SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Drunken confessions are always super hilarious to read and when romance is involved, aah, it was pleasure to read this piece!

Thank you so much Shreya...!! 😃

I know I have delayed commenting, 'Soowwy' didi! I was planning to comment yesterday night itself but there was a sudden midnight feast planned...

Dear...ab se na please sorry bolna chod do... I myself am so late in commenting and replying to comments, that I just can't imagine how to cope...

Drunk Sam is so cute and I didn't even realise when it ended...While reading the whole story, I was reminded of my baby cousin who also just can't pronounce 'r'..I know the case is different as here Sam was inebriated, hehe...

Hahaa... That's exactly how I visualized him... like a kiddo... and it fit... so I used the slurry speech...!! 😆

So true to their characters; Pandit was the one who suggested to bring 'Weeekkky' in the plan and it was Munna who first understood what Sam was explaining regarding the danger caused by his manhoosiyat, despite his slurry language..

Hats off...!! I wanted someone to spot these character traits and you did... makes me so happy to know you read with such attention...! 🤗

You wrote such a perfect piece in a short span of time, WOW!

Wah, what a foolproof plan they had given birth to, Sam falling in the trap naturally progressed...It was not all OTT and it felt like watching the show, transported me to the memories when SaMunDit were trying to drink alcohol..You know how much I love Mount Abu track..

'Saala Sasur' 🤣I completely lost it there! I literally could imagine Sam saying that..

I died when Sam was blushing reminiscing the flying kiss and he gave a kiss to the photo too, umm, did it exactly lie on her lips?😉

Thank you...!! 😳 Yup, guilt tripping Sameer was the best way to get him drunk... Hahaa... you can imagine the kiss to be on the lips... and who know what I give you by the time I end this one... 😉

Something which touched my heart was how you mentioned Sam didn't fathom of losing the friendship..I had always wondered won't this manhoosiyat affect MunDit too after all he loved them and they loved him back according to Sameer?

Liked how you gave a closure to this by putting it across as a selfishness and love of an 18 year old...

Yes, I wanted a closure on that too... Why wasn't he staying away from MunDit... This is the only thing I could think of... Sameer is brave, but not enough to give up everything... 😳

Aww, the phone call, can it turn anymore cuter!?

The magical words☺️Naina got the reassurance what she wanted, no one can stop her now!

This one was awesome! You need to start writing in this genre too along with 18+ as you have written it perfectly..

Yep, I will try and write more in this genre... I have converted this story into a three shot... the next one will be emotional, but I will try and raise the comedy quotient in part 3... Anyways, Over the Edge will have a mix of everything, I guarantee that... 😳

Originally posted by: Uv78

Hey mou, first of all sorry for a late reply...

It was a treat to see a drunked sameer...bholuram ko pata nahi chala ki uske dost kya trick kar rahe hai uske sath...dosto ke liye jaan b de sakta hai...i like this quality of his a lot...naina handled him nicely...just loved your penning and its speed too...keep writing mou...

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Mou first of all a huge thanks and hug for writing this part for us!!🤗

Vodka nahi toh Whiskey sahi. Waise tum ne Chivas choose ki par iss situation mein mujhe Bagpiper yaad aagayi kyunki "Khoob jamega rang tab mil bhaitenge teen yaar"😆

SaMunDit bond was adorable as usual. Kya chalaki se baiwakoof banaye hai Sameer ko. It remined me of the time when they fooled Sameer to talk to Naina on phone after the bet episode. Again your knack for catching nuisances is amazing, like Pandit scratching his chin...could visualize Raghav in front of my eyes.

That trick by Pandit to empty out drink in rain😆 remined me how many 90s films had people pouring out their drink in flower vases😉 How smoothly they made Sameer blurt the truth. Drunk Sameer was cute especially his talk with Naina🤪One thing is guaranteed, his hangover next morning is going to be pretty rough and that mixed with confrontation with Naina...oh dear someone save this boy.

As Pandit said hamara dost toh gadha nikla and only Naina therapy can turn him back to a human.

Woh kehte hai na kabhi kabhi peena sehat ke liye acche hota hai😉 Maja agaya yaar👏

Cheers!

N

Originally posted by: meinfrau14

awesome OS !! how about one for Naina bringing SAM's akal thikane...hmmm...food for thought :) Thanks for this cute os !!

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Omg this update was all whiskyful... lovely update!!!

I just loved the way he valued friendship...n drunk sameer is always a treat to read!!!! Yaha to gum me tha sameer!!!

Beautiful was of Revelation...all emotions were well potrayed...love ho ya dosti ho...I just loved it!!
Specifically when light comes n pandit says...ab hamare dost k life me bhi roshini aa jayegi... beautiful!!!

Awesome os!!!

Originally posted by: doublecross

Confession in drunken stupor!

Well even I wanted something on the same lines hence when you penned something on the lines I was delighted.

I loved the way munna and pundit led him into their plan. The lure and the entire act seemed Damn cute. Especially munna describing his fight with his frockwala pundit was cuteness personified. Pundit nicely played along with his padosi story! Hahahaha! You cracked me up.

Coming to sameer those slurs and that cute accent which reminded me of baby gibberish was awesomely done by you. The way he confesses about his troubles I felt like pulling his cheeks infact I was doing the same mentally.

The livectgat he harbours for naina, it's feelings deep as oven clearly reflected in his actions. The phone conversation and the 'weeky' part was the cutest. The way he wanted naina to say those 3 magical words was done with finesse by you. It shows he doesn't wanna let go and never will he.

Lovely in a word!

Originally posted by: Shiraaz

Ahhh drunken confessions are bestest😃 sab Dil ki baat Bhar..😳

Mazaa agya Yaar padke...😛

weeky weeky🤣 I could actually hear sameer's sound ringing in my ears..😆 yeah people do talk like that under such influence but aren't they just cutest ☺️ at that Mt Abu trip also I wanted Sammy boy to be drunk but CVS.. still we got memorable scene there.. and so is this..😃 manhoos hai baat nhi karega but luv u Sunna hai ladke ko😆 and mundit ki toh sab bta dia...Naina ne kisssy dii😉😆.. malunga Mai..saala susur😆

Morning good hogyi Meri..😆

Brilliant..👏

Keep coming with more..😃 and will you continue this ??

-Shira

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Res mou another res 😆

Unres 😉

Wow mou kya mast idea tha tumhara 👏

Superb 👏

The os was as usual amazing.

Mundit hi the jo beech me pees rahe the SamAina ke beech me. Mere dono cuties 😳

Kya idea nikala hai unho ne 😆

Sameer Ko Naina ki photo se baat karta dekh meko gana yaad aagaya "iss dewaane ladke Ko " ka antra

" Yeh akele me aahh bharta hai

Phir bhi kehne se ye Kyun darta hai "

Akele me toh full on chalu 😆

Mundit ka dimag 👏

whiskey nanaji ke room se laate waqt jab Munna ne nana ji ke photo ke samne haath Joda tha that gesture really touched me 😳

Phir kahani banaye ya sach 😆

Sala sassur 😆😆

Whiskey ka asar hua or Sameer sab kuch bol toh diya thank god 😆

Kitne kiss bhi kiye Naina Ko 😳😳

The way Sameer was talking is so cute 😳

Last me ilu ilu 😳

Thanks for pm!

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Res! But it cannot be an OS...I want to read more hehe

Mou...tum to Shatabdi se bhi tez nikli..nai nai bullet train se bhi 😆 But acha hai hum jaison ke liye...

Sabse pehle baat...ye Shammeel aiche cute cute baat kalega to hamala kya hoga...weeky pi hai...sowwy Naina...saala sasur...you had me in splits...Mundit kamal ke hi hain...meli Naina ko thappal maala...the best was Sameer doston ke kandhon pe haath daal ke whisper karta hai main manhoos hun...sheh kisi ko nai batana...kya kamal ho gya yaar!! N Preeti ka jijaji ki akal ghas charne gayi hai kya was so Preetiesh...😆

N yeah how can I forget that part...Mundit nicking the whiskey n Nanu ki photo saamne...they apologize n seek blessings...reminded me of Sameer that day at Naina's house when he decides to take a pen from Naina's table as she was away...spots her grandparents ki photo n does Namaste guiltiy hahaha...unka pota damaad hai...blessings mil gayi use tab aur Aashiqui ki cassette repair ho gayi 😆

This update was total dil le lo...Mundit ka ishare se whiskey peene ki acting karna...jab Pandit aur Munna idhar udhar whiskey fek rae the I was like bhaiyon feko to mat 😆

Bas baat ban gayi...hamara kaam khatam...

Yaar aage bhi likh ho do Mou agar mood ho to! 😆

Loved it as always!

Sur

Actually, I forgot what I had read in the first part.. Then I read the first part again.. Sorry

As usual nice update dear.. Aww Sameer sab kuch bhul gaya usne raat mein kya kiya tha 😆

I really liked the Naina Kartik scene and Sameer's jealousy 😉

MunDit ne kya sunaya Sameer ko.. Wo achhi tarah jante hai Naina ko

Baarish scene was love ❤️.. Both are adamant at their place..

Thanks for the PM