Sameer OS - Walking Away - Page 2

The pain what sameeer is facing is clearly depicted. It's really paining to see samaina in that situation and you have penned it very well.

Beautifully portrayed Sameer's anguish and turmoil.

May, well done yaar 👏

You have done an awesome job of describing what one goes through when in loneliness, when there is no hope left. Loneliness is one ugly thing it can lead people to take decisions to such an extent that they can't differentiate between right or wrong, you question ur own existence.

The pain sameer was going through was described so beautifully and was portrayed emotionally in a perfect sync. We can feel the pain he was going through with him. Thank you fot this. Awesome job as usual 😊

It was amazing may.. How accurately u described sameer's inner frustration and anguish and how hurt he is because of naina's one sided decision

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: Journalism_worm

It was so nice didn't felt like fiction tbh pls continue

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Wow May! You've depicted Sam's turmoil so well...I could relate to his anguish n the way he concludes he was never meant to be loved...love always eludes him...n people he loves n who love him always put him as a 2nd priority! That's not fair! The dream sequence was so well thought of.

Would you be continuing with Sanyas part? You know Sanyas where in Pune 😆

Loved to read this one!

Sur

Originally posted by: gugul

You have put your thoughts so beautifully... Just loved it. You won't believe I had tears in my eyes thinking of poor Sameer. After losing Nanu he had to shift to Delhi and he felt so unwanted there. Towards the year end it was little better as he started getting love of his siblings... But then that manhoosiyat ka drama.

But Naina brought him back to his original self and he was finally happy thinking about his future with naina. He had started planning about house, work, marriage and babies too. Suddenly everything is snatched away from him and he is again alone. Feel so sorry for him.

Just hope Naina comes back to him ASAP. Naina has taken a very difficult decision... Let's see how she copes with her situation. Her life also revolved around Sameer.

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

You have beautifully expressed his despair with your words... this is how he must be feeling when second time... the most important person in his life left him alone

You start questioning the reason for your existence and with no other solution. ... you distance yourself from everyone

Too good...loved reading this😃👏

Thanks Manisha!

Yes, I believe he would be in a desolate mind set following this breakup. And once all these feelings and ideas started crowding my mind, just had to put them into words.

So pleased you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: Radkam

U wrote nicely but just cemented the pain & anguish v all r feeling!!!! I didn't want him to take sanyas...he sd stay & fight for Naina like she did during manhoosiyat! 😕

Hi Radhika,
when I initially started writing it, I was only focusing on people walking away from him again and again. I don't know if the CVs will show any of his earlier insecurities or resentment wrt his mom resurfacing during this track, but I personally think in real life it would be inevitable.

But towards the end felt that deciding to walk away himself would probably be his defense mechanism.

I don't want him taking Sanyas either!! :(