Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG this was absolutely beautiful update
loved it so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update Sur!
Your description of Darjeeling and the train ride was amazing. It had just the right amount of details to help the reader visualise the setting and at the same time keeping the focus on the story.

Loved reading their shopping and eating out experience. Naina was getting to see a different side of Sameer and throughly enjoying it. And then the sunrise was just too good. It brought back some awesome memories from the show too :)

They supporting each other and boosting the confidence for the presentation felt so soothing. They both instinctively know how to bring out the best in each other.

Waiting for the kiss now! Hum sub bhi Naina ki tarah aakhe bund karke baith jaate hai ;)


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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb, excellent writings. Keep ready the next part fast. I really landed to Darjeeling with Samaina in ur story. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I know, I know, I am extremely late and I give you all the rights to be angry at me. 😭
But the amount of stories which are on pending mode😲 Kya karun di, I don't even get enough time to watch Yeh Un Dinon Ki Baat Hai during weekdays and that results in binging it all on weekend! I know, you will understand but still, I am really sorry.

Cheers Sur di, this update was bliss, seriously! 😳 I am a sucker for all these detailings especially because I get stuck when I have to detail out surroundings and I would say, you have done it excellentlyšŸ‘ If a stranger read this chapter, I am pretty sure they would have thought you did visit Darjeeling! Just with a mere amount of researchšŸ‘

These were the rare times when she regretted having a hyper-active boyfriend.
Hahhaa...you reminded me of myself! I am hyper too when I go travelling, I act like the places are going to get destroyed if I don't go there that particular day itselfšŸ˜†

Saying this for a hundredth time, aapki aur Mou di's ke stories ke character sketch of the lead gives me boyfriend goalsšŸ˜‰
Sameer is so caring and I am in love with him! Oops, di? Aap Naina se mat kehne meri feelings ke baare meinšŸ˜†

Your love for rains can be very well seen in your choices for the background😳
It's either heavily raining or drizzling, no clear sky...It's sometimes get irritating during mornings but then again, it really sets the mood.
I really want Samaina to have rain romance, I really loved when Naina and Sameer's argument after she accused him of being the paper chor, the chemistry was litā¤ļø

šŸ˜†Really! Naina's different ways to express her jealousy is amazing, the way she put his hand back on her shoulders, her eyes hardening with possessiveness, I could visualise it whole

Haaye, he was buying shawls for his Saaliji too, that's adorable!
Bargaining, hahahahha! That cracked me up so badly, there's one person in our family who's expert at it and thats my dad in my casešŸ˜†
Sabr koot koot ke bari hai Sameer mein, haina Sur di?šŸ˜‰

There are two songs which I describe romance with- Abhi na jao chodkar ke dil abhi bara nahin and Aaj jane ki zid na karo! I was so happy when you used this song to stop a bad habit...I would be reminded of you now whenever I hear Abhi na jao...😳

You are very much right about the street vendors, I hate it when I see people bargaining with them. They do not have a permanent salary, the money we give is how they earn and the same people keep mum in big malls which is irritating!

Momos are yummy and Maggi is double yum, it had been ages since I have eaten it! I like my noodles spicy to the extent where it makes my eyes wateršŸ˜›
And that maina, haaye reminded me of AshDeep!

Sameer is damn funny, what is he doing at 3? Does spots to visit comes to his mind in his dream or what?šŸ˜† Funny guy!

The sunrise and the Samaina was so pleasing to read, dear Sur di! Beautiful description! Reminded me of the Mount Abu trip..
Sameer is finally aware in every form that the right time to kiss has arrived and that makes my insides flutter with excitement, yet to read the next one.
I don't consume beverages at all, drink it only when I have to stay late at night or too sleepy to function in the mornings!
But true, trying out new drinks from other places is a fun process 😳

I am able to relate to your Sameer a little too much!šŸ˜† Sleep hum dono ko pyaari jo hai...!

Perfume ka mention and the saree does things to Sammy boy isn't it? And when something happens to him, I get excited. šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
Sameer in formals is a treat toošŸ˜‰
I am loving it when you mention the traits of SJM, which is ready to come out...😳True Naina!

Literary competitions was true on how it would be, you get bored after a while as they go on and on...šŸ¤”

Thank you so much for mentioning the visits in temple, I wanted them too for two reasons- First, it's always good to seek blessings before you do something (read- the kissšŸ˜‰) and second, temples did play an integral part of their love story, the temple dates

Their confidence and faith on each other, they will surely excel if they have each other's back! Always.😳
When I visit Darjeeling in the future, this chapter and you would be the inspiration behind it, I would come back to this chapter again and again...šŸ¤—
I am loving the pace Sur di!

Hopefully I can read the next one too soon😳
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 1 sect 2
Sur di darjeeling bhej rhe ho vo bhi 2nd year me bacche hai koi galti na krde9šŸ˜†
Jokes apart
This was a adorable chapter 😳
Arjun bhaiya chinta mt karo naina sameer ki dil jaan jigar sb haišŸ˜‰
Naina ne aloo k paranthe bnaye mujhe sunlr bhookh lg gayi ab mai mummy se bolungi ki aaj breakfst me aloo paranthe bnayešŸ˜†
Sameer zoru ka gulaam 🤣vo toh tumhr banna padega sam babušŸ˜†
Shruti is so cutešŸ˜›
Elderly couple jawaani yaad aagyi šŸ˜†
Lst scene was adorable loved itā¤ļø

Edited by Komalp1391 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sur!My Darling! šŸ¤—
Khub sundar lekha.šŸ‘šŸ‘ Thank you darling for keeping up my request and taking me back to the place which has been a great inspiration and muse for all my stories.Can see how much pain you have taken to bring the authenticity.Hats off to you.šŸ‘šŸ¼

The train ride at first was so much fun.I know how boring it gets after some time without a perfect partner to chit chat or click photos or as in Sameer's case --flirt.šŸ˜† My mom was fuming the way Naina was,with smoldering gazes as my father was busy chatting happily with some ladies.Boys will be boys.men will be men...
Aye!Sam beta ki control gayi pahad ke niche..Can see from where the desperation to fuse stemmed from..

And this reminds me of the two tea cups they shared.Standing on the road looking away at lush green tea fields and sipping the tea..Heaven can be traded for such experience and I absolutely loved how you coupled this with the care and concern Sam had for Naina.Touchwood.

Batasia loop inclusion was really a nice touch.And Sameer dreamily waved back at girls...šŸ˜† Iss ladke ka halal nahin hua..Thank god.

And Chowrasta shopping..The curios and artifacts shopping was lit and that marwadi touch of business man in making was the icing on cake.Yeah lots of bargaining do take place and Naina did shopping for full khandan..😃 I loved how she brought the tou for Pralay..Attempts to have gift for everyone is the sweetest thing ever

And trust me as I realised what the update is all about my eyes wandered off though against my will for the Tiger Hill word.Then I realised you have kept it Observatory Hill keeping Chowrasta in mind.Tiger Hill is far and definitely they could not have gotten there without planning.Nice research and thought.šŸ‘šŸ‘

And the Mahakal Mandir made me remember the funniest incident.My Chacha Chachi were recently married and were on their honeymoon to Darjeeling..But a planning fallacy had happened.The Karvachauth Version in our state is known as 'Savitri Vrat'.Ladies do pooja in Devi temples with saris as offering.My Chachaji was like don't do pooja we don't know anything of the place and my Chachi was adament because it was her first Vrat after marriage.So it happened that my Chachaji went to temple to offer the sari as offering because gents line at Kali temple was thin.
And my Chachaji offered the Sari and the Priest asked for 'Kali?" Then my Chachaji said no for 'Milii'' (Thats my Chachiji's nick name.)šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
The priest was confused for what to do with the saree and finally did some pooja and returned it to my Chachaji..Whenever we have the discussion about saris and the vrat ..we end up rofling on floor.🤣

And your mention did bring that memory back and I was really happy to see Sameer at the temple praying though not elaborately.That was a beautiful touch.

The literature festival was true to its portrayal.How boring they get around lunch time.But yeah!speakers with captivating presence can hold attention for long.Naina and Sameer being eloquent could mete out perfect justice to their presentations.

Thank you darling for bringing back my fondest memories,fondest place and fondest food--Momos..yeah any one can kidnap me by giving me a plate ful of steaming momos..šŸ˜†

No doubt this is my fondest chapter.ā¤ļø

Eagerly waiting for the next.Thanks for the PM and mention.

With love-
Minu.



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Posted: 7 years ago
Surbhi, this was such a romantic update
Sameer ko kya problem h Naina ki neend sešŸ˜† subah subah hi ghumna h is pagal ko.. But phir wo sunrise it was worth it!!

I found competition part kinda funny.. Sameer ko neend aa rhi thi.. Naina ko saree mein dekh k bhi neend nhi udišŸ˜‰

Inse zyada nervous to main hi rhi thi.. Sahi mein Sameer ko situation samajh aa rhi thi

Please update asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
Haaye!!!
Kya update tha Sur di
Aww such a cute one
Sameer ka dhyan toh kiss pe hi hain...haaye Raam
Bechara tadap raha hain
Update soon Sur di and thank you so much for PM

Edited by Sameerkideewani - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update sur di...loved it!!
Darjeeling main samaina...Hayee yeh soch kar he bohot sara khayal aajate hain dimag main..ā˜ŗļø but you know i'm too sanskari kuch bhi aesa waisa nahi..šŸ˜†
Aur yeh sameer naina ko neend main se he kyun jagata hai baar baar? Pata hai jaise he maine yeh padha ke woh naina ke room main aane ko hua...mere dimag ne kya kya soch liya..ā˜ŗļø

Sameer bilkul bhi masoom nirdosh nahi hai...bar bar kiss ka sochta hai...shetaan kanhi ka.
Na jane abhi humare kismat main in Darjeeling ke badiyon main kya kya padhne ko likha hai..šŸ˜†
Waiting... waiting for next update.

With love,
Ishu
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aaah you took me on Darjeeling trip with your detailed update of all the places there ... Felt like mai khud wahn ghumne gyi hu ... You did great research ... Update was simply amazing ... The growing comfort between naina and sameer was a treat to read .. bored sameer was soo cute and then suryauday reminded me of their mt abu trip .. it was so nice .. loved ur update

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