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Seema

@JaySee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Such a beautiful story and such a beautiful update. Really loved this version of ending of manhoos track. Pls don't stop it. Continue the story. Would love to read more and more from you.

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: dreamyp
Wwwooohhh such a long update.. 4 hrs? I think tumhe 8 hrs lge hoge use likhne me.. but kya likha h mja aa gya padhke.. fabulous.. why its last part? Its lovely story.. i want more..

thank you so much for liking it! I was planning to extend it too but the essence of the title wd b lost... dnt worry I vl start a sequel soon! 😊

Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago

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Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Azraa01
What a beautiful update.
They way you described Naina's determination and Sameers feelings were amazing.
Thank you for such a long update that had only Sameer and Naina.

I thot too tht it was getting much longer but couldn't find a pause point. Thins for liking it

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: JaySee
Such a beautiful story and such a beautiful update. Really loved this version of ending of manhoos track. Pls don't stop it. Continue the story. Would love to read more and more from you.

thanx...I blbwyite a sequel to this story soon!

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

This was amazing

Loved the confrontation

Naina in Sameer's shirt☺️

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
Lovely ..
You gave such a beautiful end to this manhoos track
I was literally soo engrossed in this update ..
This was best of all I've read on this particular track till date
Amezing imagination ..I must say
Naina sach mein ek no. Ki dheet hai .. Loved this about her
Baarish toh hamesha do pyar karne valo ko mila deta hai ..
And here also it did the magic
Sameer offering his clothes to Naina and then getting possessive just over the thought of someone else eying her in this state is my favorite from the entire update.. Well font worry Sameer ye hak sirf tumhara hai !!
Naina giving him the much disserved love and assurance was just awesome ..loved it
You brilliantly portrayed Naina as sameer's strength ..hood job
Would love to read more from you ..

Love
Laalchi reader

Yup I thot it might end in show this week so I wanted to end it here...I also read beautiful perspectives on the manhoos track but wanted to try something totally diff. Y does each hv to prove whether the other is lucky or unlucky. Just accept them as they r & the reality of life. The focus SD b on living a beautiful life with ur loved ones without heeding abt such superstitions!

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Hey i read 3rd -5th parts all in one go😛

What an amzing story dear😃

Dadi's character has been the worst in this show...the way she tortured Sameer was totally unacceptable😡

But when someone does such a thing and one loses his own self confidence...thats the worst thing to happen to anybody😡

Sameer going through this phase and the way Naina brings him out of his shell was brilliantly penned down😃👏

The last part was the best and very emotional...could see everything happening in front of my eyes😃

Mundit are always the best friends to have...no doubt on this👏😃

Loved this entire journey through your pen and thanks for the pm...sorry for being late dear😳

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Hey i read 3rd -5th parts all in one go😛
What an amzing story dear😃
Dadi's character has been the worst in this show...the way she tortured Sameer was totally unacceptable😡
But when someone does such a thing and one loses his own self confidence...thats the worst thing to happen to anybody😡
Sameer going through this phase and the way Naina brings him out of his shell was brilliantly penned down😃👏
The last part was the best and very emotional...could see everything happening in front of my eyes😃
Mundit are always the best friends to have...no doubt on this👏😃

Loved this entire journey through your pen and thanks for the pm...sorry for being late dear😳

most of my Tory settings are based on real life experiences by me or someone around. Me, especially in 90s...I m glad ppl like them when penned in a samaina setting. 😊

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Chaaru

@chaaru26

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Superb ss👏

You have beautiully shown Naina's confrontation.

I read all parts in one go... but the last part was amazing😳

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Hey Radhika! Sorry for the super late reply but didn't get enough time to read the story😊

Part I

I really liked how you represented Somani's concern for Vishaka..In the show too, Somani does care about her and is not completely evil...

'Picking Dipika from her classes' 😳these small things makes the story more connected with the readers..Loved their bond😳

The highlight of the update seriously would be Rohan and Sameer taking care of Vishaka without food and sleep..Taking care of her and making sure that she is well all through the night

Another highlight was Sameer immediately became a responsible big brother from a carefree boy..That sudden change was evident in how he took care of Dipika

The unfortunate happenings of not getting the doctor at this rainy night with an ill mom who has to be taken care of immediately would have made anyone get panicked..But again, Sam took care of it...

Acknowledgement was needed indeed..😃

Well, Somani is not evil but his mother surely is...Manhoos Dadi

Part II

This was a superb update...The highlights are of course Vishaka's outburst which I completely loved...each dialogue was so nice to read when especially it was directly to Dadi and in the presence of Somani, Rohan, Sameer...Dipika was there too but her little mind may not understand such things..But when a child gets impression of something, it does take time to change it..

Well not only Sameer, tears welled up in my eyes too when you mentioned Nanu..the attachment is so deep with him that I forget it's just a show...

Sameer Jaiprakash Maheshwari. He will surely be.

Nanu's chota sa Sameer😭

Another highlight was Rohan-Sam...their relation wasn't properly explored in the show but glad to read it in here...

'Family is not about blood. Its about who is willing to hold your hand when you need it the most.'

Part III

Even though Vishaka stood up for Sameer, Dadi won by instilling these thoughts in Sam's mind...Not all teenagers are manipulated easily but Sam's is a different case...he's emotionally very weak and the wound was still raw...
The Nanu's scene put me into tears...Reading it brings heaviness in my chest😭

Remembering the heart rending episodes, the early March was really a testing time for the fandom...

Thank god, in this story, Samaina's antenna connection worked fine😆

Jokes apart, I liked how Naina sensed each other...them remembering the memories they shared😳I was drifted into Samaina Land😳

I liked how you made a small build up for the revelation of Sam being in Ahmedabad..it was realistic and you left the update in suspense note!! I love cliffhangers😃

Part IV

The seeds of doubt has been sowed in Naina's mindHopefully, she will find him and we can expect a beautiful Milan😳

Loved the SaMunDit reunion, there was a place for happiness at his comback and also anger for not informing...They are always a treat😳Them praising their Bhabhi😳

Also liked MunDit dilemma to whether lie or not!? Shows their character growth and how they respects her..

Part V

The last part and my favourite part😃

Oh dear! Four hours!? Cheers for you darling for being so dedicated to entertain and bring us relief during this track...

The update was an emotional roller coaster ride...

Special mention to Amrita, she remained true to her promise to Sam

Bela's comment on being bhari 😆

The detiny had made its own plans for their reunion and made sure that no one would be witness to the lovers quarrel😳

I loved how you added the Mount Abu memories..It warmed my heart too as that will forever remain my favourite track

The exchange between Samaina at the beginning was heartbreaking to read but the dialogues were apt..

Naina became the mature one here..the way they balance their relationship😳

There was no place for misunderstandings...I absolutely love this stubborn Naina😃

So beautiful! Aesthetic! The way Naina took Sameer out of this inauspicious thing was so good that I read it thrice...

Sameer keeping the handkerchiefs and sweater, haaye😳Warmth filled in my heart when I read that...The diary containing his shaayaris again bought back a Mount Abu memory...

The story ended on a good note with no misunderstandings and no secrets..they opened their hearts out..The hug was much needed as after this, their relation has taken another step forward and the hug sealed the complete faith, love, trust and belonging they have towards each other..

This story is beautiful and offered me a good read...read all the parts together😃

Love,

Shreya

P.S. I like how you mention Somani as Bobby in your story😆

P.P.S. When will you update Forever Yours?😃

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago