Samaina SS : 'Suhana Safar' (*Updated*; Epilogue on Page 85)

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Waohhh u r amazing writer yrr.. safar dach me suhana tha.. felt happy reading it.. keep writing..

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

It was really very amezing ..

I was totally engrossed in your story ..

Loved it ..samaina were too cute

Can't believe it was your first time writing anything ..you should write more ..I would love to read more from you

Are we getting the next part of it ?

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B M RAO

@ratnarao12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Outstanding yaar

Bahut hi kamaal ka tha

Now can't wait for the call

Toh ???

When is the next part

Eagerly waiting😛

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wow Aaisha di, now this is what I call beautiful😳

The way you kept the essence of the show, the voiceovers...

Do continue your stories with this writing style as it's different yet very much attractive..and also I loved how you kept their dialogues in hindi, that move was very inviting for the readers; atleast to me😃

You bought back the memories of all the railway journeys..Infact I just had another trip and I took railways to travel..

I loved the ending absolutely, that unknown trust on him proved

Keep coming with more and don't forget to PM me your works!

Love,

Shreya

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

By God Aaisha! This is your first attempt? Unbelievable! I was so hooked onto this story...it seemed to be to be another scene from the show...if Sameer n Naina had met this way...I loved you showed the Hindi mein bolo na by Sameer...I just miss that! This was simple, romantic n so 90s...mujhe bhi hamesha aisa lgta tha koi kabhi aise train me, safar me mil jaye...haaye Sam asked for her number...n Naina gave it to him...I know Naina is going to DU now...n hopefully Sam too! Wow! Hope to see their romance brewing in the Dilwalon ki Dilli in a good light...btw tum to badi achi shayae bhi ho...loved it to the core...

It can't be an OS nope! You have to convert it to a FF!

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