Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 ) - Page 68

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Posted: 7 years ago
What a wonderful story you have woven
I love all the twists and turns and the ups and downs
Please Pm me when you update next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: souhasini

Superb update dear. Love u😊.ummah😳

Thank you so much !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 9211

Loved it!

It was perfect
Rohan is love.. he made sameer understand.. now waiting for sameer to come back..❤️
Update soon!

Thank you so much!! Its nice that even in the darkest of days he has Rohan to bring the much needed light , so that Sameer can take a decision.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bmk28

Oh my god.. What do I say.. I literary had tears in my eyes.. I felt so bad for Naina in last part and even more in this part.. It must be so difficult for her to take this decision of going away from Sameer. She is indeed a woman of substance.. I felt bad for Sameer but then you have to pay consequences for not taking right decisions.. I am waiting for the part of changed sameer who has risen up to settle the score so that he can bring his love back..

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it. Naina needn't give in just because she loves Sameer. Her self respect should be important to her and Sameer should also not take Naina for granted. Balancing is what is the need of the hour...he is learning and I tell you he is a fast learner... 😉 well a man in love is always a fast learner... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

I am happy and emotional right now.You must be knowing why emotional but let me first tell you why happy...English Post at University and Hostel...For a moment I felt like Naina and that hostel going emotion is on point.I had the same emotion while going to hostel..who all value my presence in their lives...And it did show who cared,and who all never bothered.Hence this hostel and job thing really works wonders for relationships.

And coming to emotional part...Could feel for Sameer.When you are too easy giving and forgiving,people take you for granted and play cheap tricks.You can't be rude yet see your own world crumbling.But sometimes the boats needs to be stirred opposite the tides.That alter ego of Hyde has to comme to fore when Dr.Jeckyll falls too gullible for world.

Needless to say Rohan is just the lighthouse Sameer needs in this lost sea.

Loved it in whole and the dialogues just take the cake along with all the glitters.👏👏

Thank you for PM and plz update soon.

With love-
Minu.

Thank you Minu. Emotions around living at hostel is my favorite too. I have also spent quite some no of years in the hostel...it did take me back to those days while I wrote this chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Wow dear

Rohan is the best dil le lo
I hope Samaina separation will end soon I hope you will not make us cry for the long time
I m very exited to see Sameer "the bad boy" Maheshwari
Rohan said right now God save his stepfather and that chipku Kamya
Update soon dear plzzz
Lots of love for you😳

Thank you so much !! Did you say bad boy Sameer ?? I will say he is an absolute gentleman...a bad boy in the cloths of a debonair would be the best way to look at him... 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

So so so beautiful

Heart touching update
Update next part soon can't wait

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Felt bad for both of them😭

Naina is one strong girl, even after all the pain she stood her ground👏 looks like she will have a surprise for Sameer soon😊Distance does makes the heart grow fonder and we can already see that. Two months she was beside Sameer, he let the things be as is and took her presence for granted 🥱Glad he called Rohan finally!! Sameer is indeed a Bholuram here until now, can't wait to see his fire now that Rohan has reminded him what he is capable of. Rohan is❤️
Somani makes me cringeSameer and Naina need to be away from him!

Finally Sameer has the diary 😃From the time you mentioned it I was eagerly waiting for this day. It is mixed with sadness since Naina left but glad that she gave it to him herself. The diary will be his strength is her physical absence and I think we are going to see The Sameer Maheshwari very soon!!

Loved it like always😛 Impatiently waiting for the next part already as Sam's going to read the diary😳

P.S. The way you described the heart on first page and the words Stolen Heart in Golden was❤️

Thank you so much !! Sam is going to read the diary...will he be happy or sad?? 😕 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Omg!! Such emotional updates!

I started reading your latest update and then realised that I had missed the previous part. So read 17 and 18 together and can't express just over emotionally charged are these 2 chapters!

The twists and turns.. the emotional responses of the characters.. the change in their relationship dynamics.. you have penned it all so beautifully. And at the heart of it you can feel all their raw feelings of need for each other.

All the questions raised by your Naina are so valid and especially important to her. For once she needs someone to make her the priority, let her know that she matters the most! Especially the person who has been the love of her life for so long.

Some of the things she said just before boarding the bus made me think that she has news to share. But wants to know if Sameer chooses her just out of his for her and not out of a sense of duty to what might be on the way..,

Please include me in the list of PMs if you send any about future updates.

Loving it!!!

Thank you so much !! All the while Sameer was not hers...but now he is her husband...so she has the right to get what she wants from him. Its her right as his wife... 😊

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