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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hi Simi!! 😃🤗 Dil le lo...elated to see you could relate to the emotions n loved the bonding between the brothers n Sam with his mother...haan Prehan mein definitely Preeti ko pehla kadam uthana padega...Timetable ko to time nai hoga pyaar ke liye...out of schedule na...I can so imagine...Preeti saying Rohan...movie dekhne chalte hain DDLJ...shahrukh ki nayi movie aayi hai...n Rohan is like nai Preeti abhi mere juice ka time hai 🤣
Arey I'm so happy that I was able to fulfill all your wishes till now...aur koi muraad ho to bata dena...would try to pen something down on it too if you like...thanks for the lovely comments as always dear 😳😳

thats very sweet of you dear... Filhaal toh i'm waiting for ur love in mt. Abu sequel... I'm sure it will be worth the wait..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Mujhe pata hai Sur danda leke mujhe marne nikli hogi..Ittni late kar di reply karne mein..😆

Okay kan pakad ke 'Sorry' in Sameer style.So late ke liye compensation--each part ka ache se analysis.😳

Part-1

Words are a pretext. It is the inner bond that draws one person to another, not words..

Rohan seemed such a sensible guy to understand an always 'misunderstood' person.Loved how you projected his sensibility and more curiousity.His sobs could make him realize that he has a pounding heart unlike what he had been always projected in a bad light.
Those PCO calls..to be fully known and truly loved is, well, a lot like being loved by God. It is what we need more than anything. It liberates us from pretense, humbles us out of our self-righteousness, and fortifies us for any difficulty life can throw at us.

They both need liberation and those phone calls provided that solace and liberty.

That Deepika -Sameer scene bowled me over..Such a cute scene.😳

Mr.Timetable wanting to throw the timetable for toss fr listening about Bhai-Bhabi's prem kahaani..Dadi se pitega ek din 😆

Part-2

A bond between souls is ancient - older than the planet...

Though Rohan and Sameer are not bonded biologically but they bonded soulfully over the beautiful foundation of 'Love'.
The way he comforted his brother and made plans for the two parched souls to finally meet it showed that love is only malady and love is only remedy.
That mandir scene was much required for everyone to know how the flamboyant Sameer Maheshwari has eveolved to Sameer Jayprakash Maheshwari.

Finally Naina and Sameer meet and that has been portrayed so beautifully---
If you promise to love, trust, respect, support and stand by someone no matter what, do not just speak those words when times are good. Live those words when challenges arise. The stronger the love and commitment, the more unbreakable the bond. United hearts will never be easily divided...

The Preeti blackmailing Arjun was a good one ..bechara Arjun I pity him..And the friendship shown is the beautiful aspect of this update..

All in all I loved how you brought this aspect ---
Connecting with someone is not necessarily a bond with a significant other, or even a friend, but can be the indefinable - perhaps the rarest and most precious thing in life to find at all.

So finally commented.😃

Keep coming with more and thanks for the PM.

With Love-
Minu.


Arey dear Minu!!! Ab Sameer style me sorry bologi to maaf to karna hi padega...hum par Naina jaisa control nai hai na 😉 But seriously yaar...maafi ki kya zarurat...😊 us hisab se to tum buldozer leke mere peeche bhaagogi...I'm not finding time to write or to participate in the forum as actively as I would like to...aur haan murder mysteries are my favourite...so Keshav ki story maine abhi tak padhi nahi hai...ache se chatkare le leke weekend pe padhungi 😆😆 Bas usme tum jaldi jaldi update karna kyunki suspense bardasht nai hota mujhse 😆😆
And thank you so much for the comments yaar! Love is the only malady and love is the only remedy...such true words! Dard bhi pyaar hai...dawa bhi pyaar hai...Tumne itne detail me padha aur detail me analysis kiya yaar...loved each of ur comments! 😳😳
Lots n lots of Love
Sur😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic567

thats very sweet of you dear... Filhaal toh i'm waiting for ur love in mt. Abu sequel... I'm sure it will be worth the wait..😊


Pakka yaar...sach bolun to not finding enough time to write...want to get ahead in the story thoda taaki jaldi jaldi updates bhi de paun...is weekend pe try karti hun...so that next weekend se I can start with that one too...n thanks for the faith in the story yaar 😳😳 Hope I can keep you interested in the sequel too!
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Posted: 7 years ago
How adorable - from your words to the ears of the CVS.. would be so nice to see this...
thank you for sharing such a lovely story!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suadvani

How adorable - from your words to the ears of the CVS.. would be so nice to see this...

thank you for sharing such a lovely story!


Aww thank you so much Suadvani! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww... This was adorable. Kaash aisa ho show mein bhi.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awww... This was adorable. Kaash aisa ho show mein bhi.

Thanks dear!!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Read Part 2 . Loved it !! I wish hamare show mein , Rohan is helpful. How I wish to see two love stories progressing. Sameer - Naina and Rohan - Preethi...lord alone knows when it will start. How much we need to wait.

You are talented , so never stop penning down your stories...eagerly waiting for ur next story.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Read Part 2 . Loved it !! I wish hamare show mein , Rohan is helpful. How I wish to see two love stories progressing. Sameer - Naina and Rohan - Preethi...lord alone knows when it will start. How much we need to wait.

You are talented , so never stop penning down your stories...eagerly waiting for ur next story.

Hi dear!!! Thank you so much dear!!🤗 Happy to see a writer like you enjoys my stories...when are we getting a story from you next? 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
The End? What do you mean the end? No Way Jose!
Seriously, Surbhi don't do that to my poor little heart! Part 2 was so very amazing! *overwhelmed with emotions, so sending hugs to you*🤗🤗

I'm going to have to read this story all over again. Dil khush kar ditta tussi😳Sameer's monologue with himself when he runs into Rakesh at the school was hilarious! He was so completely baffled, I mean who would have thought naye school ki shuruat us loudspeaker se hogi!😆
I loved the team work between Rohan-MunDit-Preeti-Shefali, such good friends they are! And do I love Shefali or what? Thanks to her, Arjun is finally straightening up! Jab khud par beeti tab samajh aaya. And Chachaji is the sweetest.

Sameer and Preeti's usual jeeja-saali camarederie was so much fun. And Rohan stole Pandit's lines, man! Par chaddo, I'm too happy to object to anything that guy does, especially since he's put together the whole plan! It was a real good idea to get everybody to Delhi and for them to have a re-union.

But, I really wanna read about Sameer and Naina's dates in Delhi. India gate, Chandni Chowk, shopping from the street-hawkers, enjoying some chaat by the road side! Can't stop my imagination at this point. C'mon man, for a talented writer like you, there's so much potential right there!And then there's the other couples too! I'd love to see how Preeti handles her new found love interest. Bas Swati and Shefail ki kami reh gayi, but there was absolutely no way to get them on board as well. I understand!

Part 2 was the last thing I read before going to bed, tonight! And you managed to put a smile on my face so big, it actually hurts!😆

Toh please socho socho, contemplate on giving this story a few more parts!

PS- Sorry for the very crude and probably a little incoherent comment but I'm too happy to make sense of anything right now, thanks to you. Toh hopefully samajh aajaye😆

Chalo, let me go read both the parts again!


Edited by -Villete- - 7 years ago

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