Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh shit, what the heck did karthik's gang do? Naina has lost her smile, now this is going to go shitty from 0-80 for sameer in a sec. Yaar, i hope it's nothing serious. And i seriously felt bad for naina, she dreamt a lot of them going together i'm sure something happened right? Are you going to go in depth about this priyank issue? I would love for sameer to break his head, such a violet fantasies i have 😆

Btw this update was not enough.. even though it was long i didn't get enough of it, i seriously never get enough of ur updates, in love with this story ❤️

Yaar, please next update jaldi karo, this anticipation is killing me


Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Wonderful update just loved the way sameer consoles naina and the prize talk is so funny Btw when sameer will get his prize hann ... so sameer nahi ja paya but koi na and even i love the jija sali due too preeti knows her jeejaji so well and now what happens to naina why she is sad eagerly waiting for the next update please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Ande, Tamatar for ending on such point...please update soon...but as usually excellent udpate
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Nice update
And update soon dear
Yaar vahan brains meet mein kya ho gya??

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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Nice update as always ... I have always praised your story narration style ... It always gives the feel that everything is happening in front of my eyes ... U just give it a realistic touch to every story of yours and i love that .. whole scene where sameer was consoling naina was superb ... And why did u stop at such high note .. what happened there at competition ... Hope u update soon and put an end to our curiosities soon. . thanks for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Amezing it was
The flashbacks made the update more engaging
Now I'm really curious .. What happened to Naina
Eagerly waiting for the next part

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Excellent update. Very sad to see that Naina's dream of going with Sameer got shattered. Jeeja saali is always a treat.
Pls update soon. I can't hang on this cliff for too much time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Cliffhanger😕
Ab woh Karthik ke bacche ne kya Kiya?I hope Sameer usse 2-4 thappad maare,aakhir,woh toh safari suit ka honewale damaad hai😉
Pls update soon😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Awesome update minu.. they didn't go together .. what happened there ? Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ande tamatar joote chappal .. ahmm not at all yeh sab bilkul bhi Nahi Haan woh alag baat hai I'm angry ke you left us on hungerclifff but update was amazing .. and you showed that this is not a film where everything is in favour of hero heroine I loved it

Eagerly waiting for next part

Waise sorry for such a stupid comment on this update .. I commented because I know comments and like encourage the writer ... If ill get time I promise I'll edit it and comment about how I loved it

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