SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19)

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Shira

@Shiraaz

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: moumita04

Thank you so much Shira...!! 😳

Looks like you laughed a lot...!! Chalo achcha hai I could do that... since you so wanted to read a story on Samaina getting drunk... hehe...

Hahhaa... Yes, Sameer sounded cute this way when I visualized him talking like this, so I used it... and yep, kuch bhi ho jaaye pyaar to hai hi na... isiliye 3 magical words sunna to padega hi na...😉

I will continue this since I converted it into a 3-shot...! 😃

Umm I want Naina to be drunk😉😆

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Shira

@Shiraaz

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Res..😃

Will read it tonight

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Shiraaz

Umm I want Naina to be drunk😉😆

Yup, I remember your request...

Will handle that in the OS series... or in the upcoming Over the Edge FF... 😳

Don't worry... totally remember it... 😉

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Shira

@Shiraaz

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: moumita04

Yup, I remember your request...

Will handle that in the OS series... or in the upcoming Over the Edge FF... 😳
Don't worry... totally remember it... 😉

Eagerly waiting😳😉

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Wow !!..

U know Mou it's best to read an update when u least awaited...Like desert after Dinner lol...

About the chapter...Again hatts off to you.. not only you described the situation beautifully ...But also used all the characters in best way...

Munna- pandit ..Wat would I give to have friends/brother like them ... Imagining their initial hate for naina how far had they come ..Now friends and taking care of her...Best bond you can make..(( even in real life the friendly relation with Devars and Nanads is such a relief in a new atmosphere to adjust)) ... And now when they have got so bonded to Naina , they can even take it to Sameer (( himmat hai to Naina ko ab hurt karke dikha ...Hahahahaha)) ..

Swati --Preeti ... I just love both the girls ...One is sister cum friend and other is friend cum sister for Naina ... They are the backbone in Samaina's Relationship since start ...Love that they already are there ...

Hema and kamya also..I never thought I would start liking them both but now I surely do...

The TriVal gang ((Kartik gang)) I would never like them what ever happens...I hate Sunaina ...Don't know why , but I do..

It's good to see that Naina in ur stories so bold and sure ... She and only She knows Sameer better then anyone ... And she has that power over their relationship ... It's good to see she is so much devoted here ...That's a treat to read ((watch ))...May be this small gestures show the growth of their relationship ...I love reading detailed versions (( Although FF's )) of their Moments ...

Is this the end or you are going to give us more.. their confrontation (( Mou way)) ...I have found other SS on the Manhoos track , but would love to read ur version also... Just because you write so well...

All the best for your future post ((eagerly waiting)) ... And THANXXX for the PM'S

Asmita

Edited by asmita21180 - 7 years ago

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Wow Mou di

Kya likha hain

Loved it

Mission ignore Sameer worked

And we even got to see possessive boyfriend Sameer

Both Sameer and Naina know that they are weakness of each other and in the last scene during rain the both were trying to take advantage of it

Loved the Dominant Maheshwari ...how he pulled and pushed her inside his car

Update soon Mou di

Lots of love 😳

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#97

jealousy is the best medicine😆

mou... i'm travelling abhi... will try and drop a longer comment later

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Call it coincidence whenever you have have sent PM for this TS The first time and this time I am away both the times for exams and from my comfort zone.And the damn net connection is working at turtle's pace.

Back in Comfort zone...

Part-1

''The marks humans leave are too often scars''...So Is it fault in our stars or fault in 'Dadi'? We know the answer but how will Munna and Pandit know...

"Whiskey is the Answer''.

The title is self explanatory though we have to wait a bit to come to that part.The idea of incoherent ,id level of confession has been put to use exhaustively on ITV screens and in fictions..Where is the creativity? In writing it...differently

And you did it.Though it took me time to get soaked in the essence of emotion running undercurrents throughout...nonetheless loved the treatment.

Libido on high, Life in confusion and Whiskey in gut...

One can forget pain ,but not memories of sweetness..The confession of letting down her,troubling her ..

Intense that was.Child like mannerisms and broken fumbling intoxicated dialogues..

The telephone conversation had my heart.❤️

The worst part of memories is holding them in isolation and suffering.Relief comes with sharing.In bouts of drunkenness he relied on sweetest memories and shared his heart..

And Naina knew this pain is temporary but if she quits it will be permanent..the scars will deepen and she didn't want that.

Part-2

Dostoevsky is a genius and his very words are so true to this story.

"Much unhappiness has come into the world because of bewilderment and things left unsaid.''

And we know when whiskey has done its job,now some thespian qualities is the answer.

When we try to convince our heart and spirit of something our mind knows is a lie...most confusion come to fore.

The attentive- ignorance from her made my eyes a little mist.Its plain difficult.And the worst part,she doesnot deserve this.

The debate competition was a relaxing phase and that emotions no mateer how much suppressed find ways to leak out..

Kartik was well used and kudos to you for setting it all perfectly.

Munna and Pandit came as shockers but yeah they nailed it.I loved how you could smooth and lucidly write dialogues for each character.Each one distinct and true to their style.Excellent job there.👏👏

Sweetheart! Whistles for you Kajol style in K3G...😃

Sorry for being late ...

With love-

Minu.

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Mou yaar, why did you end it there? I seriously was getting excited for the rain romance, so what is gonna happen now, i know it is going to be fun, but you are going to give romance right? I mean it is raining, romance tho banta hai na mou!!

I love how naina knows how sameer's reactions are going to be, sameer is really one confused soul, he loves her, wants to protect her, but can't stay away from her. Naina's plan was perfect. It will bring sameer into line. Loved how the gang was helping her. Especially loved how mundit are balancing their equation with their bhabhi n bhai equally. Can't wait for the next one..

Thanks for the PM love ❤️

Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago