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Sweety

@BinnyP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Loved this story so much...Cant wait to read the next part..Thanks 😊

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1133597

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Amazing start i wanted a story like this on samaina and u made my wish came true

I m eagerly waiting for next part update as soon as possible

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

An interesting concept Ashu di

Vishaka playing an important character here and also a cupid😳 I liked how you told the backstory of the important characters before introducing them...Not too detail but still to get an idea

Well, Sameer has cleared that he's not marrying Naina out of sympathy but how would Naina react? After all, she has buried her love for him and when it's dug out, it comes with double intensity..

Do PM me when you update next part😃

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mrinalinimenon
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.
U have portrayed nainas one sided love so beautifully. Sameer was always attracted towards her subconsciously.

Jaldi update Kar do. Ab aur intezaar nahi hota.

Thank you so much !! He was attracted to her from the day one. There was something that had attracted him towards her . In fact that part of his character makes him a mystery and unpredictable. Probably he likes it that way about him... 😉

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Hitanshivyas

@Hitanshivyas

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

It's a amazing story and with a good different concept i like this vishakha a lot now looking forward to naina's reaction when she comes to know about Sameer's marriage proposal eagerly waiting for the next update please update soon 😊

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Romanoff

@Asmaara

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

one-sided love of naina turning into arrange marriage with her love!!!

would be interesting to see how naina reacts to his proposal!!!

u conveyed their emotions so beautifully!!

please update soon!!👍🏼

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

It was really a brilliant start...you nicely managed to show the society and the way it deals with girls who have no strong parental support. Sameer now ready for marriage...but is Naina ready? thats a big question mark?

I feel she wont agree easily😳

Nice start to the story dear😃👏

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Fantastic start ashu.

This story is different from all the other samaina stories... I liked the concept of arranged marriage for samaina... It can explore samaina finding true love in arranged set up...

Naina is a very string girl here... Though she has always loved sameer and sameer never gave any attention to her, she still didnt let it affect her... She moved on with life... I loved how she wanted to be independent... Dowry is a big problem in India... Especially girls like naina who is from middle class families are badly affected by this system..

Vishakha was the best character un the story so far... Just like nanu... Even though a rich woman, she is extremely grounded and down to earth... So loved her attitude... The love she has for naina is amazing... Being a true mother, she understands naina is perfect for her son.

Sameer's maturity is also amazingly written... He understands that life has to move on no matter what... Ii loved it when he understood Vishakha's words about not to be judgmental towards all the women because of one.

Loved how vishakha played sameer into making him accepting to marry naina... She knows her son adores this girl and wants the best for her... The way sameer said he isnt marrying naina out of sympathy and he really wants to marry her for his own happiness 😳... It was superb.

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

It's so so good dear
I loved it so much.
I m so happy that something good came in weekend ..
Please pm me for next update ..
Waiting for next update

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mrinalinimenon
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.
U have portrayed nainas one sided love so beautifully. Sameer was always attracted towards her subconsciously.

Jaldi update Kar do. Ab aur intezaar nahi hota.

Thank you so much !!

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