Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 29

Originally posted by: Bluebee

Amazing update sur di...loved it!!

Darjeeling main samaina...Hayee yeh soch kar he bohot sara khayal aajate hain dimag main..☺️ but you know i'm too sanskari kuch bhi aesa waisa nahi..😆

Aur yeh sameer naina ko neend main se he kyun jagata hai baar baar? Pata hai jaise he maine yeh padha ke woh naina ke room main aane ko hua...mere dimag ne kya kya soch liya..☺️

Sameer bilkul bhi masoom nirdosh nahi hai...bar bar kiss ka sochta hai...shetaan kanhi ka.

Na jane abhi humare kismat main in Darjeeling ke badiyon main kya kya padhne ko likha hai..😆

Waiting... waiting for next update.

With love,

Ishu

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Aaah you took me on Darjeeling trip with your detailed update of all the places there ... Felt like mai khud wahn ghumne gyi hu ... You did great research ... Update was simply amazing ... The growing comfort between naina and sameer was a treat to read .. bored sameer was soo cute and then suryauday reminded me of their mt abu trip .. it was so nice .. loved ur update

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Wow Sur amazing update dear...so effortlessly you have presented their days together...how he was trying to flirt with her yet making every moment so special for her...this is what love is all about😃

Coming to the competition...both of them being each others support and surely they would both do really well😃

thanks a lot for sharing so much about Darjeeling as i havent been there...so all this was so new to me😃

Lovely update...and thanks for the pm dear😃

Originally posted by: ..swara..

I'm new to this forum

Read all the parts and it's an awesome story 😊

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Sun an amazing update .. loved it .. I love the way you always explain the whole update in such detailing way ..

Everything was so perfect .. atleast for me there was no mistake ..

Sorry for such a short comment

I promise if ill get time so I'll comment in deatil about this update ..

That how much I loved. It

Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Wonderful update Ye Sameer bhi na jub bahar ghumna tha to bichari naina ko sone nahi diya or jub kam karna tha to khud soo raha tha hehe ... the train ride was awesome just loved the flirty sameer your description of Darjeeling was awesome even I loved the shopping part toonaina ko marwadi sameer ki ek zalak mil gai one more thing being a Gujarati I personally liked this line "unhe bhi to pata chale hum Gujarati kya cheez hote hai ok jokes apart they are so caring towards each other i just love them they're so precious hayee... and that sunrise was so beautiful you described it so well yarr naina was about to kiss him bichari bhull gai ki vo log akele nahi hai but kash hote ... ok for now eagerly waiting for the next update please update soon and lots of love to you 😊

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

My dear ... Ek Jawaan ladka aur ek jawaan ladki ko akele Darjeeling bhej dia ...koi oonch neech ho gai toh !! Lol

Ye to Taiji ki line thi! 😉😆 Haha...nahi oonch neech meri dusri story mein ho rahi hai! 😆

The update was as beautiful as the places of Darjeeling ...

And you described the beautiful places so subtly ..

The way you highlighted smallest of things like train ride and shawl .. Is my favorite as these small experienced makes that place memorable ..

You succeeded in making the readers visualize the destination keeping your story intact .. That's what I love about your writing.. You never leave your basic storyline

Aww dear...Dil le lo! 🤗Bas dil mein aata hai aur likh deti hun! 😊 Wo to readers like you give such awesome comments to motivate me, nahi to kabka band kar chuki hoti! 😳 Darjeeling ghumna meri khud ki list mein hai...last year plan kiya tha...but Bengal bandh ne plan pe paani fer diya! 😆 It is actually a very beautiful place...I'm glad I could meld the romance between Samaina with the beauty of the hill station! 😳😳

" aa gaya toh bohot pachtaygi tu " well the antakshri by Mr Maheshwari was so cute ..

He know his naina Better than anybody .. She can't tolerate girls flirting with him and he took the advantage of it

Sameer mein guts toh hai .. Giving his charming smile to those girls in front of naina ... His this nature can land him big trouble someday ..

Haha...inspired by the song...mere sapno ki rani kab aayegi tu...wali train journey in Darjeeling! 😆Hehe...nah...use pta hai Naina usse gussa hogi lekin fir maan jayegi...guys like him like to tease their gfs a lot (experience counts here 😆😉)

" aur sajo vaise hi self control ki band baji padi hai "

Lol poor sameer already trying so very hard to control and here naina came in her Menka avatar .. Loved this line

The little things you highlighted like sameer is all charged up and dud not feel sleepy at all when it comes to roaming around and can become super lazy when their us some work to do

My favorite line was Naina feeling upset and then happy about having an hyper and overactive boyfriend

I loved it

Hehe...ye ek hi Sameer ke do pehlu hain...if he loves something, wo nind bhul jata hai...lekin jaise hi use kuch aisa karna pade jisme he's not interested, to use nind aane lagti hai...he wanted to explore Darjeeling, but akele nahi...Naina ke haath mein haath daal ke...ab ladka 20 saal ka gabru jawan ho gaya hai...kiss karne ka man to karega hi...man mein to aur bhi kayi baatein hongi, lekin kiss to kare pehle! 😉

Sameer was literally bored throughout the function .. I could so relate to that .. And their Naina was not willing to move after having lunch also

" businessman in making " I love these small things you gave in your update ..

Thank you so much dear...just wanted to highlight certain traits they've innate n some they've developed as a result of their grooming now! 😳

Naina is such a sleepy head .. And sameer was anything but sleepy .. Well great combo

My gutter mind got activated seeing sameer not moving before waking her up .. ( you know what I mean )

Haha...I perfectly know what you mean dear...Sameer bhi Naina ko wahi realize karwa raha tha...tabhi to chup chap tayyar hoke aa gayi bahar! 😆

The way you described the sunrise and the place .. You made it soo easy for me to picturize it in my head

Aww dear! I'm elated at this line of yours! 😊

And the best part was Naina was willing to take a step ahead in their relationship .. I so wish that they were alone but..

Yup...kahan Sameer control kar raha tha...yahan to madam hi control kho baithi! 😳 Sach to ye hai ki Naina too wants to kiss him as much as he wants to kiss her...bas sharma rahi hai! 😆

Now I really can't wait to see the magical moment

Waiting for the updates

Your story always brings a smile on my face

BOLD: Dear, kaash main tumhe aise hi khush karti rahu aage bhi! 🤗 I hope I'm able to make the special first magical for you all! 😳

Love

Laalchi reader

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

Can I ask you a question dear?

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Part 2 sect 2

Sur di hats off to u itni detailing of darjeeling trip loved it 🤗

Naina bechari so nhi paa rhi thik se sameer kya khakr gaya tha itni energy oh lgta hai naina k bnaye paranthe abhi tk kaam kr rhe hai😉

Sameer k control ki band baji padi hai ne wah beta band toh ab lgta hai bajana pdega tumhari or naina ki shaadi k liye 😆

Sameer takes full enjoyment of naina being jealous and possesive for him😎

Momos hayee mere fav hai i love it upar se vo tikhi vali red chutney

Sam ki takkar ka koi mil gaya😳yippie

I m missing shayar sam in the show but u gave thanks for that😛