Originally posted by: asmita21180
I understand that to keep up with flow of story and evolve the character with time ,it is necessary to evaluate the plot line... So far the story was amazing.. . And although it seemed too long for the leads to be in relationship (almost 16 chapters) I liked the pace of your story...
Hey Asmita dear! So happy to see such a detailed review from your side here! I'm honoured! 😊😳 And please pardon me, for I've been inexcusably late in responding to this wonderful note!
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story and despite the impatient wait for Sameer to realize his love, you've found yourself connected to the story and its pace. And there is a reason behind as well. When I initially wrote this story down- I'd written the outline and many of the parts (start to end) in a single day. It was meant to be a crisp, short story. But then as this story got love and appreciation, I kept on adding to it, improving upon it as per the feedback of my readers. However, I tried not to stray from the original storyline, which meant the separation that I'd intended. Hence the delayed love realization! 😆
Everything they shared was intense ( to make Sameer fall in love as per story it was quite required to show the intensity otherwise it would not look genuine for him to fall in love after just one night stand)
True! Very true! It took Sam a while to let his walls down, to let inside the corners of his heart that he'd shielded from all, for fear of being hurt. Yet, the girl in her innocence and her earnestness removed the facade of arrogance and brought forward the real Sameer! It took time for him to fall in love with her and to realize it, but when he did, he fell hard! so now with intensity of their relationship they both shared had to be something between them.. Much more then just the adventure or thrill.. . And finally Sam realized his true feelings. ..But the time was so wrong for both of them..
With the realization their came the pain of loss (both Nanu a nd Naina as the story concluded ) ...would it be easy for him to handle... (no ..I don't think so). .. So the last three chapters how much painful they appear were the necessity of the plot and flow..
The plight of Sameer showed the arrogant, sneering boy, whom everyone had termed an insensitive rake also had a vulnerable side to him- that he knew how to care for someone so deeply! But life had other plans. To plunge him into the depths of despair, only to have him fight back and rise again! After the pain subsided we will see a change. . A new Sam.. .But this chapter gave us little hope on Naina.. Where is she? ..with whom?. .Did she married? ... How will they be together again? Will they be even together again?..
Ahaan! Yep the mystery around Naina! Be assured everything would come to light! 😊 Till then, I hope you enjoy the story! Your cliffhanger had indeed left me with lots of curiosity ..i hope I can handle that much till your next update
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Haha! Thanks dear! Would love to hear your views on the next one too! Although you have so much on your plate right now. .We greedy fans may only request to update soon. .Lol..
Will try my best Asmita! Pakka! I know I'm overloaded and hardly find time and mood to write, but I so love it and miss being away from the stories myself! each emotions nicely presented and Nicely written Sur... Keep writing .. Gud luck
Thank you so much Asmita! 😳😳
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