Sameer OS - Walking Away

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
It was amazing dear
can you pls continue It?
omg ! I can't see Sameer in pain😭
I hope Samaina separation will end very soon in serial too
Lots of love

Thanks dear and so glad you liked it 😊

Yeah, me too hoping that the separation will not last for too long. It's really painful to watch. Hoping to see our Samaina stronger and happier very very soon!

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Heart wrenching! The nightmare he had always dreamt turned suddenly turned very much unfamiliar, as the face of the woman has changed- it was His Naina or was she really his? Beautifully representation of how Sam's thoughts were changing about the break up with a due course of time. Starting from the determined attitude to slowly the hope getting wavered and the current situation was brought as a comparison what his mother did to him years ago!
Amazing piece, May!👏

Hi Shreya,

Thanks so much for your lovely comment dear! Reading it I am happy to see that I have been able to convey my thoughts and feelings effectively. I really wanted to show the different stages that he would go through trying to grapple with this change and also his old insecurities flaring up again.

Big hug to you dear!!!

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mystique123
May...The title took away a piece of my heart😭
The loneliest moment in someone's life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart, and all they can do is stare blankly, Heart wrenching to witness this state of Sameer.

It is said the Eternal Quest of every human being is to shatter his loneliness. Sameer has been fighting the demon of loneliness since childhood and then God blessed him with his Angel, Naina. But now the loss of the only breather in his life has turned him into a living vegetable.The nasty thoughts of loneliness has made him hostile and unfriendly towards himself.This has slowly turned him to be his own worst enemy. The isolated mind has made him self-destructive and the inner critic in him is encouraging him to avoid others and denounce his life and proceed towards Sanyas.

You have become a master in describing even the minutest detail of this inner turmoil. Hats off to you dear👏

Lots of Love❤️

Hi Isha,

Your comment has so much depth! It is so heartwarming when readers connect so well with the thoughts I have tried to express. Thank you dear! I especially liked this line in your comment - Eternal Quest of every human being is to shatter his loneliness. It is SO true! We all seek validation of our being via the importance we hold in others heart and life.

Thanks again dear!

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Anjali33
May, this was superb👏

When everyone we love, leaves us alone, this question really haunts us.. What's the point of even existing when nobody cares?!

You've wonderfully expressed Sameer's pain n anguish

Thanks Anjali 😊

So pleased that you liked it and I was able to portray Sameer's pain and despair successfully.

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: vidrev
The pain what sameeer is facing is clearly depicted. It's really paining to see samaina in that situation and you have penned it very well.

Thanks so much dear! Happy you liked it 😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Beautifully portrayed Sameer's anguish and turmoil.

Thank you so much!! 😊

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_shweta98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

This was indeed very heartbreaking..

you totally made us feel and somewhat understand to a great extent why Sameer was taking this drastic step of taking sanyas.

loved it so much..

keep writing.. loving your works.

extremely sorry for the very late comment.😊

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May

@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: _shweta98
This was indeed very heartbreaking..
you totally made us feel and somewhat understand to a great extent why Sameer was taking this drastic step of taking sanyas.
loved it so much..
keep writing.. loving your works.
extremely sorry for the very late comment.😊

Hi Shweta, thanks for your comment dear and there is absolutely no need to apologise dear! I am just pleased that you enjoyed the OS! Glad that you felt it gave you an insight into Sameer's pain and thought process.