Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 ) - Page 74

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Posted: 7 years ago
I first commented on the 100th page
Happy Century Ashu di!🥳Cross many more pages!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update.. . I think Naina is pregnant with her first child. . That's y she is missing him a lot.. Let's see what is the actual reason.. I wish naina and sameer reunites soon.. Pls this time update soon suspense is killing me
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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved this Sameer in control... plz dnt make Naina critically ill... is she pregnant but she was angry with him for the past 6 mths, still preggers? But that's y she must hv said tht he has to come soon or he vl miss some precious moments!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous update with a suspense. Hope all fine with Naina. I hope they will be together soon without any hurdles as our CVS give in the serial hope won't be there in your story. Such a nice update and it was really good to see a responsible sameer taking steps for his naina. Lovely write up and plz update soon can't handle the suspense for too long.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 19
Well, I almost missed this one as didn't get PM for this chapter😆Phew, had to search through all the pages!
This chapter touched my heart and just how I expected, Sameer's reaction was so emotional and and applause to you for bringing this secret out at such a high point👏
I am loving how he is first taking stand for himself, at the neglecting attitude of his mother. He is going to be a Man in true sense and loved how Nanu whispered it to him😉
She has left all her treasured pieces behind as she's aware and she's making him aware that where he stays, that's her home. I am touched. 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
Congratulations Ashu Di.. Your story completed 100 pages😃
First of all, I'm loving this badass Sameer Maheshwari.. Good for his step-dad n Kamya

Thank God Kamya is involved in d NGO now.. She won't be velli enough to roam around Sameer😆

Now I really want Sameer to be near Naina as soon as possible.. In this condition, which I think is pregnancy, she shouldn't be alone.. She needs Sameer the most.. But life's cruel!! All sorts of tension, fears, loneliness hv been given to her in this crucial time

Sameer went to the God's idol n lit the diya to pray for her.. That just won my heart❤️

Thank you for the PM n please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Coming to the latest update, fab! 👏
Firstly, I am happy at the fact that SaMunDit are reunited and they have slowly started controlling the business...How I wish I could have seen faces of Vishaka, Somani, Kamya and her uncle😆 Glad that chudail is not with Sam anymore.
It really seems Naina is hiding something maybe her pregnancy..It's being confirmed by Preeti's actions.
Sameer praying to God for her safety just touched my heart😳
Update soon!
-Shreya
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congratulations Ashu on the 100th page
After innumerable bleary eyed nights am back to review.

I love the way the story is progressing. The gradual understanding of the characters and the way they are lending support to each other is beautifully depicted in your story. The fact that naina pines for sameer to stand up to situations and take a stand for them actually exhibits the protective side in her as a wife. She doesn't want him to be weak, she wants him to do what's right and stay strong as an individual. This is what a life partner does actually, he/She helps you get over your short comings and bring out the best in You, fortifying you as an individual. Love doesn't weaken but strengthens and that's what naina is trying to do over here. May be her decisions are harsh but she is on a path where she is seeking solace and complete assurance from her partner. There is no lack of trust but somewhere seeing the indecision in Sameer, somewhere naina too ebbs away wallowing into her own insecurities. The blame somewhere is on Sameer, though it would be wrong to say that he never tried yet he should have been strong enough to stand up and refuse any collaboration with kamya.


The step that naina had taken has finally bore its first fruit. The way this new sameer who is not ready To endure any nonsense thrown his way in the name of business was endearing to read about. The fact that he was blunt enough count out the mistakes of kamya and that she was yet to gain experience was something I loved reading about. The way he tackled the entire scenario especially when Mr somani yet again was trying to play one of his dirty tricks with him was superb. By hiring munna and pundit to guide him through the project, he has played a masterstroke. What really pains me to see is the nonchalant nature of visakha. After all she was the one who had loved naina and even suggested the alliance. The fact that suddenly in the name of saving her sham of a marriage with the deceitful Mr somani, She has suddenly turned a blind eye to the woes of her own son and daughter in law. She had to be given a taste of her own medicine, if she had been playing along, being the dutiful wife and thrusting kamya towards sameer, then she too would have to bear the brunt of it. Yes, that's what sameer did when he suggested that kamya take part in the functions of the ngo and help his mother out instead. That way he hit two birds with one stone, easily kamya was out of his hair and he could concentrate on his job at hand.

Naina is stalling her meeting with Sameer, she clearly misses him but somewhere she is keeping a secret from him. I hope in the next update we get to.know what that prized secret is. The

Waiting eagerly for the next part
Continue soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear
It was wonderful I must say
God Sameer and his attitude I loved it really
kamya is so chipku ...thank God now MunDit are there with Sameer

is Naina pregnant ? Samaina's conversation in the last few updates are directing towards it
But what happened to Preeti ? why is she hiding it from Rohan that she is staying with Naina
Update soon dear I hope next update mein suspense khul jaayega
plzzz I want update very soon
Lots of love




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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh God...suspense filled update. Is Naina pregnant?
I really hope she didn't have a miscarriage.
Else Sameer won't be able to forgive himself.

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