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I understand that to keep up with flow of story and evolve the character with time ,it is necessary to evaluate the plot line... So far the story was amazing.. . And although it seemed too long for the leads to be in relationship (almost 16 chapters) I liked the pace of your story...
Everything they shared was intense ( to make Sameer fall in love as per story it was quite required to show the intensity otherwise it would not look genuine for him to fall in love after just one night stand)
so now with intensity of their relationship they both shared had to be something between them.. Much more then just the adventure or thrill.. . And finally Sam realized his true feelings. ..But the time was so wrong for both of them..
With the realization their came the pain of loss (both Nanu a nd Naina as the story concluded ) ...would it be easy for him to handle... (no ..I don't think so). .. So the last three chapters how much painful they appear were the necessity of the plot and flow..
After the pain subsided we will see a change. . A new Sam.. .But this chapter gave us little hope on Naina.. Where is she? ..with whom?. .Did she married? ... How will they be together again? Will they be even together again?..
Your cliffhanger had indeed left me with lots of curiosity ..i hope I can handle that much till your next update
..hahaha..
Although you have so much on your plate right now. .We greedy fans may only request to update soon. .Lol..
each emotions nicely presented and Nicely written Sur... Keep writing .. Gud luck
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