Part 14:
To begin with this part game me literal goosebumps with the title itself!! I knew it had to come out eventually but the way it came out ...totally felt for Naina once again!
Sameer coming over to Naina's room to celebrate her birthday was 😳😳...but Shefali ne kya entry mari hai yaar...I was not expecting her to be honest i would have expected Priti or Swati .nevertheless she fits the role of the person Naina needed at moment to show the mirror or rather put some sense in a way...
Shefali truely proved she is a true friend...only true friends have guts to stand up to their friends, speak their mind and tell them when they are going on the wrong path...her instant reaction after seeing the " package" and her eyes glaring Naina gave me goosebumps of guilt that Naina was filled with...🥺...
Loved the way you wrote the confrontation and talk of the matter between Shefali and Naina and on the other hand Samundit! Both people opened their hearts to people they are close to and it helped them understand their confusion, insecurities and may be moree as well...
Shefali's advice was spot on...though Naina is well aware of that...but due to her fear she never had the guts to be direct with him and tell him that she loves her...but its about time she does!!
And Mundit showed the mirror or rather I should say showed sameer first step towards his realizationf for his love towards Naina! I loveddd the symbolism that you showed from mundit to Sameer about how much Naina has changed in over the yeas she has been with her...not only has she not been with any other girl, dreamt to be with anyother girl he has started to forget his painful past and his habits of self torture due to Naina...😳👏
Mundit are simply love!!! They understood Sammer is madly and truely in love with Naina but sameer being sameer ...hurt by his past and stuck in his insecurities has affirmed himself that Naina is just his best friend and there is no such thing as true love
The way you ended it in sort of a cliffhanger...I have this feeling that Naina is going to get hurt by him again but this time Sameer will be in for a rude awakening to realize his love for her...can't wait to read more!! 😃