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Posted: 7 years ago
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Excellent. Loving the urge from both the sides to meet but to be sure of their feelings too!! Looking forward for the next part!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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waiting ,...waiting... waiting...
Post fast...cant wait anymore
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey lovely story...read all the parts together...loved them and can't wait for more...ashdeep are my favorite... waiting eagerly for next update..
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Part 5
3rd December 2020
Today sun shine was brighter than everyday the breeze had music along with it.The flowers blossomed to the fullest . The walls of RD "s flat were beaming with joy. The windows were reflecting light of enthusiasm. The colour of sky was changing from all shades of black to Orange red to bright clear sky.Yes even his feelings from not sure were getting clear and close to damn 100% sure yes close not yet reached. Two souls were very happy for this day. No not Kris parents but RD and AS . RD got up from his bed whistling and humming with joy. His enthusiasm new no limits today. He was wondering how will he react after seeing her face to face will he be stunned as sameer was when he saw naina dressed in Poona didi sangeet. He thought he won't be able to control himself and he will run to hug tightly, he taped his forehead and smiled. He had waited for 60 days and now just 12 hours were killing him. He did with his morning chores and was deciding what he was going to wear in the evening. Yes it reminded him that her favourite colour was blue and he took all the shirts of blue shed and he selected the one which could be close to her liking. He was looking at the clock it had only crossed10.00 am yet nearly 9 hours to go . He was waiting for Kris call and yes others too. On his mobile a msg beep sound was heard he quickly took his phone and read the msg it was Kris msg for invitation of party at 8.30 pm but all 5 of yudkbh were called at 7 or early as per their convenience. RD was very happy he thought he will reach by 6.45 he did not want to waste a minute as he already wasted 3 yrs and 60 days and no more now he thought.
His phone again rang it was MRI now he knew what his brother might be going through.
RD Bhai I really love you tum sahi waqt par phone kar lete ho
MRI I love you too . Shayad ab yeh mujse nahi kisi aur se Kehne ka waqt aaGaya hai. Apne dil ki baat tere samajh mei aayi ya nahi?
RD blushes ha bhai baat to samajh Chuka hu par juba par lane ke liye aur sure hona chahata tu . Uski nazro mai mere liye Kya hai dekhna chahata hu. Kris ke janam din pe milene wale hai sab .
MRI jyada der mat Karna Vaise hi bahot der ho chuki hai . Tu kahe to mai as jata hu .
RD arre nahi mei Dekh lunga tum CHINTA MAT karo aur jarrurat padhi to sabse pehle call tumhe karunga.
MRI ok all the best and bye
RD feels very lucky to have a brother like him. He is very restless he tries to have breakfast but his stomach is full of anxiety. He barely ate anything same was the condition with lunch. His restlessness and eagerness were growing the only way to find peace was to see yudkbh confession episode he was watching now for the nth time and imagining his real confession

AS residence .AS had mixed emotions She was happy to meet RD and scared that she will break down in front of him and won't be able to explain anybody as she herself is not sure abt the reason. Anyways facing things boldly is the only way out and she decides to go. As she is about to move her mobile rings and she talks on the phone for 15 min and then calls Ayk and tells her about her plan. AYK takes a deep breath any says thank you God you saved.

SC calls RD that we will go together he makes an excuse that he is already out and he will reah there directly. He did not want any hit and miss situation here he had enough as sameer in yudkbh.

Finally Kris resi
RD is the first one to reach there as expected with yellow flower booke. Kris hugs him he wishes a very happy birthday to her. He is feeling awkward but to his relief SC AND Rgdh come just after 10 minutes they wish Kris and all get settled in the hall . SC arre sipahi aur sipaho ki behen kaha reh Gaye.
Kris arre subh dono se baat huye thi dono saath mei aane wale hai aate hi honge .
RD is relieved
It is 7.45 now
RD gets restless he starts moving here and there . In the pretence of the phone range he moves to balcony just to see the entrance gate of society if he get the glimpse of AS. A rick stops near the bldg and he sees Ayk coming out from it he smiles at last the wait is over but to his bad luck there some women stand there chatting and obstruct his view. He hurriedly comes to the hall to open the door .He opens the door even before Ayk presses the bell. He is standing in the door looking for AS she is no where he looks beyond Ayk and bends to see in both direction if in case she is hiding. Ayk tells in a slow voice woh nahi ane wali uske relative ka reception hai .He is standing there SHOCKED like a statue .Ayk Kya mujhe andar aane doge. He comes out of the shock and gets aside .Kris hugs and ask arre AS nahi aaye arre uske friend ka reception hai. RD cannot register that Ayk had told two different stories. RD 's all enthusiasm drains out. He just sits
on sofa lifeless his eyes get moist with great efforts he is stopping his tears. Ayk notice every thing . She saw RD clenched his fist to control himself . They all decided to cut the cake RD just excused himself and went to balcony to shed the tears which were dreaded to come out any time. He went to balcony wiped his tears and tried to cheer up as he was a splendid actor . And to his surprise his mobile rang and yes it was AS on video call .He was stunned she was gorgeously dressed looking very beautiful and smiling at him she said hi he didn't answer even she was feeling unsteady her eyes were getting moist to control she said a louder hi .He came out of the trance and a broad smile played on his lips .
AS with a choked voice kaise ho?
RD morosely tumhare bagar kaisa rahunga
AS felt a pain in her heart she wanted to say kaash tumbhi Vaise ho jaise mi ho tumhare bagar. But she smiled and said arre sameer ke dialogue se bahar nahi aaye.
RD trying to give her hint mei 80 % sameer hi to hu.
AS aur haa sameer naina ka bf hai hamare
Beech kuch nahi hai she teases.
RD laughs the way she imitates him and stares her with all his love and she also stares at him both are lost in each other . SC comes from behind and is very happy to see AS he says hi bhabhi oh sorry AS kaha hai kyu nahi aaye.
AS coming out of trance arre subha tak to aane tay tha par achanak cancel Karna pada. She didn't give out the reason as she was not aware of what story was cooked by AyK but she and already spilled the beans by letting the word out achanak reception cannot be achanak.
SC chalo bye cake Katna hai.
RD hurriedly arre phone mat cut karo tum yaha nahi ho to Kya tum phone par hi party attend karo . Phone chalu rakh sakti ho na.
AS Ha isliye toh Abhi phone Kiya taki online party attend kar saku .
RD takes the phone and walks in hall .
Kris , Ragdh and Ayk are happy to see her on video call. Ayk asks tune mere phone par call kyu nahi Kiya. AS tumhare aur SC ka phone out of reach tha aur Kris ki party hai busy hongi isliye nahi Kiya. Bus last chance kar ke RD ka phone try Kiya aur phone lag Gaya. RD thank God Inke phone not reachable the. Kris cuts the cake blows the candle and give cake to everybody. RD takes the cake and tries to feed AS she acts like taking a bite from it he turns the cake and takes a bite from the same place.Somebody
Comes to call her chalo photo nikalna hay. AS says have to leave miss you all and blows a flying miss to all and yes specially looking at RD. RD blows a kiss to her hiding it .AS just takes it as a natural gesture she fails to see the deep emotion in it. This all is registered by AyK. She prays God make AS happy the way you choose to but if possible make RD fall for her. She is unaware that her prayers are already answered.
The party is over RD returns to his flat he had a call from MRI he told him the details .He said he could not meet her personally and was sad about it .He asked him to cheer up at least they had a video call and soon they will work on a project together . This elated his spirit and he slept of with AS gorgeous look in his eyes.
After three days RD saw AS inst post with her gorgeous snap and a post surprise tomorrow at 8pm on Sony. She had tagged all the five.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Nice one
Felt the emotions
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Lovely update. When will they both meet? Don't make us wait for long.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
So AS signed some other show...RD ka toh dil toot jayega
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Koi Show to sign nhi kar liya ashi ne bechara RD
Emo kar dia RD ne to
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Waiting for the next...post fast
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
PL update soon
Hope they work together again

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