OS/TS: Dhak dhak karne laga - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Too cute
Sameers imagination is going to get him in trouble one day.
Just hope Naina would give in to him.
Thank you for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
TS bnao isse 😳 honeymoon tak chala gya sameer tharki maheshwari🤣
Update soon mahnn❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Thank you for the PM, Sur... What a timing to post and read it.. Scene from the serial was fresh in mind and then your version added fire to the imagination...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Sur if this was in haste then I would suggest that you write more of such. Am really surprised at how you have depicted the entire scenario from yesterday's episode with finesse. While imagining sameer drool over madhuri the caps from yesterday's episode were constantly popping into my mind and I couldn't stop the giggles from coming. But what the episode lacked your os had, that is the much awaited tharki maheshwari imagining naina instead of Madhuri and naina blushing to his advances and that hug in the theatre, Wow! Sur I think this os has plenty of opportunities to be turned into a three shots because I would love to know what happens after the movie especially will these thoughts give sameer sleepless nights or does naina realise that when he offered to drool over her instead he meant otherwise, you know what I mean. After all our samaina in the show are busy being too sanskari and it's high time they took a step further and your is seems to be that light in the dark tunnel.
Loved it
Edited by doublecross - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Haww Sur!tumahara Sameer toh kaafi tez nikla😉😆
Song chalu hua nahi ki apni heroine Ko woh sexy orange saree mein imagine kar liya😆
Waise toh kal ka scene kaafi on point tha😉
Aww...jealous Naina was so cute!!normally toh ladki itni seedhi saadhi hai,par ek jhatke me samajh gayi ki Sameer ke dimaag me kya hai😉
Sam being adorable at being caught red handed😆❤️
As usual,Naina Ko chidhane lagta hai...ab tak toh Naina ko iski adat padd jaani chahiye thi...just imagine agar Naina Ko pata hota ki woh usse Madhuri ki jagah pe imagine kar raha hai toh woh kitna blush Karti!!!!😆
Sur!!yaar,please ek story likh do na,jidhar Naina uske liye dress up Karti hai...preferrably woh saree mein😉
Yaa aur koi mast filmy outfit bhi chalegi😉😆hint:Bobby wali outfit😉
o❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Ouch!!!! Kya imagination hai Sur tumhari creatives se Pehle hi tumne imagine Kar Liya tha upcoming episode ... Ek toh episode Dekh k ouch wala scene Dimag se nai jaa rha and now this has added more fuel to the fire 😆 I seriously loved it bechara Naina Ya nai bechara sameer kitni bholi gf mili hai usko but I want u to add one more part to tell us the after effects of watching that Dhak Dhak song together 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Ouch!😉 Kya padha maine...☺️

Thank you Sur for putting this today...Isse kehte hein ''Episode Dekha/Dhamakewaale OS Phenka"😉

You went by the lyrics line by line ...I am so happy.Oh god..Popcorn khaya nahin gaya ladke se..Naina bechari kya jaane ki how the hormones are going haywire.😆

Ahh!Bechara full song nahin dekh paya.Naina bhi na bholi hai.

Ladka back on flirting mode..Waah!👏 "Tumko ghur lun aise? '' ..made me blush too..☺️

Ladka honeymoon mein moon ko bhi sharma ke chod dega..😆😆 Kya imagination hai...

His teasings are bang on.Naina film dekhna hi chod degi aur chudwa degi Sameer ka...😆

In private..Umm...My brain already conjuring up ...😉

Waiting for next soon..

Thanks for the PM and update soon plz.

With love-
Minu

Hey Minu darling! I know I'm late in the response...I'm glad you liked it...I know tumhara "hay" wala scene nai hai abhi...sochna padega...maybe in next part! 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Thanks dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😊wow super work .Thanks

Thanks dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mehraan

Wow surbhi ur a genius...Man xact like how the epsde was n cud very well see Naina out from ur stry n in the showw...2 gud dear...i was jus thinking wat will happen 2morrow n ur Os fits in perfectly providing the required respite to my restless DIMAG!!😆...So can v hve a nxt part on tis where Sam demands to c her in smewat similar avatar...😆 Loved the stry...!

Hey Meher...thanks dear!! I was so glad jab show mein similar reactions dikhaye! 😆 And it's kind of natural na...ladke to ladke hote hi na!

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