Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 33

Originally posted by: Ishh..

Ohh my my...what a passionate update it was?

Surbhi di yeh apne kya kar dala hum jaise masoom nirdosh baccho ke sath...Hayee ise padhne ke baad pehle toh bhoot deer tak mujhe saas nahi aae..

Ek toh itne garmi...uper se aap aesa zulm kar rahe ho hum par...apne dimag ko shant karne ke liye poora bottle pani pe gai main..😆

Now come to update..

OMG Thank you so much Ishu!! 😳😳 Itna sweet comment! 🤗 Aur paani peena sehat ke liye acha hota hai...dehydration nai hogi garmi mein! 😆

It was really very nice..Naina red saree main Sameer ko clean bold hona hi tha fir..uper se red lipstick..

😃 Thanks dear...I'm glad you liked my choice of attire for them...Sameer ki wicket udane ka hi to iraada tha! 😉

And thanks for giving us jealous Sameer Maheshwari.. jab tak hath khud ka jale tab tak dard ka aehsaas nahi hota...usse tarah jab tak khud jealousy ka shikar na ho tab tak mehbooba ka dard samajh nahi aata😆

Haha...so true...pehle to bada uchal rha tha...baat Naina ki aayi to possessiveness overloaded! 😆

Baarish main Samaina.. woh bhi akele...aur Sameer masoom nirdosh rahe..aesa toh ho hi nahi sakta. I was imagining every scene with every line in my mind Bechare bholi kese jhelte hai RD ka intense gaze...yanha toh soch kar he blushing blushing hojate hain😳

Haha...ab wo to bholi hi jaanti hogi...ki wo jhelti hai gaze ya enjoy karti hai! 😉 Sameer to maasoom nirdosh raha nahi...but Naina hai...halaki slowly she too has led her inhibitions down! 😊

And that kiss...god that was damn passionate... yeh read karke bas ek hi khayal aata hai..show main toh abhi hug bhi nahi hua pata nahi kab denge..aab toh lagta hai sach main kanhi shadi ke baad na mile😕

Amazing update sur di!!

Seriously yaar...I jumped with joy at that chocolate wiping scene...lag raha tha Sam felt like kissing her lips...but they never explored that aspect...arey Sam ghar jake to sochega na how he felt...embarrass hoga lekin nai! Yahan ek scratch pe mama-mami ise ghar mein band kar denge!

But koi na...imagination pe kisne taala daala hai! 😉 I'm so happy that you enjoyed the kiss dear! 😳

Waiting for next update!!

With love,

Ishu.

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Really really romantic update

Damn passionate

Loved it

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Ahem ahem !!

Kya tha he !! I'm still in daze of it

Sur Delhi mein abhi abhi thodi se raahat hui hai garmi se and you came up with such a hot update

Aww dear!! So sweet of you! 🤗 Saawan mein lag gayi aag! 😉

Your pm instantly brought a smile to my face as I knew they are going to have their first kiss .. Already tumne bohot tadpaya tha ..

I know yaar...thoda delay to ho gaya...but finally kiss ho hi gaya! 😃

I so wanted them to have them to wear formals

Naina in red hot saari and sameer in suit ..

For a moment I thought " lo ho gaya kaand " but then realized

This is your sanskari ff all " kaamds " happen in expectedly unexpected " how much I love that story off course this one also in fact all your stories

Hehe haan kaand ke liye Expectedly Unexpected reserved hai! 😃 Hehe...me too wanted them to have their first kiss in formals...😉

Its been 12457890 years ... I've been waiting to see a jealous Sameer .. Its the most wanted thing

I'm so glad you gave us that scene

I wish CVS also show something like this but we don't need to worry when we have writers like you

It was seriously a treat to see Sameer getting so jealous

Thank you so much dear ❤️...sacchi..pata nai show mein jealous Sameer kab milega! 😆

Sameer is seriously waiting eagerly for their honeymoon

This guy can't wait .. Well I don't blame him you left no other option for my poor boy ..opps sorry MAN

Loved this conversation

Naina is going to have a hard time with this grown up man

I would prefer Switzerland for samaina

Me too...Switzerland is a good choice...let's see if I cover their honeymoon here! 😉 That's not going to be easy though...😆 Yup...Sameer is a man now...no longer the innocent guy...but his demands are increasing, yet he respects Naina's comfort level...ab ladka jawan ho gaya hai to honeymoon ke sapne to dekhega hi nai...n he's worried kahin shaadi ke baad bhi Naina mandir hi ghumati rahe?

I can make out from your writing that you seriously love rains

And ya .. You yourself seem a romantic person in real life

Jijaji is lucky

Aww dear...I really, really love rains! ❤️ Deewani hun main baarish ki...isliye wanted their first kiss to be in the rain...n I'm a closet romantic 😉 Naina ki tarah dreamy types...😆 Hehe...tumhare jijaji to lucky hain hi 😉 main bhi hun...wo bhi romantic type hi hain! 😃

Koi kasar chodi hi aapne madam

Baarish red hot saari shirt with open buttons and naina's sexy dance .. Mera Sameer toh bholuram hi hai you

Blame the season

I so wanted them to have their kiss in rains and naina clad in saari ..

Uff I can't explain how much I loved it

You described their kiss so subtly .. It doesn't seem vulgar at all...

It was cute and hot

A very rare combination that only writers like you can bring

Sameer witnessed naina's new side .. A bold side

Well this is just the beginning .. A lot is in stored for Mr Maheshwari.. He just have to wait and watch

❤️ Thanks yaar...your comments always bring a huge smile on my face! I'm truly humbled at the accolades you've heaped upon this update! 😳

BLUE: Me too...I just wrote it at the top! Glad you echo my sentiments! 😃

Ahaan...Mr. Maheshwari is in for a lot of surprises post marriage, once Mrs. Maheshwari sheds all her inhibitions! 😉

The last part of the update was the highlight ..

It was lovely

Take a bow for it

How do you write so well

You and mou are like lifelines of this forum and inspiration for many

I'm also coming soon with my story ...

This time on India forum

Dhanyawaad! 🤗I'm really honoured yaar! I'm glad you liked the last part too! 😳😳

As always waiting for your updates

Love

Laalchi reader

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Sur,

As i keep telling you, and i will keep telling you repeatedly, i love you girl. I don't know how u keep coming up with such beautiful updates. , i don't know why, i feel so connected when it comes to this particular story, my heart feels full and this gives such a pure blissful feeling when reading it. loved the way u penned down the prequel and the sequel now.

Dear Shravya! Pehle to kaan pakad ke sorry for the super late comment! Thank you so much yaar...I can't tell you how many times I would have read this comment already! 😳

The vast difference between the two stories you are writing simultaneously, shows what a gem you are. If you ask me, u should just seriously think about publishing your stories.

By God...itni tareef! Thank you so much yaar...I really feel humbled😳 I wish I could reach that level someday! 😊

I absolutely loved ur update dear, the way sameer notices the minute details when it comes to naina, the red saree, red lipstick, her heels, the kajal, his tie, his formals, the subtle blushing, the strange new emotions emerging with their age, both equally yearning about their first kiss, sameer trying to tame down his harmones, the blazer reminding them of mt.abu, the rain creating the perfect atmosphere for romance, them enjoying being silly n dancing on bollywood tunes, then came the sensuality of it. You have taken care of every subtle nuances till the lead upto kiss.
Thank you dear...I'm glad you liked the detailing part of it...When I started writing, I didn't pay much heed to it...but slowly trying to improve upon that piece! 😳 I just wanted to keep a steady build-up to the kiss...I wanted it to be special...n show the emotions of the couple till the lead up to it! 😊
So subtle, yet so passionate and lit with fire. I loved how you brought up naina in a sensuous avatar here, the kiss i can't describe, it's the detailing here the way sameer slowly pushes her against the tree and kisses her again, then naina being dominant giving into her hearts desire, kudos to you. So much, so much into detailing these little things. It shows how they would be equal partners in everything in future. And how could i forget the jealous sameer, such a treat to watch him getting his share finally..and the way naina still gets jealous about nainital gf is so cute. I loved how they were discussing about going to nainital, you have covered lots of points dear, great way for naina to know sameer's early life n memories before ahmedabad.
Thank you so much dear! 🤗I'm glad you enjoyed the details of the update...I so want Sameer to discuss about his Nainital life with Naina someday...and them to have a confrontation about his girlfriend...he may've just boasted about it, but may have actually had one...but it doesn't matter...all that matters is that he's in love with Naina!😳 And of course, Sameer should get a taste of his own medicine! 😉
And the sindoor scene, it was so unexpected n completely so sameer, for him she is already his wife. The subtle way he shows these things to naina completely gives me the feels. It shows how much thought you put into each scene n line, hatts off to you girl. Please keep coming up with more.
Yup...Sameer knows he's bonded to her for life...yes dear...indeed I put a lot of thought in this update...I just wanted it to special...the thoughts about how to write their first kiss had been there since I was writing the dating phase of Samaina in Love in Mt. Abu...finally decided to postpone it to the sequel! 😳😳 I'm so glad you feel it was worth it! 😊
Thanks alot for the PM love ❤️

Originally posted by: 9211

Finally tge first kiss. .. the most awaited moment!

It was perfect! The emotions hayee.. feels! Ok loving how it is deeply connected with love in mount abu.. it's one of my favorites and i read it time to time again and again

Loving it!

Thank you for the PM !

update soon!

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Absolutely fantastic.. Love how you portrayed the jealousy, to the subtle reassurances of love and then the kiss.
But the best was Sameer filling her hair partition with lipstick making Naina his.

Loved the update and thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: tanya119

Hey, i am here again.

As i said earlier , iam loving the concept that you have adopted.

Its going superb. Each scene was well explained,the emotions that had surfaced whether it was about sameer 's flashback regarding nanu or about the Passion they experienced in the last update, they were brilliantly written and the romance.. Why you ended it? I was craving for more.😆

Anyways! Please continue soon!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Too much rain..😆😆

And shocked at the intensity..☺️

Kya karun yaar...baarish mujhe badi hi romantic lagti hai! 😆

Loved that tie scene.Detailing bang on point.👏 Matlab banda apne praises ke liye bol rahah hai..😆 Kissing the bangles is my aesthetic..Perfectly done.

BOLD: Sameer apne muh miya mithu hai! 😆 I know dear...now that you write this...I remember when in Holding It Together mein Sameer gifts Naina a bangle n kisses it on her arm! 😳 I still remember that update vividly...kya kiss tha wahan!

So both getting jealous and preparing the 'dhuan' to blow at each other..😉 Hmm..dhuan hai to aag to jalegi hi..I loved the author..he is writing crime genre ..ahh!my fav genre.Naina na sahi main aa jaati uske liye.😆

Ahaan...mujhe bhi crime bahot pasand hai! Murder mysteries are my favourite! Tum le lo Ajit ko...😉

So Ajit ko Sameer haara ke dance floor pe kabzaa kar hi liya..okay thank god..bache senses mein the...Nahin to Sameer ka badtameez dil ko sambhalna muskil hai bhai.

Haha...gaana yaad aa gaya! 😉

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Raat ke 10 baze ...Hmm can't blame them for making me yearn for a kiss..😆 Darjeeling,Honeymoon talks and rains...Lethal combo..

Thank you so much dear...😳😳

As I was reading through I was suddenly getting vivid of my eternal muses Rahul and Anjali..Yep..SRK And Kajol in KKHH..The red saree,rains,both drenched ,the lone space,hill station ...uff...

Arey haan yaar...ting da ting ting...ting da ting ting...wow! That was one of my favourite romantic scenes EVER! 😳 Tum SRK ki badi wali fan lagti ho vaise? Haina Minu?

And I was reading through once again..Just the bg of my special music accompanying it..''Burn it up like a bludfire'...Yeah scorching hot that was.

Aww thank you darling!! 🤗

Ab yeh kya kiya..Lipstick wali sindoor..😲 Sur!I know tum romantic ho and Samaina ko leke bahut positive ho but I am not getting good vibes with this scene..Pakka shaadi ko leke gadbad hoga..I am feeling it.

Fingers crossed though.

Hehe...ye to filmy tadka tha...vaise gadbad to hone wali hai inki shaadi mein...kaise I'm yet to write though! 😊 But fikar not, coz Sameer n Naina is story mein to pakka milenge! 😊

Well sorry to reply late.Asli zindagi kisses brutally.

Ahh! So true!

Keep coming with your best and thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu.