Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 28

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you dear Prizi! 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sun an amazing update .. loved it .. I love the way you always explain the whole update in such detailing way ..
Everything was so perfect .. atleast for me there was no mistake ..

Sorry for such a short comment

I promise if ill get time so I'll comment in deatil about this update ..
That how much I loved. It

Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful update Ye Sameer bhi na jub bahar ghumna tha to bichari naina ko sone nahi diya or jub kam karna tha to khud soo raha tha hehe ... the train ride was awesome just loved the flirty sameer your description of Darjeeling was awesome even I loved the shopping part toonaina ko marwadi sameer ki ek zalak mil gai one more thing being a Gujarati I personally liked this line "unhe bhi to pata chale hum Gujarati kya cheez hote hai ok jokes apart they are so caring towards each other i just love them they're so precious hayee... and that sunrise was so beautiful you described it so well yarr naina was about to kiss him bichari bhull gai ki vo log akele nahi hai but kash hote ... ok for now eagerly waiting for the next update please update soon and lots of love to you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Sur!My Darling! 🤗

Khub sundar lekha.👏👏 Thank you darling for keeping up my request and taking me back to the place which has been a great inspiration and muse for all my stories.Can see how much pain you have taken to bring the authenticity.Hats off to you.👍🏼
🤗 I'm glad Minu dear that I could live upto your expectations...haan research to kiya maine...thoda bahot last year ki trip planning ka bhi experience kaam aaya...isi bahane maine bhi Darjeeling ghum liya Samaina ke sath 😆 Waah, to Darjeeling is your inspiration dear!! 😳👏

The train ride at first was so much fun.I know how boring it gets after some time without a perfect partner to chit chat or click photos or as in Sameer's case --flirt.😆 My mom was fuming the way Naina was,with smoldering gazes as my father was busy chatting happily with some ladies.Boys will be boys.men will be men...
Haha...that's true yaar...ladke nahi sudharte 😆 Tumhari to yaadein taaza ho gayi...😊
Aye!Sam beta ki control gayi pahad ke niche..Can see from where the desperation to fuse stemmed from..
Haha ek to bechara kabse mauka dhund raha hai kiss karne ka...par inke kiss mein bhi hit n miss ho raha hai 😆Upar se Naina saj sawar ke aa rahi hai!

And this reminds me of the two tea cups they shared.Standing on the road looking away at lush green tea fields and sipping the tea..Heaven can be traded for such experience and I absolutely loved how you coupled this with the care and concern Sam had for Naina.Touchwood.
Aww dear...baarish me bheegte chai ke bagaan...and garam garam kadak Darjeeling ki chai with the person you love...😳 Perfect na...n Sameer knew she was sleepy...isliye uske bolne se pehle chai pesh kar di! 😊
Batasia loop inclusion was really a nice touch.And Sameer dreamily waved back at girls...😆 Iss ladke ka halal nahin hua..Thank god.
Hehe Darjeeling n Toy train without Batasia loop adhura tha, isliye add kar diya 😃 Hehe...full mood mein hai ladka...soch raha tha Naina ko feel karwaunga ki tum mujhe kiss nahi dogi to aur options dhundu kya? 😉 Pit jayega ek din aise toh. 😆

And Chowrasta shopping..The curios and artifacts shopping was lit and that marwadi touch of business man in making was the icing on cake.Yeah lots of bargaining do take place and Naina did shopping for full khandan..😃 I loved how she brought the tou for Pralay..Attempts to have gift for everyone is the sweetest thing ever
Yes dear, Pralay hai to chota bhai na Naina ka...taiji kaisi bhi hon! Hehe, just wanted to show the marwadi side of Sameer, n ab he's helping Nanu in business too na...😆

And trust me as I realised what the update is all about my eyes wandered off though against my will for the Tiger Hill word.Then I realised you have kept it Observatory Hill keeping Chowrasta in mind.Tiger Hill is far and definitely they could not have gotten there without planning.Nice research and thought.👏👏
Thank you so much dear...haan Tiger Hill thoda door padta so I searched for some alternatives. And because it was rainy season, it's generally difficult to have a cloud free sky...n that's why Sameer had to wake Naina up so early in the morning! 😳

And the Mahakal Mandir made me remember the funniest incident.My Chacha Chachi were recently married and were on their honeymoon to Darjeeling..But a planning fallacy had happened.The Karvachauth Version in our state is known as 'Savitri Vrat'.Ladies do pooja in Devi temples with saris as offering.My Chachaji was like don't do pooja we don't know anything of the place and my Chachi was adament because it was her first Vrat after marriage.So it happened that my Chachaji went to temple to offer the sari as offering because gents line at Kali temple was thin.
And my Chachaji offered the Sari and the Priest asked for 'Kali?" Then my Chachaji said no for 'Milii'' (Thats my Chachiji's nick name.)😆😆
The priest was confused for what to do with the saree and finally did some pooja and returned it to my Chachaji..Whenever we have the discussion about saris and the vrat ..we end up rofling on floor.🤣
Haha...again a personal memory...sari for Milee not Kali...kya karte hain ladke haha 😆

And your mention did bring that memory back and I was really happy to see Sameer at the temple praying though not elaborately.That was a beautiful touch.
Yup, Sameer prays now, but Naina ki tarah nahi 😆
The literature festival was true to its portrayal.How boring they get around lunch time.But yeah!speakers with captivating presence can hold attention for long.Naina and Sameer being eloquent could mete out perfect justice to their presentations.
Haha...sahi mein yaar...thode time baad sab boring hone lagta hai...though I've never attended any such fest before, but I'm glad I could portray it a bit realistically! 😊 Aur Sameer n Naina to hero-heroine hain...wo to best honge hi 😆

Thank you darling for bringing back my fondest memories,fondest place and fondest food--Momos..yeah any one can kidnap me by giving me a plate ful of steaming momos..😆
Ohh Minu...I too love Momos...hill stations pe jake momos, maggie n soups...awesome combo na...😆
No doubt this is my fondest chapter.❤️
Thank you so much Minu...I'm so glad you loved this chapter!

Eagerly waiting for the next.Thanks for the PM and mention.

With love-
Minu.



Hey Minu...
My replies in BOLD. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Aww dear Aaisha! 😳 Koi na dear! Padhai comes first! 😊
Ohh the part - Nanu and Sameer ka bond...I really miss Nanu on the show too...and this is life yaar...we take it for granted, but time never waits for us. 😕 But yes, the love you harboured for someone doesn't die even if the person leaves you forever! Same is the case with Sameer...he really wanted his Nanu by his side on the biggest day of his life. Poor soul. Yes, I wanted Nanu to relax knowing Sameer is taken care of now. And he is leaving him in safe hands. Vishakha wasn't the right one, but Naina is. Funny how sometimes our blood relations fail us, yet those who we meet by chance stand by us in all adversities of life.
I agree to each and every word of yours. No one can take Nanu's place in Sameer's life. He always guided him towards the right path. Such a charming person he was. And a very adorable grandparent who bbelieved in making his child understand his mistakes and rectify them rather than punishing him. Pata. nahi vishakha aunty me nanu ke gun kyu ni aaye. And you are right, many a times we take people for granted and when we realize their worth, they are gone forever. We should be a little more considerate. And you are so right about Naina. Nanu knew sameer is in safe hands that's why he could die peacefully. Only for once I wanted naina to meet nanu in the show after Samaina accepted each other. The scene would have been lit.


Naina ko thoda bahot pata hai, but baaki sab details Sameer is going to clear soon! But shaadi to ho pehle inki! 😆 True yaar...Samaina has made us truly mad! BTW...I'm waiting for Suhana Safar...somehow a huge smile spreads across my face whenever I read that story of yours! 😳😳
Haha, theek didi sb wait kr rhe hn, naina ke sath sath hm b seekhenge details.
Aww that's so sweet. Maine update kr diya hai😳

Love
Sur

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Posted: 7 years ago
My dear ... Ek Jawaan ladka aur ek jawaan ladki ko akele Darjeeling bhej dia ...koi oonch neech ho gai toh !! Lol
The update was as beautiful as the places of Darjeeling ...
And you described the beautiful places so subtly ..
The way you highlighted smallest of things like train ride and shawl .. Is my favorite as these small experienced makes that place memorable ..
You succeeded in making the readers visualize the destination keeping your story intact .. That's what I love about your writing.. You never leave your basic storyline

" aa gaya toh bohot pachtaygi tu " well the antakshri by Mr Maheshwari was so cute ..
He know his naina Better than anybody .. She can't tolerate girls flirting with him and he took the advantage of it
Sameer mein guts toh hai .. Giving his charming smile to those girls in front of naina ... His this nature can land him big trouble someday ..

" aur sajo vaise hi self control ki band baji padi hai "
Lol poor sameer already trying so very hard to control and here naina came in her Menka avatar .. Loved this line
The little things you highlighted like sameer is all charged up and dud not feel sleepy at all when it comes to roaming around and can become super lazy when their us some work to do
My favorite line was Naina feeling upset and then happy about having an hyper and overactive boyfriend
I loved it

Sameer was literally bored throughout the function .. I could so relate to that .. And their Naina was not willing to move after having lunch also
" businessman in making " I love these small things you gave in your update ..

Naina is such a sleepy head .. And sameer was anything but sleepy .. Well great combo
My gutter mind got activated seeing sameer not moving before waking her up .. ( you know what I mean )

The way you described the sunrise and the place .. You made it soo easy for me to picturize it in my head
And the best part was Naina was willing to take a step ahead in their relationship .. I so wish that they were alone but..

Now I really can't wait to see the magical moment
Waiting for the updates
Your story always brings a smile on my face

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 2 sect 2
Sur di hats off to u itni detailing of darjeeling trip loved it 🤗
Naina bechari so nhi paa rhi thik se sameer kya khakr gaya tha itni energy oh lgta hai naina k bnaye paranthe abhi tk kaam kr rhe hai😉
Sameer k control ki band baji padi hai ne wah beta band toh ab lgta hai bajana pdega tumhari or naina ki shaadi k liye 😆
Sameer takes full enjoyment of naina being jealous and possesive for him😎
Momos hayee mere fav hai i love it upar se vo tikhi vali red chutney
Sam ki takkar ka koi mil gaya😳yippie
I m missing shayar sam in the show but u gave thanks for that😛


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Posted: 7 years ago

Fir se kaan pakad ke sorry.. I know, ab main har baar late ho rahi hun

As usual a wonderful update dear.. Loved it!! So this update is totally dedicated to Darjeeling.. 😃

Sameer didn't allow her for rest.. Bechari safar se thaki hogi.. Hyperactive boyfriend 😆

Aise kyun saja rahi ho Naina ko, bechare sameer ka control chhut raha hai.. Aur waise bhi ye innocent wali story hai na 😉

Chai Naina ki nind ke liye.. BTW this is best formula, main meri mummy se din mein 3-4 baar chai ke liye bolti hun.. and coffee for headache.. I still don't know how to make tea, nahi nahi baki sab aata hai sirf chai hi nahi aati😆

Sameer was in the mood, he was singing.. If Naina is with him then obviously it will happen na..

Those girls were looking at Sameer and Naina's jealousy was really funny.. Really enjoyed that scene 😛

Again Sameer's bargaining was also funny part 😆, he's pretty rich fir bhi.. Vaise mujhe bargaining bilkul bhi nahi aati, matlab jo price bolte hai wo main de deti hun

Sameer is also self obsessed like Randeep, he was adoring himself..

Naina is so bholi, she didn't know about Momo's.. He will teach everything to her after their marriage

"main aur meri maina", again reminded me Randeep..

I was thinking that, both have come here for the competition.. I'm glad that Naina didn't forget about the competition 😆

I can fully understand Sameer's situation here.. As a management student, I had to attend several seminars.. Sometimes it was interesting and sometimes boring..

Sweetest part of that update that, he bought shawl for his Mom and for Preeti too 😊

In this update, dialogues were super cute.. Sab likte baitungi to bohot lines ho jayenge to tum samjh jao 😳

I'm really sorry dear .. When I was reading this story, I wasn't in a good mood, so couldn't concentrate on story.. I almost took more than 3 hours to read this one, again sorry dear.. Jab mood achha ho jayega toh fir se padhungi, jo samjh aa gaya uspe comment kar diya.. Even I couldn't understand the para which started from 22nd July, so uske liye kuch bhi nahi likh payi.. Don't get me wrong dear but I'm not really happy in these days, sirf tumhare hi story ke saath aisa nahi hua Mou ke story ke saath bhi aisa hi hua tha.. Hope you will understand

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Surbhi, this was such a romantic update

Sameer ko kya problem h Naina ki neend se😆 subah subah hi ghumna h is pagal ko.. But phir wo sunrise it was worth it!!

I found competition part kinda funny.. Sameer ko neend aa rhi thi.. Naina ko saree mein dekh k bhi neend nhi udi😉

Inse zyada nervous to main hi rhi thi.. Sahi mein Sameer ko situation samajh aa rhi thi

Please update asap

Hey Anjali!
Thank you so much dear! 🤗
Hehe...Naina ko neend aa rahi hoti hai lekin Sameer ko ghumna pasand hai...n wai toh...use pata tha wo sunrise rare hai baarish ke mausam mein...n he didn't want Naina to miss it! 😳
Competition aur padhai ke maamle mein Sameer ko khas interest hai nahi...to nind aa rahi thi! 😉 Hehe...Naina ko saree mein dekh ke explore to kar raha tha banda! 😆 Kitni low hai blouse ki neckline n all! 😆
Aww dear...I'm glad you could relate to Sameer n Naina in the competition...par wo gaana hai na- har ik toofan ka hum karenge saamna...bas ik zara saath ho tera...tere to hain hum...kabse sanam! 😳
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Haaye!!!

Kya update tha Sur di
Aww such a cute one
Sameer ka dhyan toh kiss pe hi hain...haaye Raam
Bechara tadap raha hain
Update soon Sur di and thank you so much for PM

Hey dear Aishwarya! 😳
Thank you so much...ye cute wala romance bhi pasand aaya tumko..I'm so happy! 😃 Hehe...Sameer ka pura focus kiss pe hai...ab bechara itne saal se rok ke baitha hai khud ko...aur ab to sama hai suhana suhana...aur dono Darjeeling mein akele hain! 😉 Uski tadap next update mein khatam bhi hogi aur badhegi bhi! 😆
Love
Sur

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