of us. It destroyed us and our relationship to a large extant. I didn't want to play it her way now. I wanted it my way.

One week just went by quickly. My time with my mom this time was way better than what I had thought. But it also felt nice to be back home , where I belonged . Yes at my Nanu's home. That was my home.

"Sameer !!"
"Munna Pandith!! How are you guys??"
"We are fine . How are you and how was your Delhi trip??"
"It was good. Got to learn a lot about Business."
"How is Mausi?? Did you stay there or in a hotel?"
"Nah we stayed there. Papa wanted us to stay there and mama also agreed. Dhadhi had gone to Singapore with Rohan and Deepika."
"Nice that you had time to spend with your mom."
"Yes!! That lone time with my parents helped me to understand them better too...I guess with time wounds heal rt?? In fact papa took me to his factories , so got lil learning from him as well.

Munna Pandith, I have decided to work every evening 2 hours at office. You guys anyways come only by 7 in the evening by then I will finish my work too."

"Oh thats good. Better to get a lil serious early Sameer else again Naina will be someone else's." Jumped in Pandith with his comment.
"NOPE. Not this time...but why do you think so? Is her family searching for another proposal?"
"Nooo...nothing like that just told." Added Munna quickly.
One look at Pandith's face and I knew there was something that he wanted to say, but was stopping him.
"So how is Naina??"
"She is fine . Sameer, Did you both fight again??" Questioned Pandith.
"No , why ? "
"She seemed very pale these days and doesn't talk much. Besides she didn't know that you were going to Delhi...hence asked. And people are talking all sorts of things..."
"Pandith Shut up. Nothing Sameer, you know how it is in college rt?? They just like to cook up stories. Bhabhi kept sending those flowers from her garden everyday when you were at the hospital. She loves you a lot."
"My going to Delhi was not planned hence I couldn't tell her. So what is the Gossip?"
"That you and Naina broke up and she is going around with Vicky." Said Pandith in one breath.
This was not something I was expecting to hear. I was dreaming of a future together and had also started taken first step towards it by joining office. I forgot she had to be kept in loop about our plans. That day the way I walked out , I am sure she might have thought I was angry with her. The way she had left hospital had not given a good vibe. The only hope I had was the flowers that she sent and my trust in her.
"You dont bother. Bhabhi can never love anyone else other than you Sameer." Stated Munna confidently.
"I know. Vicky is the chairperson for our college Student Council and Naina is GS , so they will have to work together. I trust her."

My behavior towards her that days wasnt anything that could be called natural behavior. It was rude. I need to talk to her and get her to speak too. Thats what I will do tomorrow first thing in the morning. Munna and Pandit continued with their banter and updating me about all the stories and gossips that I missed in past two weeks but my mind was lost and wondered how could I have just walked out of that class with out telling her what was in my mind. I had to speak to her that day but no , I didnt . After they left , I tried calling her but the phone kept ringing . I tried our two ring signal too, nothing worked. Now I was really worried. Would she have thought that I was angry with her and that I didnt want to continue our relationship...would she have moved on with Vicky. Night seemed so looong.

PS: Here ends part 2. Part 3 to follow soon. So let me know what you all think about this update. Please do drop in your comments and thoughts. It encourages me to write more. Eagerly waiting to read all your comments.

PART 3

Sound of the alarm blared into my ears. I quickly got up and stopped it. I wanted to sleep. I was tired and feverish, but I decided to go to college. What if Sameer turns up today. I wanted to meet him and talk to him. I know I had hurt him, but he needed to know why. We hadnt talked at all after our breakup. If he doesnt want me in his life then he has to tell me and not walk off. I hope at least today he turns up. I slowly dragged myself out of the bed to freshen up. Since Chacha , chachi and Preethi was not there , I had to do all the house work too. Arjun Bhaiya just came at night to sleep and would leave for college from Tayi ji's house in the morning. Tayi ji, Tauji and Pappa never spoke to me after my marriage proposal broke up with Sharad. In front of Chacha ji she had agreed she would give me food for next two days till Chachi is back. But yesterday morning she came and said , she is not well hence asked me to do the cooking myself or eat from outside. I knew the truth, so never bothered. I just said OK. She had expected me to ask if I she wanted my help. But I didnt bother , not after what she did with my life. This time I was sure , I was not going to spoil my life for people who never cared for me. She did a lil bit of cribbing but I didnt budge then she left. I quickly got dressed up and popped in a biscuit and drank some black tea, so that I could take Paracetamol. Hopefully that should reduce the fever.

It was 9:30 AM and Sameer was not to be seen today too. Since our first two hours accountancy teacher was on leave, I decided to go to library. From the library I saw our favorite bench under the Gulmohar tree. That was my favorite spot in college. No one knew abt this place of ours as it was slightly away from the building and only if you see from the top corridor you could see that there was a Bench hidden behind those beautiful Gulmohar trees .Some of the best moments of my life were spent
under that tree talking to Sameer. I discarded the idea of reading and took the stairs that lead to the ground floor to reach the garden. Thought of spending some quiet and lone time there.


10:30 AM.

Thank god , Accountancy teacher was on leave else I would have got a mouthful from him in front of the entire class. He wouldnt believe that my car tire got punctured on the way. It took some time for that guy to fix it. Anyways no harm done. Now I need to find my lady. She is not in the class, no where near the activity room , student council room or Principals room. So where is she?? Munna said he had seen her in the morning. Must be at the Library. I searched every floor of the library and as I was about to take the stairs , I saw someone sitting at our favorite spot...Yes!! Its her . As I descended the stairs I could see a guy walking towards her, I didnt have to think twice to know who it was . VICKY !!

"Hi Naina!!"
"Hi.."
"I have been in this college for the past two years but never knew about this place. Its beautiful and very peaceful."
"Yes , it is . Its mine and Sameer's favorite spot. Most of the time when we needed some "OUR" time , we always come here."
"Oh..Ok...So where is Sameer? He hasnt been to college for sometime now. I hope all well."
"Yes , he was not well. Then he went to Delhi along with his Mama ji to be with his parents. He was back on saturday."
"hmmm...ok . So , is he planning to come today."
"Why what happened? You wanted to speak to him about something ??"
"NO!! Nothing...You know Naina, thought you ppl were not on talking terms . I mean ppl were saying you both broke up..."
"Really?? I dont know why ppl thought that way. Anyways cant blame them . Only very few ppl know what we both mean to each other ...so thats ok. We dont care what others think."

Thats my girl !! My Naina was back. This conversation was music to my ears. SHE LOVES ME!! ONLY ME!! I could hear her trying to get him out of that place. She sounded

tired and weak. I couldnt see her face from where I was standing. I was wondering if I should walk in now or wait for him to leave.

"So Vicky , you didnt tell me why you were searching for me??"Said Naina
"Well , we had to decide on the cultural fest date and venue . Also the invite list of the colleges that are going to participate. Their accommodations etc has to be decided."
"But Principal mam said that its going to be hosted late November . We still have three months to go. So why the hurry??"
"Better to start early than the last minute rush. Have found couple of venues, thought we could go and see that today"
"Not today Vicky ,Sorry...I ..."

I knew she needed help and I also knew what Vicky was upto. Not again . No one is even trying to get close to her and push her to do something that she doesnt want to do. I had to step in.

"Hi Deary "
"Hey Sameer !! How are you and how is Your dad, Vishaka aunty, Deepika and Rohan??"
"All of them are fine. Hi Vicky , how are you ??"
"Am good Sameer."
"So whats up ??"
"We were discussing about Cultural festival Sameer. Vicky thought we should go and select the Venue."
"Ok. Then fine you carry on..will talk later." I played it cool. I wanted to show to Vicky that I had complete trust in my girl. But what Naina did took both Vicky and me by surprise. She held my arm with both of hers and looked deep into my eyes and said "DONT GO!! I wasnt planning to go with him. In fact I had told him a NO! I wanted to talk to you."

Vicky understood what she was trying to convey. It was very clear that she had chosen HER MAN.

"Ok then , I will take a leave. We will discuss this later Naina. Bye for now." With that he left the scene as quickly as he could.The moment he was out of sight. She pulled her hand away from me. Thats when I realised how hot her hand was ..she was feverish.
"Sorry about that. Just because people think you are not there in my life doesnt mean that place is open for others to walk in. I had been trying to avoid his advances but he doesnt seem to understand. At least this will keep him at bay."
"Naina , you are not well. You have fever . Your burning hot. Come lets go to hospital first then we will talk."
"I took Paracetamol in the morning. Should be fine. "
"NO!! We are going to the hospital. Then I will call chacha ji. OK??"
"Chacha , Chachi and Preethi have gone for a wedding at Chachi's mom's place. So I am alone here. Arjun Bhaiya comes for sleep over. They will come today afternoon by 2:00PM. Once they come I will go with Chachi Ji to the doctor."
"We are going to the hospital and you are coming with me. Anyways Chacha ji will be here today , its already 11:00 . Come lets go."
"Sameer please let us sit and talk for sometime . I will go to the doctor with Chachi ji."
"Stop arguing with me Naina and for once learn to listen to others also. It cant be your decision always . Do you get that ??!!"
Saying so he just took my hand bag and walked towards his car. All I could do was follow him. On the way he spoke to the Principal about my health and told her that he was taking me to the hospital. Our relationship was an open secret . Every one knew about it which included teachers. Principal and JBR had even started seeing us as couples. Drive to the hospital was quiet. None of us spoke. As we reached the hospital , he helped me out of the car and his hand was firm on my shoulders . At the reception desk , the lady asked a list of details about the patient.
"You are her relative ?"
"I am her to be husband. Her fiance." Came the answer from him and I was shocked. I kept looking at his face for answers but he was busy filling the form.
"You go and sit there. I will pay and come."
There were lots of questions running thru my mind. What if his parents know about this . What will they think. They are not going to accept it and why was he being so adamant??
"There are two more patients before us ." Saying so he sat near me.
"Sameer, you could have just told that we are friends or classmates rt?? What if your parents come to know about this."
"Naina this is not the place or time to talk. We will meet the doctor first. " I knew , he was not going to talk now. Ever since he returned from Delhi , his adamancy had just increased. It was like he had planned something for us.

PS : Here goes the third chapter. Please let me know what you think about this update. Eagerly waiting for your comments.

Off course I want to read more... If we closely look at the story in serial toh breakup track ka proper ending nhi hua. . The track started with Naina backing out from the relation Kyunki she knew her family would not accept her love but is track K end mei they patched up.. .But ab tak Naina ne sameer ko assurance nhi diya she wont repeat this and leave him again... what if chachaji refuses some day tb kya Naina Phir aisa karegi sameer k sath.. In Sab questions Ka jawab Naina ne sameer ko nhi diya... I really hope I can get those answers through Your TS. ...