and then it felt too short!
Sameer's bekarari for Friday and Mrs Reena Mittal absolutely reflected the readers state of mind too 😉
Loved the myriad of thoughts and emotions experiences by him on seeing her. Beautifully written Sur! I could feel his disbelief and doubts if she was really there or just another figment of his imagination and longing. The way his parched heart tried to have its fill of her essence in a few moments...
But the moment he saw someone else's mark on her, bitterness got the better of him and he reverted back to that old Sameer who used rude cutting words to hide is true feelings. I loved that bit too. Could taste his bitterness.
And now can't wait for an insight into her journey from Naina Agarwal to Reena Mittal! I am extremely intrigued by her reaction and the indication that she is feeling betrayed too. Very very interesting!!
Loved it dear!
Lots of love, May