Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 )

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: BintaPatel
Loved this story so much...Cant wait to read the next part..Thanks 😊

Thank you so much !! Have updated part 2.

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Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Lovely story... please update soon!

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shruti1326

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Loved this part too!! Thank you for updating so soon 🤗 this story is so different I want to keep reading it again n again.. please pm me the next time you update.. sending buddy request.. eagerly waiting for the next update

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Komalp1391
Amazing start i wanted a story like this on samaina and u made my wish came true
I m eagerly waiting for next part update as soon as possible

Thank you so much !!

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Mayashika
An interesting concept Ashu di
Vishaka playing an important character here and also a cupid😳I liked how you told the backstory of the important characters before introducing them...Not too detail but still to get an idea
Well, Sameer has cleared that he's not marrying Naina out of sympathy but how would Naina react? After all, she has buried her love for him and when it's dug out, it comes with double intensity..
Do PM me when you update next part😃

Thank you so much !! The thing is , does he realize that he had feelings for in school days...??there was something between them... 😉 will have to see how its going to come out...

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

I'm so much in love with this story...I'm up like an owl even though I need to wake up soon...I started reading this one n couldn't stopped...totally hooked...I loved how you mentioned that during their first almost bump, Sameer did turn twice to look back at her n how Naina realized the meaning of love at that exact moment...the Naina then n the Naina now...n Kamya uhh..lesser said the better...I can't believe Sameer was dating her n was about to marry her..phew!

Vishakha playing the cupid was love n funny too...she knew instantly that Sameer liked Naina...n the way Sameer realized he's in love...Sameer's possesiveness seeing Naina in that lehenga...this is not an arranged marriage...this is a love marriage which has been arranged by Vishakha...thankfully only few negative characters here n no blaring Rakeshs n dadis...when is the next update?

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mehraan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Ashuuu im sold away wit ur stry!!!😆..Wat a concept n wat a start...Really engaging n beautiful characterizations...So Naina believes Sam.is marrying out of sympathy n his first love will always be Kamya...so tis is painful actually...Wen she always loved him from Day1!!!..Now im really waiting for tis truth to b unfolded as Sam needs to kno that this Behenji had unconditionally loved him so much that she suffered herself in silence ..without hoping anything in return ..but his happiness!!...Please ASHU. update it soon n mke it spicy for usss...Please!!!!!😆

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Anisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Read both the chapters in one go! Couldn't stop and I wanted it to continue... Very intriguing story you got here 😳
I loved the possessive Sam
Boi is finding hard to control his feelings and desires 😆
I liked how Vishaka was playing cupid between the two
Brilliantly penned!
I can't wait to read the next part!
Please continue soon 😳

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Seema

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Superb update. Really in love with the story and characters. Pls update soon.

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Chapter 2 was fabulous

The way he asked her whether she has agreed to marry him out of pressure was such a nice gesture... Sameer wants a simple court marriage was amazing as well... In a way its good for naina's family.

Sameer is getting to know about his newly found feelings... It gives him immense happiness too... Sameer realizing that this is the first time he is feeling this way... Not even with kamya did he feel like this.

Vishakha is really playing a cupid every now and then... Loved the lehenga selection part... She went away giving the couple their privacy... Possessive sameer😳... The way he said he's already possessive about her... Asking her whether she feels the same way too... So cute... Sameer choosing lehenga for naina is like a dream come true.

Sameer asking her to jeep smiling was too good... I am loving how sameer is able to see her mental as well as physical beauty... He's getting more and more attracted to her... Getting impatient to meet her... Even two weeks gap becoming unbearable for him... So loving this desperation of sameer.

This story is going amazing... Eagerly waiting for the next update... Pls do me pm me too.