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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb yaar...I literally hadca tears in my eyes...I love both of them...I know its not correct because reality is domething else...I really liked the way u written...pls update next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
hey dear 1st part was awesome
but one suggestion try to write their name instead of AS, RD n all.. padhne me feel nhi aati
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2

The shooting was over. All the six had decided to take a break before signing new project. RD had planned to go home at jhansi. AS had just planned a holiday with family. SC and Rgdh had planned to visit their places. AYK and Kris had decided to just stay at their home and meet friends and enjoy. RD reached his apartment, in the corridor he remembered AS insta photo and all the mess created by the medi. His reaction of posting photos with his friend. From tomorrow onwards no media or fans trying to interpret their insta photos nobody there to investigate the feeling he has for AS. He sighed some where he desperately wanted his name to be linked with her. He reached his flat opened the door the flat was as usuall today but he felt it empty . There was loneliness in his own room the house was just without life as he was feeling lifeless. He was really feeling dull and lonely depressed. He changed and he lay on his bed as soon he closed his eyes he saw AS in her pink gown smiling on the set running here and there chirping around and disturbing him . His eyes got moist.i He opened his eyes with a jerk and said to himself 'arre yaar tu to pura sameer ke character mei guss gaya abh bahar nikal ja' . He missed that he had seen AS in her dressup not dressed like naina. He closed his eyes and made an attempt to sleep, the whole journey of yudkbh was going in front of his closed eyes specially all their love scenes he had a smile on his face thinking of all that and slowly sleep took over him.

AS residence
AS was also feeling drained out the inner turmoil was very confusing, disturbing she wanted to be alone . All family members were very happy as the show had done wonders and their daughter was a talk of each and every household. All had praise worthy words for her. Her neice Trisha was super excited she didn't want to leave her aunt. Her mother noticed her pale face she assumed that AS is tired, she took Trisha from her and asked her to go to her room and rest. AS ran to her room closed the door and threw herself on bed she yelled a loud and cried her heart out. Tears were not ready to stop . She was a mess now unable to name the feelings leave alone of handling them. After eternity she calmed down and said that her first serial that too nearly 1000 episodes she was acting as naina and this has got into her too much and it may be happening with everyone she should ignore. A name came to her mind AyK yes she can ask her all this as she is well aware of all this as she has acted in many serial. She can exactly tell her till how many days hangover is there. This relaxed her and she decided to call AyK early next morning with this thought she slept off .

Ayk residence.
Ayk was standing in her terrace . She too had tears in her eyes they were for AS. She was not just a friend for her but her sis. The bond she had for her was very strong. She very well knew where AS was heading. She was travelling on the path where a heart break was sure. She thought how can she protect AS from this pain She thought by chance even if RD falls for her how nice it would be but again she thought that the chances are very rare. RD always tried to stop the rumours he was always in a hurry to say that there is nothing between them even before anybody asking for it. He always ignored her in joint IV. She very well knew AS will talk to her before naming the feelings and surely take her confirmation about it. An idea struck her that she will bring AS out of the feeling before she can realise the feeling of love and for whom they are. She got relieved as she had found a way to save AS from pain and she slept off. She prayed to God before sleeping to either bring out AS from love or make RD fall for her.
Next day
Morning 6.30 AyK phone starting vibrating as it was on silent mode. Ayk got up smiled she knew it has to be AS. She picked up the phone and as expected AS started desperately " hello I Am very frightened something odd is happening with me I am missing you I need you I cannot talk about
It to anyone accept you . I have to meet you today itself please come immediately '. She spoke all in one breath and started crying. AYK's heart pained she said ' calm down don't worry I am always there for you. Yes we will meet today only at the coffee shop.i will be there by nine stop crying trust me we will sought it out'. At least for time being AS felt relieved she said ok with happiness. Ayk smiled and was worried also. She prayed god once again to save AS from pain whichever way he chooses to.

At coffee shop
AS was there even before the coffee shop opened. She was moving here and there frantically waiting for AyK . Ayk saw her from distance she knew all her questions and she prepared all false answers.
AyK Hi
AS came and hugged her and tears started flowing.
[ ] AS trying to talk in between sobbing ' 'Dekh na yaar kal se aisa ho raha hai asu ruk hi nahi rahe. Dil bahot tez dard kar raha hai ... Kuch samazh nahi aa raha hai. Kabhi sameer shayad RD ankho ke samne se jaa nahi raha .yeh naina ke feelings hai ya mere. Bilkul delhi vale track ke wakt naina ki haalat bataye thi na waise lag raha hai '
[ ] Ayk wipes her tears ' arre aisa hota hai Maine jab phela serial Kiya tha n.a. tab mei bahot jhoti thi. Usme mera nam reena tha . Kitne din tak mai mere nam se bulane par awaz nahi deti thi aur reena bulane par zhat se jawab deti thi . Isse hang over kehte hai kuch din mei chala jayega. Sab ke saath hota hai .yeh tera pehli bar hone se ghabra gayi hai. Abhi family ke saath picnic pe ja aane ke badh kafi thik ho jayega aur baki jab dusra serial karegi tab thik ho jayega. Isse dauran sirf RD MATLAB sameer se contact mat Karna toh jaldi thik hoga'
[ ] Ayk started looking down as she was telling a lie . She knew AS will find happiness only if she talked with RD but to save her from pain she had to do that.
[ ] AS was not convinced but she had a blind trust on Ayk and her experience so she chose to follow what Ayk said.
Next morning RD packed his bags for Zhansi and started for airport. AS too with her family headed for airport. Both trying to escape from the feeling thinking that they are leaving their feelings in mumbai and when they will come back the feelings will vanish. Little did they know that the feelings are deep in their heart along with them forever. They both reached at the Airport together they could sense eachother as sameer and naina sensed each other but they shrugged their shoulders and ignored and boarded their respective plane flying in opposite direction
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am toh loving it! Jaldi update karna please..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Wowww
PL continue
Loving it

Hum shippers isi se khush hojaayenge
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey just let me know how interesting you are finding the story i can go more in details or make it short as per your demand
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prerana167099

Hey just let me know how interesting you are finding the story i can go more in details or make it short as per your demand


I would love detailed..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
It was wonderful
You beautifully described their state of mind
Both of them are in a mess
And naming their strong feelings as mere hangover
It was lovely
Looking forward to next update

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Part 3
Mri is mrinal
At Jhansi
RD had reached his house . His brother had come to pick him. He was very quiet in the whole journey. He only answered the questions he was asked that too very briefly.
Mri Safar kaisa tha. Shoot khatam ho Gaya.
RD Ha . Ek na ek din khatam hona tha he took a long breath
Mri kitne din ke liye break liye hai
RD soacha nahi shayad ek mahina. Mai tum sab ko miss kar raha tha.
Mri smiles gives a side hug Yaar tum excited nahi lag rahe
RD Kal party thi last day ki. Shoot khatam sab khatam thak Gaya hu .Need rest .
Mri observes him after all he knows his brother in and out. He knows party always charged him and coming to jhansi to family always excites him. But all that was missing today .He knew no point in questioning him he will not answer until he chooses t. For time being he thought to give him some time instead of questioning him. RD wanted to reach home so that this question and answer get over. He pretended to sleep by closing his eyes and Mri gave a smile which said I know you better than you know yourself . He drove the car in the porch. His mother and bhabhi were there on entrance to welcome him . He hugged his mother and said hi to his bhabhi and suddenly felt very heavy hearted and his eyes got moist. He hurriedly said ' Mai fresh hoke ata hu' he escaped. Reached his room closed the door and the unshed tears started flowing down and he did not make any effort to stop them. He was crying for a long time and then he freshen up to leave as he would have delayed anymore some one would have come to call him. But MRI had already followed him and heard him crying. He hid himself immediately as he heard the latch sound of the door. MRI had sensed it and now it was confirmed that all was not well with his bro. The whole day he was with some or the other person of family.The evening dinner was with everybody along with his father. On the dining table Mr.Rai ' Beta kaise ho. Arre yeha sab tumhari serial Kya bolte ho tum YUDKBH pasand karte the .Ha jab khatam Hua to bahot log dukkhe hu he. Aur who na Singh uncle hai na unki wife keh rahi thi apne bete ke liye bahu bilkul tumhari serial ki heroine Kya nam tha ' MRI Ha ' Ashi' and looks at RD .Mr rai continues ha wohi Singh bhabhi keh rahi thi aajkal aisi sundarta kaha jisme saadghi aur masumiyat bhi ho. Uski haasi se tho jaise sara ghar khil uthega . Bahot tariff kar rahi thi unka beta Rahul uska bada fan hai who tumse looking at RD Milne zarror ayega'
Mrs Rai ' Vaise to mujhe film line se koi nahi chahiye Par,eyeing at RD she says agar ashi ho tho chalegi mujhe who bahot pasand hai
Mr Rai ' Singh bhabhi aur Rahul tumhe jinda nahi jhodenge'. All start laughing except RD he is lost at his moms word he imagines her sitting in front of him looking at him naughtily a smile comes on his face. MRI notices every thing the glow on his face and a twinkle in his eyes on the mention of AS name.
Mr. Rai said ' sab friends RD se Milana chahte hai aur rishtedar bhi tho ek get together arrange kar lete hai tum log apne dosto ko bulana hai bula lo thik hai'
All agreed RD was in no mood but kept mum.
RD leaves from the dinning room saying that he is tired and he wishes to sleep. Yes he was not able to stop thinking abt AS WHICH HE chose to call naina and thinking of her a smile came on his face unknowing he took a pillow and hugged it and slept off.
Next day he is getting ready for morning jogging and he is on the way . Rahul spots him ' hey Deep kab aaye chalo ghar coffee pete hai' .RD ok chalo. Singh aunty is very happy to see him ' Arre beta aao hum tumhari kafi raha Dekh rahe the mujhe ek bar naina se milana get Mila doge badi pyari bacchi hai mai Rahul ke liye vaisi hi ladki laoungi . Rahul vaisi nahi wohi. SINGH
aunty isne to sare kamre mei uski tasveer laga Rakhi hai. RD has a sudden urge to see his room ' chal tere kamre mei chalte hai '. Rahul hesitates RD' arre tere room ka photo le ke AS ko bataunga toh who impress ho jayegi '. Rahul immediately takes him to room . AS he enters his room he sees AS big photo in PVKM uniform so cute and innocent. A photo from pooja didi's sangeet function doing dance directly gazing at him . And many other mount Abu trip photo . Every where she is looking extremely beautiful. He has a feeling that she will run out of a photo and come into his arms. He is mesmerized by the photos. He has found peace after two long days just by seeing her photos some where the puzzle had stated to solve. Rahul ' Deep who single hai na? .RD ' Abhi tak to ha par shayad jaldi hi engage hone ke chances hai ' . The words came out of his mouth without thinking.
Rahul exclaimed oh no . RD coming to his senses' Arre koi na tere liye uska jaisi koi aur le ayenge.'. Rahul said dreamily ' uske jaisi koi nahi' .RD SMILED at his madness.

Rai residence
Mrs Rai ' Arre subha subha kaha chala Gaya tha '
RD ' Jogging ke liye Gaya tha raste mei Rahul mil Gaya apne ghar coffee pilana le gaya"
MOM ' ARE use to mauka mil Gaya AS ke bare mei pucch raha hoga. Uska diwana hai. Arre Kya sach mei itni pyari hai jitna t v pe dikhati hai '
RD gets lost thinking of her and says ' t v mei dikhati hai usse jyada pyari real mei lagti hai kyuki usse serial mei Sundar ladki nahi hai aisa dekhaya hai'
MOM ' haye mumbai aungi tho usse zarror milana'.
RD ' Tum Pehli bar kisi heroine se Milne mei itna interest dikha rahi ho'.
Mom ' Pehli bar koi ladki itni acchi lagi hai '
She says this and goes away to prepare break fast . HIS bhabhi enters ' good morning bhaiya
RD " Good morning bhabhi bhaiya kaha hai'
Bhabhi ' ready hokar aa rahe hai . Bhaiya ye AS sab ko itni acchi lagti hai sab itna pyar karte hai usse aap to uske saath shoot pe12 13 ghante rehte the kabi apko usse pyari nahi hua?
MRI is listening to all their conversation and desperately waiting for his reply.
RD stunned as if the answer was right in front of him he said ' bhabhi kuchbhi ' and escapes.
MRI knows his wife has touched the right chord unknowingly . He knows that now his brother is going to react. RD shuts himself in his room he removes his mobile and has a strong urge to call her but open her insta . Reads her status ' committed to work and dreams. No other commitments '. Reading this he gets irked and thinks what bhabhi said whether he loves her and just to get away from the ans he opens his insta account and posts his photo with his lady friends accept AS.
MRI on the way to office thinking about RD behaviour thinks to check his insta and see all his post his doubt is now confirmed as he knows that his brother will show just the opposite of what His heart is feeling. Now he makes a plan to confirm about the person.
Get together at rai's residence
RD is dressed in a casual suit he was not in mood but when he chose blue shirt with navy blue jacket and pant. It reminded him AS favourite colour is blue and he smiled to himself. He was dressed to kill. Everybody congratulated him for yudkbh success. Girls were drooling around him and yes many elders saw a prospective groom in him and were pondering around him.His parents were looking at him with great pride. Many of them had gifts for him.A yudkbh fan had brought a 4 feet frame with a pic of naina and sameer in PVKM uniform. RD could not move his eyes from the pic. All wanted autograph and photograph with him .He was the super star of Jhansi. AT nearly 11 pm the party got over. He made an excuse and without letting anybody notice carried the 4 feet frame in his room. He was starring at naina's pic till his eyes got heavy and closed of with all sweet memories.


Next day.
MRI to RD mai ek serial banane ki soach raha tha script acchi hai heroine oriented. Koi talented actress chahiye jo sunder ho jawa dilo ki dhadkan ban sake masum ho simple ho bilkul bag mei khil hui gulabh ki tarah . Bujurgoko usme apni beti ya bahu dikhe . Bacchi ke saath bilkul bacchi nadan chanchal par samazhdar .Hase to aisa lage jaise panchhi geet ga rahe ho kahi koi zharna beh raha ho. Jise dekhte hi bas pyari ho jaye. RD GETS LOST IN THE description and he says AS se accha koi ho hi nahi sakta. MRI has got the confirmation now but still wants to confirm are ha usse Abhi phone karu ya bad mei. RD hurriedly Abhi turant karo kahi koi assignment sigh kar liya toh phir ye serial mai nahi kar payegi jaldi call karo. MRI is searching her number and RD anxiously waiting to hear her voice as his bro has put it on speaker there is a voice in the phone which says the number you are trying to call is switched off .RD gets very upset and annoyed .MRI says ' koi na uske jaisi koi aur dhondte hai.' RD dreamily speaks out ' uske jaisi koi aur nahi ' .MRI arre uske insta account pe post Kiya hai enjoyed three days holiday with family at Kerala now heading to a wild life sanctuary in Sri Lanka so will be out of network please do miss me. RD nearly snatches his phone from his hand and sees her photos and reads the line miss me . He says to himself you are already being missed desperately girl come back soon.
AS was trying to enjoy with her family but she used to get lost all of a sudden and start thinking about sameer and her group but most of the time it was sameer who was occupying her mind and heart( the truth was not sameer but RD ) . Her crying was reduced but tears used to flow out without giving any warning. But she said to herself pehle se Abhi thik hai. AYK ne kaha tha Deere Deere thik hoga aur kam shuru hone ke bad aur thik ho jayega toh mumbai pahocte hi jaldi se naya project sign kar lungi Vaise hi bahot offers aa rahe hai.
RD is restless some where he has got the answers but he does not want to accept it .AS is not leaving his mind peace is far away from him .He tried to meet all his friends girls and boys but nothing could bring calmness. He wanted to talk to AS he was checking her insta and wished to give 100 likes to her each photo he many times unknowingly took her photo to his lips and tears flowed down and he said I miss you .it was already eight days in jhansi. And finally on the 10 th day he saw AS insta post back to mumbai back to work. He jumped with joy and immediately booked a plane ticket . He informed his family ,his mom was sulking dad was sad he convinced them he cannot stay without work . MRI knew the reason as he too had seen AS post . He drove RD to airport RD was nervous anxious all messed up as he did not want to accept what his heart was telling him loud. MRI just touched his shoulder and said ' dil jo kehta hai suno aur mano apne hi dil se bag kar kaha jaoge ' . RD gave him a tight hug his touch spoke volumes both brothers were on verge of tears. There was no need of words but still MRI said mai mumbai akele aunga RD got the msg said jaldi ana and waived him he boarded the plane . Both planes reached the Airport in mumbai . The first steps towards realisation had been taken by Destiny.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great Update.
The emotional turmoil is neatly portrayed.

Do update soon.


-Isha

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