Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 )

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_shweta98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#751

Oh my god! This is done already?!

But hats off to you!

Loved this story to bits..

I'm glad i was fortunate enough to read this..

Loved how preeti stood beside her sister no matter what..

Actually i loved everythinggg in this update as well..

Looking forward to read some more from you always!

Keep writing!

Thank youu so much for the PM!❤️

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Seema

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Posted: 7 years ago

#752

Hi Ashwathy,
Beautiful ending for such a beautiful story. I was literally on tears towards the end. Beauty of Samaina's relation is that they don't need to give justification for each other for their actions. They can't hate each other at all because they love each other so much.
I completely agree to the learning of Naina. When u love ur man truly then only ur mind is angry on his mistakes and ur heart can never be angry on him.
The names given by Preethi is hilarious.
At last Mr. Spineless Sameer managed to grow some spine.
Do write more.

Seema

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SanayaK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#753

Awesome...I'm so glad Naina dint have a miscarriage. So true, only mind can be angry but heart will always be in love.

Thanks for this lovely arranged marriage story.

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#754

Heights of carelessness by Sameer's family👏 The workers at the NGO knew that Naina was not well but her so called in-laws didn't even bother to check on her.. Fantastic people!!

The spineless trait of Sameer comes from Vishakha, you see!!

Preeti has been Naina's only support throughout this difficult phase.. N she's so strong that she doesn't even care that the person standing in front of her is Naina's husband or her fiance.. Nobody can defeat her resolve👏 even if it cost her her engagement ring!!

Could completely understand Naina's decision.. It bloody hurts when the people we love, can't see our pain.. Can't understand our problems.. And he was her husband who loved her.. And her oh-so-loving saas had just amazing reactions to her health issues.. She fainted multiple times n was even taken to hospital n she just waved it off.. Khud se assume kr liya ki kuch nhi hua hoga😡

But, the T-shirt idea was very cute.. Sameer did this😆 I'm gonna use this idea in my future.. For sure😆

Didn't want this to end😳 But all good things come to an end so.. It's ok😊

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Divya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#755

Beautiful story.. So its true dat naina is pregnant.. Plz would love to c the reaction of family on receiving ths news.. Hopefully u would write smethng n dat context...

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bmk28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#756

Hi Aswathy, It was so lovely to read this series.. What a beautiful progression of a relationship. I read the last part yesterday and thought I will comment. I was so sure from Naina's conversation that she is pregnant. And thats how it turned out to be. But this concluding part was so good and the best one. So finally Naina managed to bring in MAN out of Sameer. Sameer did it!! Actually and literally.. Everything.. For Naina.. For them..

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Azraa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#757

This was not only an emotional update but a heartfelt update as well.
Really enjoyed it and I am still shocked that the SS has come to an end.
Am really going to miss this story

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hawa.hawaayi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#758

I really enjoyed this story so much and didn't want it to end 😭but still if you wish to then please accept my one wish please start a new one aur title mai SS nahi FF daalna😆

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vidrev

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Posted: 7 years ago

#759

A very nice ending. Finally sameer stood up for her girl it was really good and the way Rohan and preethi showed their love for their siblings was really heart warming. Naina was on her top by bringing sameer to her side in her own way which looked most challenging for her as she even went to a stage of risking her life. Nice and inspirational ending. If the husband support his wife and love her to the core there will be no problems. You have mailed it dear. Thank you for the wonderful write up. God bless you.