Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130)

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Satpriya

@Satpriya

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#891

Yaar kitna Sara suspens hai.

Pata nai Naina ko kab pata chlega ki Sameer nanu k liye Gaya tha.

Sameer kab realize karega ki Diya uski beti hai.

Mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki inke beech ki Misunderstanding k liye woh bitch zimedar hai

Haye kab dogi agla update

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gugul

@gugul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#892

Dear Sur, I am a big fan of this story and I have been reading it from the beginning...it is so engrossing...you have kept the momentum right and now I am waiting for the suspense to get cleared.

But I have been always telling that they have gone through a lot of pain and struggle...please have some pity on them and unko jaldi milva do...please ... 😭

Waiting for the next update and want a looonnnggg one...am a very greedy reader !! 🤓

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#893

Hi Sur Darling..🤗

Finally here.I am loving the way you are merging the realistic professional commitments along with personal commitments.When passionate lovers years ago are contract bound publisher-author duo..its difficult to feel and mentally taxing.I can feel to envision this as well as putting them into words is more taxing for you.Hats off and whistles for you.👏

Coming to the updates--

Behen!Your updates are so coherent,so magical that each time I sit down to comment ,I end up reading and re reading.Absolutely it feels straight from a novel's page.

The way you started with Sameer trying to take in the sun light yet the sun light losing its battle against the heat in his body.Poor boy! Life is not throwing lemons at him but stone of Stonehenge.Emotionally failing,now health failing.

His second ICU admission.Blood count hitting so low.This was seriously unexpected.But as John Lennon says- ''one thing you can't hide -is when you are crippled from inside." Same applies to Sameer.More than plague of Dengue,it the plague of his own crippling insides which has gotten him to knock the glass doors of ICU.

The employees happy in wrapping soon was just like a strict ,homework demanding teacher absent from school.The happiness can be well related.😆 Rita was so scared that her shopping plans might go down drain ..Bechari! Sameer ka khauf hai hi waisa.

And with the end of the paragraph with Sameer being softy, the unlocking of door on Sunday and his memories of her,the happier and passionate times they had with each other..You made my eyes misty.The frame of words were such powerfully packed and delivered.

The lines are beautiful and absolutely thoughtful. Yes! Love demands sacrifices and so much more.It's the sixth sense that takes the existence of all other tangible 5 senses.

If the ice made from liquid nitrogen would have to compete with the coldness that followed with and after the phone convo ,the ice would melt and lose it.Its requires steel like strength to be so much indifferent when both have bared their souls to each other. And a special mention for Arvind.He seems a gem to me. I am seriously awaiting to know why a Biotechnologist has gotten so much financially down and that how Naina walked into this marriage.Diya is another andhera mystery at this phase both for Sameer and us.

I didn't expect Sameer to pounce on all those classics and canonical authors.My goodness, this guy read Illiad,Odyssey even.And Scarlet Letter took the cake here.I am mighty impressed how you have amalgamated the core theme of Scarlet Letter with the flow of your storyline.The shriek of adulterers and emblazoned 'A' ..that scream of both in guilty sin..It brought back all the chills of Scarlet Letter and with Samaina ...I could no more imagine Hester or Arthur ..It was both of this two souls suffering,paying some heavy prices ,aimlessly looking for redemption and closure.

The ending equally pierced me.I remembered a line,one of my favourites.Its from Anne Frank's Diary--"Feelings cannot be ignored,no matter how unjust and ungrateful they seem." That pretty much summed it up for me the whole update.

Perhaps more than anything the most difficult and hardest thing is 'Waiting'.Waiting for the one who means the universe for you.Whose one look can set you back in time's flow.

I absolutely loved the picturisation of Naina and her small contended family. Arvind comes as a guy who is human being,allows his wife freedom and is not MCP. Whatever the back story is,he loves Diya and cares for Naina.I am more intrigued to learn about him more now.

The conversation that followed,when finally they opened about each other though limitedly,cheered me up.But Sameer's curt reply really surprised me..In order and trial of moving on ,this boy seems to have stopped feeling anything.I felt like he was poking pins in his own raft .Whatever it is things are looking way brighter than before.

As they say its sunshine at the end of tunnel,and that a bright rainbow appears after a strong storm..Looking forward to read what more expectedly unexpected surprises,twists you have in store for us.😳

Thanks for the PM and sorry agin for not being regular.

Update soon please.

With love-

Minu

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#894

Hey i read ur story in one go and loved it soo much... Kindly update the next part soon as i cant Wait for it

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: Dharapriya
Lovely update. But was waiting more of their confrontation. Its still suspence why she married mr. A. Will be waiting for next update. How can they didnt interact about their life.Hope next update me confrontation will jaaye please

Hi dear! Thank you so much! 😊 Actually I want them to become a little comfortable with each other before we get to the conclusion...at this point of time, neither wants to admit how the absence of the other had affected them...a case of self-esteem! 😊 Will try to give a longer update too next time!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: Shinku18
Why are they not talking to each other about their past. I am waiting for them to have an intense and intimate reality check of their life and feelings for each other.
By now I assume that diya is Sameer's child and Arvind being a good person as said by Naina would have come to know about her past and helped and been with her all way long. I can think of only this possibility.

Hey dear! Actually neither wants to admit their weakness at this point of time, because they feel the other has been heartless or has betrayed them...Diya's secret as well Arvind's will be revealed as we go along the story! I hope I can manage to keep your interest! I would try for longer updates too next! 😳

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#897

What happens next?!!

Please just make them talk once like they used to, just open up a bit

Their miscommunication makes me sad.

You write amazingly, making me feel the emotions.

Thanks for the pm

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: Pk02
Waiting for mystery to unfold... Curious...

Thanks dear...will try and update as soon as I can!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: JaySee
Lovely update.
These two are still not ready to soften in front of other. They are just pretending that they are very much happy and contented in their own life. Quite curious to know how long they are going to continue this kind of behavior especially now when they have to spent more time together. Eager to see when they will break this barrier and how will they achieve it. Don't know what incident will make them do so.

Thanks for the pm. Pls update soon.

Hey Seema! Thanks a lot! That's true...both their feelings are rigged with misunderstandings...and hence the communication barrier...neither wants to succumb and accept what they'd felt for the other! But yes, whether they like it or not, they'll have to spend more and more time together now...and slowly interact more...n soften more!

Love

Sur

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#900

Originally posted by: dhk2311
Hey Dear...
Awesome update as usual.. Emotions conveyed so well. Loved the part when Sameer admirer her touch and kiss hand. ❤️

Waiting for next update.

Love DK.

Hey DHK!

Thanks a lot dear!

I'm so glad you liked the update...and the part where Sameer feels the kiss!

Love

Sur