SamAina Drabble Series: Exploring Intimacy p.15

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Hey guys ! Just thought to finally post this. Had written it down ages ago. Hope you like it.


~~Ladoo Khana Hai~~

Sameer please maan jau na!'


'Nahin. Tum na jaao bas Preeti aur Swati par hi dhyan do'


Acha baba I am sorry na. I promise na aage se mera sara dhyan tumpar hoga.'


Mai nahi manta. Apne boyfriend ki toh fikar hi nahi hai. Bichara tumhare pyar mein mara jaa raha hai lekin nahi mere paas aate hi bhag jati ho.'


Haw Sameer. Itne dramebaaz mat bano. Kab kiya aisa?'


Kyun kal jab corridor mein hum ek doosre ki baahon mein the tab tum bhaag kyun gayi thi.'


Woh na mera ladoo khane ka mann kar raha tha.'


Jhooti. Tum toh Swati aur Preeti ke saath class mein baath kar baatein kar rahi thi.'


Tumhe dikhana padega shayad ki mera ladoo khane ka kitna mann kar raha tha.'


Naina kahan bhaag rahi ho. Mera dusra gaal bhi toh ekdum ladoo ki tarah gol hai. Aao na khalo! Acha ye nahi toh kamse kam mujhe toh ladoo chakhati jaao!'

No tamatars please. I have never written a drabble before. Its my first attempt. Kindly let me know if you like this then maybe I can post a few more that I have written.





(15+) here onwards

DRABBLE 2- P 3.

DRABBLE 3- P 4.

DRABBLE 4- P 5.

DRABBLE 5- P.7

DRABBLE 6- P.9

DRABBE 7- P.10

DRABBLE8- P.11 (16+)DRABBLE9- P.12(16+)

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Anmol333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice 👍🏼
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's was cute ... Do continue it .. please
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice
PL continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So cute. Yes true, Samaina's cheeks are just like laddoo only. But when they are together it will become like tomatoes. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow .. too good one ..
I loved it
Please pm me for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good one u need to continue it
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Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I have a soft spot for drabble as I started writing with them😃
This one was very much cute, Sam's cheeks are indeed like a ladoo and sulky Sam has my heart, always. 😳
Do post your other drabbles too😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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pls continue it dear
It was amazing
Loved it

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