Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130) - Page 94

Originally posted by: Yudkbhislove

Hey i read ur story in one go and loved it soo much... Kindly update the next part soon as i cant Wait for it

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

What happens next?!!

Please just make them talk once like they used to, just open up a bit

Their miscommunication makes me sad.

You write amazingly, making me feel the emotions.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: MANSHITA

New update plzz...

Originally posted by: Vandie

Please don't vanish all of a sudden and keep us waiting long for new update..😉

Lovely update.. waiting for the mystery of Naina's sudden marriage n her journey till date.. Diya's birth (though somewhere I think all of us know she has to be Sameer's daughter)

Update soon

Originally posted by: Yudkbhislove

Hey cant wait. . Kindly update soon..egar to read more

Originally posted by: Sivasri

Dono itna stubborn kyun hai??????

Hope in next part some situation make them talk about their past..

Story jab complete hogi na I vl read it completely

aise parts padne mein bahut expectations zyaada ho jaate Hain...Roz Roz update ka

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Sur Darling..🤗

Finally here.I am loving the way you are merging the realistic professional commitments along with personal commitments.When passionate lovers years ago are contract bound publisher-author duo..its difficult to feel and mentally taxing.I can feel to envision this as well as putting them into words is more taxing for you.Hats off and whistles for you.👏

Hi Minu! Thank you for your kind words dear! It is taxing indeed and all the love I'm getting for this story keeps on my toes, eager to perform the best I can! 😊

Coming to the updates--

Behen!Your updates are so coherent,so magical that each time I sit down to comment ,I end up reading and re reading.Absolutely it feels straight from a novel's page.

Oh my my! That's one of the best compliments one can get dear...I consider myself an amateur only, but am glad you are enjoying the updates as a continuous story! 😳

The way you started with Sameer trying to take in the sun light yet the sun light losing its battle against the heat in his body.Poor boy! Life is not throwing lemons at him but stone of Stonehenge.Emotionally failing,now health failing.

His second ICU admission.Blood count hitting so low.This was seriously unexpected.But as John Lennon says- ''one thing you can't hide -is when you are crippled from inside." Same applies to Sameer.More than plague of Dengue,it the plague of his own crippling insides which has gotten him to knock the glass doors of ICU.

Sahi baat hai yaar...agar insaan andar se dukhi hai to he is prone to ill health, and is very vulnerable to diseases and disorders...life has been harsh to him...really harsh for no fault of his...I feel pained when I've to inflict a tragedy upon him myself...but then many cloudy days end in a golden sunset! 😊

The employees happy in wrapping soon was just like a strict ,homework demanding teacher absent from school.The happiness can be well related.😆 Rita was so scared that her shopping plans might go down drain ..Bechari! Sameer ka khauf hai hi waisa.

Haha- yeh to baat hai..jab koi khadus teacher absent hota tha to maza hi aa jata tha! 😆

And with the end of the paragraph with Sameer being softy, the unlocking of door on Sunday and his memories of her,the happier and passionate times they had with each other..You made my eyes misty.The frame of words were such powerfully packed and delivered.

The lines are beautiful and absolutely thoughtful. Yes! Love demands sacrifices and so much more.It's the sixth sense that takes the existence of all other tangible 5 senses.

Thanks a lot dear...I'm glad you liked that particular piece...that is true- love is the most selfless of emotions to be experienced by any living soul on earth. And I feel that to love is far more satiating than being loved is.

If the ice made from liquid nitrogen would have to compete with the coldness that followed with and after the phone convo ,the ice would melt and lose it.Its requires steel like strength to be so much indifferent when both have bared their souls to each other. And a special mention for Arvind.He seems a gem to me. I am seriously awaiting to know why a Biotechnologist has gotten so much financially down and that how Naina walked into this marriage.Diya is another andhera mystery at this phase both for Sameer and us.

Hehe bataungi sab dear...kis kis ke saath kya kya hua...and yes honestly, it is a torture for Sameer to see his Naina with another man, yet his selfless instincts have kicked in. No matter how difficult it is for him here, he does it all to help Naina out of her problems. Though of course, a selfish piece of him wants to still see her, talk to her.

I didn't expect Sameer to pounce on all those classics and canonical authors.My goodness, this guy read Illiad,Odyssey even.And Scarlet Letter took the cake here.I am mighty impressed how you have amalgamated the core theme of Scarlet Letter with the flow of your storyline.The shriek of adulterers and emblazoned 'A' ..that scream of both in guilty sin..It brought back all the chills of Scarlet Letter and with Samaina ...I could no more imagine Hester or Arthur ..It was both of this two souls suffering,paying some heavy prices ,aimlessly looking for redemption and closure.

O bai! Thanks a lot Minu! All credit to you for recommending the perfect piece of novel here! 😃 And yes, gham me bechara Sameer kavi nahi to avid reader zarur ban gaya hai! 😃 And professionally, he likes to read all these classics and the most modern literature, coz it is important for his profession as a publisher! 😳 That was my take behind it! 😊

The ending equally pierced me.I remembered a line,one of my favourites.Its from Anne Frank's Diary--"Feelings cannot be ignored,no matter how unjust and ungrateful they seem." That pretty much summed it up for me the whole update.

Agreed dear! No matter what- however good or bad...feelings do persist! It's a fact of life! 😊

Perhaps more than anything the most difficult and hardest thing is 'Waiting'.Waiting for the one who means the universe for you.Whose one look can set you back in time's flow.

And to wait for something which you know might never happen is another eternal pain in itself. Still Sameer choses to go through all of it again- all for Naina. 😳

I absolutely loved the picturisation of Naina and her small contended family. Arvind comes as a guy who is human being,allows his wife freedom and is not MCP. Whatever the back story is,he loves Diya and cares for Naina.I am more intrigued to learn about him more now.

True...I haven't spoken much about Arvind here, but your assessment is quite right! There is a story behind him too and would reveal all in due time! Hope you enjoy what my mind has churned out! 😳

The conversation that followed,when finally they opened about each other though limitedly,cheered me up.But Sameer's curt reply really surprised me..In order and trial of moving on ,this boy seems to have stopped feeling anything.I felt like he was poking pins in his own raft .Whatever it is things are looking way brighter than before.

Yes- so slowly they have moved beyond the rude words and started interacting a bit more. And yes, the time when he lost both Naina and Nanu was the most difficult in his life- as difficult as it was when he lost his mom n dad. But as they say- time heals even the deepest of wounds. Give time time! 😳 They'll talk more I promise! 😃

As they say its sunshine at the end of tunnel,and that a bright rainbow appears after a strong storm..Looking forward to read what more expectedly unexpected surprises,twists you have in store for us.😳

Arey waah- exactly my POV...there a morning after every night! Bas Sameer ki raat thodi lambi hai! 😳 I hope you are able to enjoy the story as it progresses now as much as you are doing now! Always awaiting your critique! ❤️

Thanks for the PM and sorry agin for not being regular.

Update soon please.

With love-

Minu