Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 32

Owww so much passionate.. I got lost with their hot kiss.. sameer filling her mang with lipstick was a surprise..But it was beautiful.. it was very long but fab update dear..Thnx fr pm..In love with their love..

Very sweet romantic & passionate kiss! Tou bachcha badhe ho gaye aur yeh bhi Pataa hai ki aage kya ho sakta hai! 😳 beautiful update!

Really really romantic update

Ohh my my...what a passionate update it was?

Ahem ahem !!

Sur,

As i keep telling you, and i will keep telling you repeatedly, i love you girl. I don't know how u keep coming up with such beautiful updates. , i don't know why, i feel so connected when it comes to this particular story, my heart feels full and this gives such a pure blissful feeling when reading it. loved the way u penned down the prequel and the sequel now.

The vast difference between the two stories you are writing simultaneously, shows what a gem you are. If you ask me, u should just seriously think about publishing your stories.

I absolutely loved ur update dear, the way sameer notices the minute details when it comes to naina, the red saree, red lipstick, her heels, the kajal, his tie, his formals, the subtle blushing, the strange new emotions emerging with their age, both equally yearning about their first kiss, sameer trying to tame down his harmones, the blazer reminding them of mt.abu, the rain creating the perfect atmosphere for romance, them enjoying being silly n dancing on bollywood tunes, then came the sensuality of it. You have taken care of every subtle nuances till the lead upto kiss.

So subtle, yet so passionate and lit with fire. I loved how you brought up naina in a sensuous avatar here, the kiss i can't describe, it's the detailing here the way sameer slowly pushes her against the tree and kisses her again, then naina being dominant giving into her hearts desire, kudos to you. So much, so much into detailing these little things. It shows how they would be equal partners in everything in future. And how could i forget the jealous sameer, such a treat to watch him getting his share finally..and the way naina still gets jealous about nainital gf is so cute. I loved how they were discussing about going to nainital, you have covered lots of points dear, great way for naina to know sameer's early life n memories before ahmedabad.

And the sindoor scene, it was so unexpected n completely so sameer, for him she is already his wife. The subtle way he shows these things to naina completely gives me the feels. It shows how much thought you put into each scene n line, hatts off to you girl. Please keep coming up with more.

Thanks alot for the PM love ❤️

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Owww so much passionate.. I got lost with their hot kiss.. sameer filling her mang with lipstick was a surprise..But it was beautiful.. it was very long but fab update dear..Thnx fr pm..In love with their love..

Originally posted by: Radkam

Very sweet romantic & passionate kiss! Tou bachcha badhe ho gaye aur yeh bhi Pataa hai ki aage kya ho sakta hai! 😳 beautiful update!

Finally tge first kiss. .. the most awaited moment!

Absolutely fantastic.. Love how you portrayed the jealousy, to the subtle reassurances of love and then the kiss.
But the best was Sameer filling her hair partition with lipstick making Naina his.

Loved the update and thank you for the pm